Creature Suggestion: Whail (Artwork is up!)

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Do you like the Whail?




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jello • 31 December 2016 at 11:45 PM

#CreatureSuggestion

#Whail #WDAC #WhaleRights


Name
Whail

About Whail eggs
The midnight blue egg shimmers in the moonlight. A single teardrop remains evident on the egg, gleaming with the egg. It consistently rains near the egg, radiating a gloomy feel. The egg commonly appears upon saddening events, such as funerals. In this case, the Whail is often kept in remembrance of the loved one. The SARC has tried to figure out how the tear remains on the egg, but upon confiscation an uproar among citizens about the humane factor in this operation, thus preventing further knowledge about the egg.

More about the Whail
Upon hatching, the baby Whail cries, but it is a memorable event. The shell remains its consolidation and comfort. Throughout its life, the Whail lets out a single, solemn, mournful cry at the sight of dusk. Wild families of Whail comfort their siblings by crying with them in times of sadness. At the hatching of a newborn, they give a song similar to a whale's call. If a human catches the sound of the song, they will cry with joy and the memory will stick with them forever.


Artwork Amazingly done by @anthesia, she rocks!
http://i.imgur.com/pK8NEqT.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/08qab9j.jpg - egg
http://i.imgur.com/cWoTozL.jpg - 1
http://i.imgur.com/25DaVzB.jpg - last

Please make this a November or January Creature if you can!

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@jellifysh,b it is amazing! ♡ Love it!

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senkou • 1 January 2017 at 8:28 AM

@jellifysh

Would there happen to be any art to go with this suggestion? It sounds good but I'd really ❤️ to see it! 😊

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jello • 1 January 2017 at 10:19 AM

@wild_wonders I've got @amthesia and @spiritkeeper5 drawing the drafts right now!

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@jellifysh,

this sounds cool! 😃

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jello • 1 January 2017 at 10:29 AM

@demons aww, thanks!

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summer99318 • 1 January 2017 at 11:47 AM

I only found a couple errors considering grammar and spelling, in the part "more about this creature," in the last two lines, you said, "if a human catches sound of the song, they will cry in joy and the memory will stick with them forever." I think maybe you should change "catches sound of the song" to "catches the sound of the song." As well as, "cry in joy" to "cry with joy" Also, you said, "At the hatching of a newborn, they give a song similar to a whale's." I think that you should change this to, "At the hatching of a newborn, they sing a song similar to a whale's call," or something similar to this. It's your choice, or if I misunderstood something in these I'm sorry. Overall though, this sounds amazing. I love the language and description you used, as well as the idea itself. Can you ping me if you get the art so I can see?
@jellifysh

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ethereality • 1 January 2017 at 12:44 PM

@jellifysh YAY WHALE RIGHTS -- HOPEFULLY WE GET A WHALE DRAGON IN CRW

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jello • 1 January 2017 at 2:14 PM

@summer99318 thank you so much! I'll get to editing as soon as I can.

@motivecat yeah, trying to make the world a better place.

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senkou • 1 January 2017 at 8:44 PM

@jellifysh

Oh cool! 😃 If you ever plan to make another suggestion u could ask me as well for the art. 😸

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jello • 1 January 2017 at 9:20 PM

@wild_wonders You can draw as well if you want to! Honestly, so far, I haven't seen what I'm looking for.

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senkou • 1 January 2017 at 9:21 PM

@jellifysh

Okay I'll try and draw something for you by the end of this week? 😃

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jello • 1 January 2017 at 9:22 PM

@wild_wonders Yeah!

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purgatory • 1 January 2017 at 9:38 PM

@jellifysh if you're still looking for the art of the creature, I could try to draw it ^^

Also, this is a really cool idea ^^ there should be a whale dragon 😈

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jello • 2 January 2017 at 5:21 PM

@chicachicken @ammolite @wild_wonders @motivecat @demons The artwork is up! Thanks to anthesia, she did really good on the artwork!

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senkou • 2 January 2017 at 5:23 PM

@anthesia
@jellifysh

It is amazing !! *0* Everything I imagined... And more! Anthesia you are SO good ❤️

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@anthesia
@jellifysh

OH WOW! 😃 The art is great!!! 😃 😃
I especially love how the tear looks more like a marking.

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ethereality • 2 January 2017 at 5:27 PM

@jellifysh
@anthesia

Amazing and beautiful WE NEED THIS AS A CRW

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jello • 2 January 2017 at 5:28 PM

@motivecat unfortunately, it's not a dragon. Maybe next year!

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ethereality • 2 January 2017 at 5:29 PM

@jellifysh but I mean they can make an exception for this beautiful creature right

Deleted • 2 January 2017 at 5:30 PM

@jellifysh okay!

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bunnyshadow • 2 January 2017 at 5:31 PM

@jellifysh Kinda looks like the Lal x)

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@wild_wonders
@demons
@motivecat

;-; Thank you ❤️

@jellifysh 's idea was amazing ❤️

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senkou • 2 January 2017 at 5:33 PM

@anthesia

It really was ❤️ I hope it gets made!! 😸

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leafmelody • 2 January 2017 at 5:42 PM

@anthesia
OH MY GOD YOU'RE AMAZING AT ART *O* I ❤️ ITTTTTTTTT! I NEED ONE AND I'm broke on 💵 oh gee time to start saving up ;D
@jellifysh
Really really cool idea 😃

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valorieviolet • 2 January 2017 at 5:53 PM

@jellifysh
Heck yeah, that's awesome!

@anthesia
I'm in love with the colors of the whale ;~; it reminds me of a galaxy 😱
Great job ❤️

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izziebee1017 • 2 January 2017 at 6:24 PM

@jellifysh @anthesia

THAT'S GORGEOUS

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summer99318 • 2 January 2017 at 7:11 PM

The artwork is amazing! I love it! 😊
@jellifysh @anthesia

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jello • 2 January 2017 at 7:50 PM

@summer99318
I'm glad you do. It really fills me up! And I can't thank @anthesia enough, this art is purely amazing!

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summer99318 • 2 January 2017 at 7:52 PM

@jellifysh
Definitely

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