Creature Suggestion: The haxtex

liza200aa • 24 June 2012 at 8:21 PM

I made a critter suggestion, here it is:

Egg description:
A dark egg with a swirl on it. When a object is placed on to the center of the swirl, it gets sucked in slowly. As the egg draws closer to hatching, the swirl's strength becomes more powerful.

Creature description:
The haxtex is a mysterious creature with a black-hole formation on it's tail that pulls things into it. When a object get's sucked in, it is teleported to a random place that could be anywhere in ark. For this reason, the haxtex is often feared and rarely befriended. As it grows, the haxtex often uses it's power to gain territory by scaring away other creatures.

picture:
https://www.sumo.fm/#image/id=1998851
Tell me if it doesn't work.

love:1
like:10
neutral:0
dislike:0

I would like to know your REAL opinion, please don't exaggerate it unless you find doing so necessary. And yes, I did do a bad job on the art.

#liza200aa

Deleted • 25 June 2012 at 6:02 AM

@liza200aa
It looks cool 😊
um..but the shadow kinda looks overpowering ?
but still, it looks good 😊

liza200aa • 25 June 2012 at 6:05 AM

@shagu-chan
Thanks for your opinion! Yeah, the shadow is a bit overpowering. 😋

Deleted • 25 June 2012 at 6:06 AM

@liza200aa
oh no problem with that 😊
I don't know but I somehow wanted to see the critter move xD

geefriend45 • 5 July 2012 at 3:59 PM

@liza200aa
It's cool, I like it!
But the last stage is a little hard to see.
It kind of reminds me of pokemon for some reason. But that's just my opinion.

liza200aa • 5 July 2012 at 4:01 PM

@geefriend45
Thanks! Yeah, I might as well redraw the final stage. Happy to hear your opinion! 😊

geefriend45 • 5 July 2012 at 4:15 PM

@liza200aa
No problem! 😃
Good luck!

megancb • 18 July 2012 at 4:25 PM

@liza200aa it reminds me of a pokemon, too - I love the look in it's eyes! I like it 😊

liza200aa • 18 July 2012 at 4:42 PM

@megancb
thanks! 😊

deepfriedbanjo • 18 July 2012 at 6:56 PM

It reminded me of a Pokemon as well...

anyway, i like it!
if i could make a suggestion though, i think the tail looks more like a tornado than a black hole. Maybe you could make it look flatter, or add some light being sucked in?

or maybe put the center of the black hole on the tip of his tail, almost as if the haxtex was about to be sucked into its own tail...

there are so many cool things you could do with this idea!

sorry, i was just brainstorming. if you don't like my ideas that's fine. 😊

good luck 😊

liza200aa • 18 July 2012 at 7:05 PM

@deepfriedbanjo
Thanks! I have been planning to redraw it, But I am so lazy at the moment >.<

deepfriedbanjo • 18 July 2012 at 7:32 PM

@liza200aa
Would you be willing to look at my creature suggestion? If you do, please let me know what you think! 😊 I'm looking for feedback/opinions, but no one has posted anything yet... ☹️
#puglet

emeraldmonster • 18 July 2012 at 7:33 PM

You got 1 love from me it think its amazing but still needs work but i see how it would work!

liza200aa • 18 July 2012 at 7:39 PM

@emeraldmonster
Thank you! Yeah, normally I am a good artist, but right now, I feel so lazy I just get away by overusing the blur tool. I think I will hire someone to do the art for me...

emeraldmonster • 18 July 2012 at 7:41 PM

@liza200aa
Its not in the art its the main idea eggcave will do the rest themselves if they actually do it.

liza200aa • 18 July 2012 at 7:44 PM

@emeraldmonster
Oh, I see. Yeah, that happens, but I like to make descriptions anyway. It makes it more interesting and understandable to other people. 😊

emeraldmonster • 18 July 2012 at 7:45 PM

@liza200aa
yea im pretty sure you can do that part.

midnightw182 • 19 July 2012 at 2:18 PM

@liza200aa
*like*
Nice ;D

liza200aa • 19 July 2012 at 2:30 PM

@midnightw182
Thanks! 😊

midnightw182 • 19 July 2012 at 2:31 PM

@liza200aa
NP.
Pinging:
@puppymaks
@ordinary_teen
@karamel
@lunathewolf

karamel • 19 July 2012 at 2:34 PM

@liza200aa Awesome! 😃 For some reason though, the hatched stage reminds me of a Pokemon... not sure why... ._.

liza200aa • 19 July 2012 at 2:37 PM

@karamel
yeah, everyone says that for some reason, even though I do not know a single Pokemon that looks similar...

...But thanks anyway! 😊

Deleted • 20 July 2012 at 5:16 AM

@liza200aa
Awesome 😊 I like it.

liza200aa • 20 July 2012 at 7:03 AM

@ordinary_teen
Thankies 😊

Deleted • 20 July 2012 at 7:03 AM

@liza200aa
Np 😉

tralala44 • 22 September 2012 at 8:25 PM

@liza200aa

LOVE IT

autumnhines • 22 September 2012 at 8:33 PM

***** nice one
^
5 stars

liza200aa • 22 September 2012 at 8:40 PM

@tralala44
@autumnhines
Thanks 😊

vespira • 28 October 2012 at 1:01 PM

@liza200aa

It's awesome!😊 Reminds me of Pokemon I like.😊 (That's a good thing 😉) It looks pretty intimidating which is what makes me like it so much. Also the fact that it's purple/lavender which is my fave color.XD

I'd like it to be a cave creature though since I don't have CC and can't afford it.☹️

liza200aa • 28 October 2012 at 1:08 PM

@charm556
thanks! 😊