My New Idea For a Published Book!

euro22 • 2 June 2012 at 11:17 AM

DO NOT READ AHEAD UNLESS YOU WANT TO SPOIL THE SECRET.
THIS TOPIC WILL DISSAPEAR IN A DAY
Ok, here is the plot-
In every mortal being lies a terrible demon. Every mortal has a power to keep the demon contained. An evil wizard/ voodoo man wants to use the power to sell as a spell for warding off demons. He cant fool adults so he goes for something more immature- children

The children slowly change to their demon form, but they think it was a curse by the antagonist.

They dont know whats really happening - and neither does the reader

Critisism?

april__ • 2 June 2012 at 11:19 AM

I don't understand what you're trying to accomplish with the plot. *shrugs*


I just don't understand the mortals having demons.

What about sick kids? Can they ward off the demon? Or sick adults?

Kids/adults with mental issues? Do they still have the power.

I think there's a lot of things to consider.

How does the demon end up in the mortals?

euro22 • 2 June 2012 at 11:26 AM

@april_
Well, its just a completley natural power. Only magic can destroy it.
And the demon is just like yin and yang. The completley evil, dark side to a person. Hidden in their soul.

I just thought of the idea yesterday.

I didnt say the rest because thats what i'm planning right now.

Deleted • 5 June 2012 at 9:41 AM

@euro22
That actually sounds pretty nice 😊