Angel Makers

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 6:52 PM

Ice did neither at first.She was surprised to see Max...OThe hologram version of him.Ice had been thinking of him when suddenly-he appeared in front of her as a hologram.It pained Ice, but she new what she had to do after she'd stumbled upon a place called Angel Soul, an academy for angels.One could only get there if a member summoned them.Ice had yet to fins out who had summoned her, but she was pretty sure it was her kind flying teacher who taught younger angels how to fly.Her teacher,May, had said she had been watching Gentle Ice and was astounded by her skills."I'm so sorry Max," Ice said, as a tear rolled down her face.Max was stuck on the outside, and would not be on the inside until Ice herself summoned him and forgave him...

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 7:00 PM

"Its Okay" he said gently"I Woundnt Forgive me Anyway!" he said when all of a suddon he was inside. "Umm That Was Weird, Did You Forgive Me?"

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 10:57 PM

Lucy grinned."Nope!" she said,"Just an illusion...THe teachers at this place- Angel Soul Academy, showed me how to do this.That way you can see where I am at..."

Deleted • 31 May 2011 at 8:52 AM

"Okay... this place is weird, i can sence its not a good place to be." he spoke as the teacher turned into an eraser and grabed Ice. "I SO TOLD YOU!" he yelled pouning at the other erasers comming in. "FIGHT TO GET STRONGER! ICE FIGHT!!"

Deleted • 31 May 2011 at 3:52 PM

Ice smirked calmly at Max.Then she recited another spell only known by moi."Creeps,Sleeps,Deeply!" and the erasers started to fall to the ground asleep.Then she turned to Max and killed the hologram connection.Then she undid the spell she had recited.Ice was proud of her trickery.The erasers weren't real.Just fakes, but she did it because she WANTED Max to worry about her.TO show everyone deserved a second chance.Just like Jeb does, she thought.Then Ice sighed.Turning to her teacher she said,"I'm sorry, but I must go now.Summon the angel Max at o' hundred.By then, I will be gone...." And the teacher promised to do so.Ice flew.To a secret location.She would find Jeb, and Max would always show up too late to where she was hiding.Ice would occasionally hologram him.ANd as she flew, Ice planned everything out in her mind...

Deleted • 31 May 2011 at 4:36 PM

"Okay. Really." he said punching his fist into a tree. "You are so... so immature Ice." he said under his breath. "How could you leave me." And all of a sudden he blacked out.
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(I Have A Blog) Entry: I woke up. Tied up and gaged. I think its the erasers. Im going to kill them all.
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"WHO ARE YOU?" he bellowed. "Its Ari You Little Mutant." the voice snickered back. I was hit on the head and blacked out again
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I woke up straped to a table. I saw an I.V. in my arm and that they were taking my shirt off. "Its time to take his heart out!" i heard one say. "I need to tell Ice". I thought He sent a thought to Ice that said "Help, the erasers captured me, I can see Jeb, they are going to take my heart out. If I do die I want to see you again first. If it means keeping you safe I would die as many times that you needed." when he finished sending the thought he went to sleep. They would start the surgery soon. And remove my heart removing me from the earth. (DUN DUn Dun dun)

Deleted • 31 May 2011 at 5:39 PM

Ice was surprised at MAx's voice.It was his hologram-the hologram of a defeated Max starpped to a cold,metal table.Ice shook her emotions away."And why should I believe you?" she asked coldly.Gentle Ice, was no longer that gentle..."Give me 3 reasons to save you," Ice added in a whisper.Just then, Angel bolted into the room."What the h3!! are you doing!??!?!?!" she screeched at Ice."He's my brother! and if you won't rescue him _I_ will! Even if I have to hurt you in the process."Angel added with a furious glare at Ice.


@Bluegirl80 Can we take turns controlling ANgel?[since she's nobody's official character^^"]

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 9:50 AM

@icicle_9510 Yeah You Can.
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"OH WHY ARE YOU BEING SUCH A BUTT ICE?" he thought even though he was unconcious. "And tell Angel not to worry about me that i can get out of this on my own. And why should you save me? A. I saved you when you were giong to be sucked into that twister. B. Were family! C. I would do this for you." He thought as he blasted awake pain jolting though his whole body. "He's awake" said one of the whitecoats. "Should we give him more anistesia?" He asked "No" one answered. "Let it feel the pain."

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 4:09 PM

Ice was startled by Max's tone of voice.She could hear his thoughts, but Angel couldn't, and she looked like one mean chick.Ice suddenly grew infuriated by her long,rambling threats.Ice lunged for Angel, knocking her out the window."THERE'S YOUR THREATS!" Ice screeched.Then she bolted out the smashed window, and to the erasers.Gentle ICe was so angry, and desperate.In her desperation, she decided to take revenge on the erasers."Here's for JEB!" she shouted outside the room where Max was, and Becoming as angry and as filled with dark-magic as she could, Ice's wings turned a dark blue, and as she let out one last battle cry, Ice created a dreaded explosion."YOU D@Mn3D ERASERS TOOK EVERYTHING FROM ME!!!" and wile the building was shaking, and erasers screaming and shouting,Ice appeared as a hologram to Max.Her eyes were a glowing purple.Ice was no longer in control.Using her mind, she freed Max from his restraints.In an echoed voice she chanted,"GO.Be gone.You're not a friend." THen Ice turned to the erasers."Die foul wolf-men!" she hissed in an un-angel -like voice.The building was crumbling.Ice fell to the ground.Max would have to do the rest himself.

