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stagfire • 22 January 2017 at 12:34 PM
I present the Akasoke.Link to the art = http://stagfire.deviantart.com/art/Akasoke-663195029New Art (You'll have to zoom in, the dark colors make it hard to see) = http://stagfire.deviantart.com/art/Akasoke-Updated-2-Art-697655040?ga_submit_new=10%3A1502249928Egg Stage Description:This egg emits a strange warmth and light and softly cackles as you near it.Description:The Akasoke is not a creature to be messed with. Often called, The Creature of the Night, or, Reaper by the citizens of Ark, it certainly places an impression. Akasokes are extremely elusive, only appearing on All Hallows' Eve to haunt the streets of Ark and are the black cats of Ark. The Akasoke is the protector of the dead and their souls. It does that by taking on the souls of the dead to protect them and the purple orb which the Akasoke bonds with at a young age contains the souls of the deceased. the Because of this, Ark citizens and citizens from all around always dress up on All Hallows' Eve to protect themselves from the Akasoke. The disguises confuse the Akasoke so it does not harm you or take your soul. If an Akasoke appears at your doorstep, it's certainly not good luck. ~Mediocre description? I'm not sure *shrug*Evolution:2nd stage(child): 500 clicks or 1000 views3rd stage(teen): 1000 clicks or 1550 views.And that is the Akasoke!This version is different than what has been posted before if you'd like to review again ❤️
naturegirl1999 • 22 January 2017 at 12:57 PM
It would be a good addition
stagfire • 22 January 2017 at 12:59 PM
@naturegirl1999 Thanks 😊
naturegirl1999 • 22 January 2017 at 1:00 PM
You're welcome
leafstarofskyclan • 22 January 2017 at 1:17 PM
@stagfire Neato!
stagfire • 22 January 2017 at 1:19 PM
@leafstarofskyclan Thanks ^^
nboez • 2 March 2017 at 2:21 AM
@stagfire Great work...Your great at this...
stagfire • 2 March 2017 at 8:00 AM
@nboez Thanks, I appreciate that c>More pings, Don't kill meh!@moonypancake@jellifysh@silverserpent@degong@clbr6117
degong • 2 March 2017 at 9:41 AM
@stagfireHmm, this creature gives me mixed feelings~ On one hand, the description is very magical and historical, but on the other hand I wouldn't see myself wanting this creature~Of course, there are people who would want the Akasoke, but I'm not sure I would, but that's just my personal opinion~ 😊
moonypancake • 3 March 2017 at 1:54 AM
The Akasoke seems to be a neat idea. I like your Almona better though. :'D
murfijs • 3 March 2017 at 4:27 AM
@stagfire nice creature
stagfire • 3 March 2017 at 7:33 AM
@degong Thanks, I definitely love the critique advice, what gives you mixed feelings? c>@moonypancake Thanks, personally I can't decide which x3 What makes you like the Almona more?@murfijs Thanks c>
jello • 8 August 2017 at 3:38 PM
@stagfire i remember reading this thing, hope it gets suggested!
stagfire • 8 August 2017 at 3:41 PM
@jello Ah, really? Thanks! ❤️ ~Could you check this out?@degong (Sorry! You've already seen it!)@purgatory@prairie@silverserpent
degong • 8 August 2017 at 3:58 PM
@stagfireHehe, it seems I have completely forgotten to respond to your question from five months ago. xDDid you change the description? O.o *reads bottom note and slaps head* Haha, you did! x3Tbh I like the original description better, but I understand you want this creature to be made, I totally get that! 😃 I shall review this creature again. 😸
stagfire • 8 August 2017 at 4:43 PM
@degong Lol *shrug* It happens XDTotally not! XD (Yes, I did indeed)Yeah, I may or may not have saved the original (AGH, WOOPS) so, sorry ^^"~~~~~~~~~~~~Yeah, I plan on redoing the image for this one after I finish the new creature suggestion I'm working on. Don't worry! It shall be fixed. ❤️Yeah, I plan on editing that, tell me how it turns out after I edit it. Capish?Yes! Totally, I could probably connect that to it, thanks for...suggesting? that 😉Heh heh, on the fly nicknames XD(DARNG IT XD) ~~~EDIT:Fixed the description, check it out now?
degong • 8 August 2017 at 4:51 PM
@stagfireI like it! 😃 Now it totally reminds me of that! ^^ And the sentence makes sense now. 😉Hehe, you're welcome. ^^
stagfire • 8 August 2017 at 6:16 PM
@degong Heh, I thought it might now! ^^Pings:@icesparkle22@valorie100@keesa@skyfall4@alice_meri_fox@iris1929578
icesparkle22 • 8 August 2017 at 6:55 PM
@stagfire nice! although, i can't see the creature clearly, there are lines everywhere lol
stagfire • 8 August 2017 at 11:47 PM
@icesparkle22 Lol, XD @degong had the same problem. I did the fixed art earlier. It's updated now ❤️
paige • 9 August 2017 at 11:18 AM
Very nice!
stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 3:30 PM
@littlegriff Thanks!@degong @icesparkle22The photo + art are updated now. You'll have to zoom in to see it.
icesparkle22 • 9 August 2017 at 3:31 PM
@stagfire i saw c: hehe looks much more clear now 😊
stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 3:39 PM
@icesparkle22 Hurrah! Could you check this creature suggestion out as well?>> https://eggcave.com//forums/topic/63705?page=1
nine • 9 August 2017 at 4:37 PM
@stagfire Ooh, nice! The description's cool, reminds me of the Piki's as it gives this unique origin to a widely-celebrated holiday. There does seem to be a bit too much information packed into a single paragraph though, which makes things somewhat hard to follow. Also, not really a big fan of the art, mainly because the teen and adult stages look odd with their fiery purple companions right next to their heads. It makes it look as if there are two creatures rather than one. Perhaps try removing the haunting face from it or placing the orb in a less noticeable location?
stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 4:50 PM
@nine Yeah, I never noticed that. *looks at the Piki* It does indeed!I'll take that into consideration and I'll see if I can think of where to put it elsewhere. Thanks for that feedback.
degong • 9 August 2017 at 6:06 PM
@stagfireHehe, yeah, I saw. ^^ I like the combination of green and purple! 😃 It does look a little bit like another creature, but I never noticed it until @ nine pointed it out. 😋Looks good, though! 😃
stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 7:38 PM
@degong Ah, okay! Yeah, I'm surprised how good the two colors work together. Does it? @ nine was talking about the description. What creature image does it remind you of then? Thanks 😊
degong • 9 August 2017 at 7:42 PM
@stagfireOh, lol. x3 No, I was trying to see it. 😋 I thought @ nine meant that it looked like there were two creatures in the image. xD It kind of looks like a creature of some sort floating next to the Akasoke.
stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 7:52 PM
@degong Yeah, it's the souls of the dead....XD Lol, yeah, the purple cauldron CC thing from a few(maybe) years back. *shrug* It does though, doesn't it. (In case I sound like I'm rambling, I'm tired)