~Poem Palace~

Deleted • 12 February 2017 at 4:11 PM

This is a place where you can share your poems with other people who love poems! 😸

~Introduction~

I thought I'd make a topic for poems because I don't know many people actually like them or like to write them on eggcave, that's also why I dont really get any feedbacks on the ones I wrote. ^^

I want this to be a place where people share their poems and other people can judge them or just enjoy reading them cx

I've only recently started writing poems so the ones I post will be pretty recent and probably already on my creature description.

I will start with the first poem I wrote 😸

~Picture perfect~

~ Picture perfect ~

Heartless you stare at me
While the blue sky above you makes you seem as if you were free
By the shot of a laser beam
As fast as my heart can beat
You are the only one I want to see

Mindlessly I keep you
Close within my heart
Visiting you everyday
I will not trade you away

You'll be here forever
Waiting for me
But you know im not always where you want me to be
I try my best to think you exist
The facts make me resist
In my heart you'll never be missed

leafstarofskyclan • 12 February 2017 at 8:05 PM

This isn't my poem, it was written by Edgar Allen Poe, but I thought I'd post it since Annabel is my name, Annabel Lee is the nickname given to me by my grandma, and it is just plain amazing.

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love—
I and my Annabel Lee—
With a love that the wingèd seraphs of Heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in Heaven,
Went envying her and me—
Yes!—that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we—
Of many far wiser than we—
And neither the angels in Heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling—my darling—my life and my bride,
In her sepulchre there by the sea—
In her tomb by the sounding sea.

Deleted • 13 February 2017 at 5:28 AM

@leafstarofskyclan
I love it!
Did she call you Annabel Lee because of the poem?
Poems like these bring tears to my eyes :')

Heres another one of mine 😸

Tears in my eyes
So hard to descripe
The pain in my life
The pain thats inside

No vision of life
Im looking through black eyes
Beaten up by the pain of lies
So hard to describe...

I got hit right in my heart
Not by a girl
Not by a man
Its in my mind
Something I pretend

So hard to describe
The pain thats inside
And my life is lie
For this I say goodbye
And wait for the return
Of my smile
I will kill the sadness
Let the sun shine on my heart
And let me never be apart
From the people who live within my heart