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 5:55 PM

Max couldnt move. His chest was open. "J-J-Jeb? Is that you J-J-Jeb?" she asked seeing Jeb. "Yes it is sweetie." he said smileing sweetly. "Can someone close the hole in my chest?"Max asked feeling dizzy. "Ill have them close you up." he chuckled "I hope your okay!"
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Max's chest was closed now and he hurled himself around Jeb crying. "I-I-Im so sorry Jeb" he balled. "Ice wants you back? Why did you leave?" "I had to sweetie ,but I can come back!" he said. "WHAT!?!?!??!?!" Max screemed in joy!! "Yeah ill tell Ice I will be comming back"
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"Ice!" Jeb sent his thoughts to Ice. "Im comming back, and NO this is NOT Max, he couldnt mimick me ever!" he chuckled.

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 6:52 PM

Ice's heart jumped when she heard Jeb.Then it saddened.He had saved Max, but he hadn't saved her.She lay crippled, her wing bent out of shape."Jeb," she thought back."I'm not coming." I tear rolled down her face."I CAN'T come..." and with that, Ice limped along sadly....Ice froze as a twig snapped behind her.ERASERS! Ice couldnt make communication through her thoughts, nor did she want to.Ice had shut out all her thoughts....

{Max has no clue what's happening X3 X3}

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 7:01 PM

Max felt something he never felt before. His body started to fling as if he were fighting, he yelled "TAKE THAT YOU ERASERS!" and running into a wall (im going to take controll of Ice for one sec!) As Max fell, Ice fell. They both yelled "WHAT IS HAPPENING!?!?!?!" as they were both flung back and forth. Max tryed to get back into himself. "OH! I GET IT! Im doint what Ice is doing!" Soon he was punching out and kicking hoping that Ice was actually hitting erasers. He kicked and chopped and he fell hard. It knocked the breath out of him. He jumped up! "No Ice you wont lose today." he pounced up into the air and was held there his arms hitting air. "Go Ice"

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 7:06 PM

Ice sighed.Max just DID NOT get it.SHe was sick of him tying to control her.SO Ice decided to have some fun.She grinned, and slipped into Max's body."Hey Jeb!" Ice shouted in Max's body.Then using Max's non-bent wings, she flew into the sky, holding Jeb's hand.Ice flew back to the sickening mansion.SHe hoped MAx would come and appologize...

Deleted • 1 June 2011 at 7:11 PM

Max just stared he had no clue how he did this. "OMG IM SUCH A FREAK!" he said letting go to Jebs hand. He dove down to catch him before he hit the ground. He saw Ice fly down. "Omg Im like so sorry! I just havent seen Jeb in so long. And one question. How did we do that where we both had controll of each others body? I know im such a freak and I have like the worst temper, but its just my freakish self" he chuckled.

Deleted • 2 June 2011 at 3:09 PM

"yeah, you're a BIG freak," muttered Ice."terrible temper as well." THen she psuhed Max down."Rest.You were just cut open.Nothing, just rest, and the faster we can leave." Motioning to Jeb, she entered his thoughts.Ice told him her plan of attack on the eraser's.When she had finished, she knew it would go perfectly...

Deleted • 2 June 2011 at 3:39 PM

Love those books ^^

Name: Ryoko
Age: 15
Discription: quiet Asian girl but very sweet. Lushious golden hair with a ruby tint.

Deleted • 2 June 2011 at 3:45 PM

@pwuffy cool, you can join in by arriving at the mansion if you want to😊

Deleted • 2 June 2011 at 4:23 PM

That blew the wind out of Max

Deleted • 3 June 2011 at 6:27 AM

Ryoko needed to find someone like her.
She spread her jet-black wings and took off to the sky. Soon she saw a mansion. "Hm, worth a shot." she said and flew down to it.

Deleted • 3 June 2011 at 3:41 PM

Ice looked up.Another angel! she thought in disbelief.Her plans would be ruined....so so ruined unless MAx and everyone else would stay out of it....

Deleted • 3 June 2011 at 4:35 PM

Max slept and ate for a while feeling something press down on his chest sevral times!

redstar-fireclan • 3 June 2011 at 5:11 PM

@bluegirl80 what about Lily. What do i do with her?

Deleted • 4 June 2011 at 11:31 PM

Ryoko saw a girl below and flew faster. "No... nobody can see me." she whispered.

redstar-fireclan • 4 June 2011 at 11:37 PM

Lily sighed. Where was everyone???

Deleted • 6 June 2011 at 5:04 PM

ICe was annoyed by the two anges she'd seen flying around."I must not let them come!" she whispered desperately.Euphraxia was gone,under mysterious circumstances, and Jeb was back.She DID NOT want any other angels arriving, but of course, what could one do?

redstar-fireclan • 11 June 2011 at 4:51 PM

@bluegirl...um..can u help me...???? i hve no idea wats going on...