I need to share my feelings in a poetic style, the only way I can.

dreamer • 18 April 2012 at 7:34 PM

I just wanted you guys to know,
That when I'm feeling down and low,
For ever single day I grow,
And my heart is still drowned in woe.
I know no one will understand,
Because no one's there to take my hand,
No one to pull me from the sand,
Or keep me up so that I stand.
But it's my fault I'm in this ditch,
I'm sorry for being such a b----.
When I think it makes me twitch,
Something I wish I could switch.
But what am I even fighting for?
There's really nothing left in store.
I don't know why my life is suck a bore,
But it's making me feel sore.
I can promise you I'll try!
I'll hit myself each time I cry.
I don't want to live a lie,
But I might still deserve to die.
But what more do you expect me to do?
At least you know I'm insane too;
For when the very last bird flew,
It tried to help me break through.

In other words; I'm... Sad. Very sad. For too many reasons that I can't explain it in a single post. Don't put me down, and refrain from asking questions. Just enjoy my dang poetry. >.>

twilight_raptor • 18 April 2012 at 7:48 PM

V.V whats wrong? OnO

Deleted • 18 April 2012 at 7:49 PM

@Dreamer I am here for you if you need to talk

Deleted • 18 April 2012 at 7:49 PM

@dreamer
That was beautiful! It could be lyrics to a song 😊

replica • 18 April 2012 at 9:29 PM

Nice poem 😊 and no need to feel down, we're all here for ya and plenty of people like you in RL too, I know it! 😊