POEMS

7731826 • 21 February 2012 at 8:22 PM

Inspired by @kitty19cat

I need to work on my poem for this project at school, sooo,
I'm making commissions! Just fill out this form:

Title:
What its about(I.E. Fire, life, an ec creature, etc.):


That's it! Here's examples of my work:

Butterflies
Insanity
Swimming

blissy • 21 February 2012 at 10:44 PM

@7731826

Awesome! That was pretty good! Although "Colorful" is spelled with only one "L". XP

But I really don't care about proper grammar all that much.

So carry on.

Title: Pause

What its about(I.E. Fire, life, an ec creature, etc.):

Insanity viciously ripping a poor soul from the inside out. 😃


Just want to see what you'd do with that one.

I'm a huge fan of insanity sometimes. :T

If this disturbs you, just ignore me. O3O;;

Or tell me to go away.

I won't take it personally. XD

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 5:52 AM

@blissy
Hmm...

I can feel it deep inside me,
its clawing and scratching to see.
It feels like my skin is peeling,
I just cant stop this feeling.
What in my life did i do wrong?

My soul was like a song,
It used to be a slow strum,
Now is a beating drum.
As I fade away from my dreams,
And I see how it seems,
I realize something,

Being different is what makes you special.

Only, its to late.
The lock is now on the gate.
I have failed at life.
And cant try again.

blissy • 22 February 2012 at 4:39 PM

@7731826


Man, I fail at poetry. XD

But you...That was very pleasing. ^^


Blissy approves. =/


/stamps your face with seal of approval

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 4:40 PM

@blissy
Thanks! I have to practice for this school assignment

blissy • 22 February 2012 at 4:42 PM

@7731826

Well, my daemon of an english teacher would love you. She basically told me my writing sucks. XD

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 4:45 PM

@blissy
Lol, your teacher told you that you stink??
XD

*Slaps Teacher* XD

blissy • 22 February 2012 at 4:50 PM

@7731826

Well yeah.

But she is a woman with very strong opinions about her subject.

And she's pretty loud. And enthusiastic. Extremely. O-O;

And when she laughs it sounds like a maniacal cackle.

The wicked witch of the west would be impressed.

I'm serious. She laughed once, and it scared the crap out of us. XD

We were all gaping mouths, wide fearful eyes, everything.

The real deal when feeling that impending doom is upon you, right then and there.

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 4:53 PM

@blissy

Lol! My teachers are LOUD too! And this one elementary teacher at our school is EVIL! Just plain mean! Other than her I like the teachers.


Btw, you could make that post into a poem and show it to your teacher😊 lol

blissy • 22 February 2012 at 6:02 PM

@7731826

Yeah, she'd give me an "F". XD

She bases her grades on favoritism, I think. All she did at my friend's conference was talk about how much she adored her older-already-graduated brother when he was in her class. :T

Deleted • 22 February 2012 at 6:03 PM

@7731826
Wow, amazing poem! Could you write me one??
Swimming/drowning maybe? You decide
Thanks 😊

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 6:19 PM

@swimforlife
Thanks!
I can try...


As I swim through the crystal oceans,
Causing such a big commotion,
All the fish turn to see,
All the fish look at me.
I drift through like a cloud,
And all the ocean is my crowd.
I love it down here,
and I belong always near.


Sorry, its not great >-<

Deleted • 22 February 2012 at 6:22 PM

@7731826
I love it can I use it on my profile? I will give you all the credit!
THANKS
THANKS
THANKS

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 6:27 PM

@swimforlife
Feel free to put it wherever you'd like,
I'm glad you like it 😊

oranberry100 • 22 February 2012 at 8:21 PM

@7731826 Hi! Epic poems! 😉 Can you write a poem about rock music? ( 😋 I'm a huge fan of it)

7731826 • 22 February 2012 at 8:41 PM

@oranberry100
Thanks, and sure! Would you mind if I write it tomorrow though?

@avelaingia
Cool!😊

oranberry100 • 22 February 2012 at 9:22 PM

@7731826 no problemo!