Who wants to hear my superly aweome story that will take at least 7 posts to finish? xD

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 2:03 PM

I wrote a story for LA, and it is Sci-fi. So I based the plot kindaish off one of my RPs I've made called Animalia 😊
Post if you want to hear it. It's long..and it takes a lot of post, I PMed it to a friend ^-^;

maineen • 20 February 2012 at 2:04 PM

I want to hear it ^o^

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 2:06 PM

Why were my friends and I stuck in this laboratory? We were science experiments.
Why were we made? To do a job for those weak and cowardly humans.
What job? Too kill Roa; the evil mastermind alien who made beast to destroy our capitol Vilum, to give him power of the world.
What are we? Animalians; genetically altered humans that can turn into one animal.
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I woke up to the servants, beginning to dress me. I had a pair of deep purple leggings on with a moss green undershirt and a lightweight jacket. This was my everyday outfit around here.
They stuffed my face with the scientist?s homemade liquid cereal. Yuck. I saw Griffin and Lin were already up and ready. Akira wasn?t out with us though; I didn?t know where he was either.
The servants basically dragged me to the lab. We were getting the final dose of the substance that will change us forever. It was a small sample of animal DNA, with a medicine to blend it with our DNA, permanently changing us.
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Deleted • 20 February 2012 at 2:31 PM

@whispers
cool! I want to hear more!

Deleted • 20 February 2012 at 2:33 PM

^ AGREE 😃 MOREEEEE

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 2:33 PM

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Lin, Griffin and I were sitting waiting for Dr. Harolds, he was coming to give us the final dosage. Griffin was 15. He was 6 feet tall and had a naturally spiky brown hair. His skin was pale and his eyes were a deep hazel. Lin was the oldest; 16. She was 5? 7? and has long and wavy black hair with pink and purple color streaks. Her skin was a fair tan and her eyes were green. Then there was me, Claria, the youngest one of us. I was 13. I had sleek dark brunette hair. My eyes, they looked different from now and then. Sometimes they were blue, green, blue-green, and sometimes even looked gray. Akira was supposed to be here. He was 14. He had red hair that looked like Dr. Harolds?s without hair gel.
Dr. Harolds walked in the room. He wasn?t looking so excited when he walked in the room. His gray hair, it was not in its normal spiky form. He usually put hair gel in. He was a youngster in an old man?s body. He had bags under his eyes. He just looked dull today.
He sat on the chair and faced us. ?Before I give you the dosage, I need to explain to you about your soon to be powers.? He looked at Griffin. ?You Griffin, you are to become an eagle Animalian,?-he walked over to him- ?You?ll be able to fly, higher than the clouds!?-He paused and looked Griffin sternly in the eye-?Your talons, they will serve as a weapon, you?ll be able to grip your opponent and damage him as well.? Dr. Harolds stared at Griffin in silence for about a minute. ?You hear me boy!??

meixiaotian • 20 February 2012 at 2:43 PM

cool! Continue?

lavender • 20 February 2012 at 2:45 PM

@whispers
MORE!!!!!

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 2:48 PM

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Griffin was sweating and nervous. He shakily nodded his head.
Dr. Harolds glared at Lin now. He tiny figure being overwhelmed by the tall scientist. ?You. You are a wolf. A gray beauty. You can look respectful, but be dangerous as well. Your fangs and claws, those are your weapons. An instant bare of your teeth will frighten your enemies. A chill will run down their spine.?
Lin looked into the intimidating face of Dr. Harolds. ?I understand.?
Dr. Harolds grunted and headed my way. ?You. You?re the troublemaker, aren?t you??
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meixiaotian • 20 February 2012 at 2:50 PM

Q: what's with al of the ? ?

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 2:55 PM

@meiciaotian
When I copy and paste it from word to here-it makes all the quotation markss "?"s >.<
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?Yes, yes I am.? I smiled cheesy
?So that?s who it was all along.? He gave me an eviler glare than he gave my friends. He shook his head around. ?Claria, well, you are the feline of them. The black panther.? He walked around the room. ?The panther has very sharp claws that are retractable. Which brings some positive aspects.? He turned around to face me again. ?And about your fangs, they are sharp, and will puncture through flesh quite easily.?
I rolled my eyes, ?Yeah yeah, blah blah. Just where in the world is Akira!??
He stomped over. ?So you want to know about your friend Akira? He is dead! He died from the second of the doses last night in his sleep!?
Griffin and Lin gasped, and Griffin was angered. ?What! So it?s just three of us fighting now! Why do that? Three against a thousand won?t do you any good!?
Griffin caused security to come out to put us in a body lock to get the doses from Dr. Harolds. Arguing is no use for us now. Soon, we were put to our cells and servant dressed us in bodysuits that were like armor. I was given an extra layer of chain mail armor.
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meixiaotian • 20 February 2012 at 2:59 PM

hrmn...
Anyway, keep going!

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 3:07 PM

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?Why are they putting a medieval armor on me?? I asked my servant as she was putting it on me.
She looked up. ?Harolds says that you?re going to need it.? Then she left. A sword was left on the rack for me. A stain of blood was on the blade.
Shocked I began to walk backwards when I tripped. I realized, I had a panther tail sticking out of my butt 24/7. That is just great. I laid on the chair while Roa was heading down to Vilum with his minions. Harolds says that we need to be released at just the right time.
After laying for hours on end, finally, the buzzer went off. It was time. I put on the belt hanging off the wall, and I laid my sword inside it sheath. And I stepped into the elevator with Lin and Griffin. All of us were scared. All of us were nervous. All of us thought we can?t save the world. All of us know out deathbed lay soon upon us.
As we rose from the steaming asphalt, I could see Roa?s hovercraft. He was alone on the hovercraft. But following him was a giant blimp with about 900 Shadows aboard. Shadows are Roa?s creation. Wolf like beasts, that are 10 and ? feet tall, and where their eyes should be is pure fire.
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Deleted • 20 February 2012 at 3:15 PM

lol.
"I had a panther tail sticking out of my butt 24/7. That is just great.' XD Great story so far 😉

whispers • 20 February 2012 at 3:18 PM

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knew this battle wouldn?t turn out well. Roa said something and his fleet of shadows lunged out of the blimp. As they landed, they came strait at us. I tensed to at least try to become a panther. When I was on fours, my armor and sword became part of me. The sword became my claws, and my armor became my pelt.
I charged at the Shadow. I piled over it. It dissolved at it fell to the ground. Griffin and Lin stared at me like a child stares at something big and confusing.
?C?mon guys! You want to save the world or not!?? I yelled to them.
Lin looked at me in the eye. ?Why should I??
Griffin shook her, ?Or you will die!? Then he ran over to me and toppled over two shadows. ?I?ll be attacking from the sky!? He burst up in the air as an eagle and kept wounding the Shadows.
Lin walked over to me, in wolf form. ?I hope what you?re saying works.? She snarled and pounced at the shadows. The tallest one of all was with Roa, and it was giving orders.
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