any suggjustions? (is writing a new book.)

Deleted • 17 November 2011 at 6:42 PM

http://artpad.art.com/gallery/?lutwcui005w i wrote it there, please tell me any suggjestions, or comments!

redfire77 • 17 November 2011 at 6:45 PM

@deannablanco3 Is that all? I only saw one page 😋 Books usually have more than that. The beginning was interesting. There are some typos, though. And the color of the background hurt my eyes.

Deleted • 17 November 2011 at 6:48 PM

@redfire77 thats just a teaser 😸 i just started the book today, wanted to know if anyone liked the idea 😸