Hey, Could Someone Critique My Application On Neo?

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 9:29 PM

http://www.neopets.com/~Wheating
There we go, don't go all harsh & mean like the PC please, I went there & saw people going: "Your uncreativity shows." I think that's a little hard.
It's one of my few first times I've done a petpage application.. so I want to make it good. xD
You can say what I could improve on, if you have manners (no offense intended), I like pros & cons (elementary school again! 😊)
Thanks!

bumblebee13_7 • 17 July 2011 at 9:40 PM

@marinalily: What is a petpage application?

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 9:45 PM

@bumblebee13_7
Oh, you know when you click the "Edit your pets homepage" thing, & you can make a super long application instead of a NM application. It's pretty purdy. xD You can put you Customization Plans, Art, a super long story, baisically anything you can think of crammed into a little page. 8D

crescentfeather • 17 July 2011 at 9:48 PM

@marinalily I think that's a little cruel. I can't even do ANY of that, I'm clueless at code ☹️

And I'm annzho14 on neopets, chekkitout! 😃

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 9:50 PM

@crescentfeather
What's cruel? Me? Or the PCers?
There are premades ready for you to use if you're clueless, (like me). Lemme just get the links & I can put them up. 😊

crescentfeather • 17 July 2011 at 9:53 PM

@marinalily Xweetoks are so cute! ❤️

And the PCers are the ones who are cruel, who would say, "Your uncreativity shows" to someone who doesn't have any experience? Criticism is supposed to be constructive, not cruel. ☹️

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 9:53 PM

@crescentfeather
I know! It was a Petpage too!
I LOOOVE Xwee's! I'm trying to get every single colour. xDD
http://www.neopets.com/~Celusio Sugary Premades

http://www.neopets.com/~aunibel Trapeze Premades

There are a ton of other ones, but I prefer these ones, especially Sugary, because there are anchored PetPage layouts (Page 1, page 2 etc)

crescentfeather • 17 July 2011 at 10:00 PM

@marinalily *has a Faerie Xweetok* >=3

And ooh 😱 Prettiful!

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 10:03 PM

@crescentfeather
LUCKY YOU. I barely have 500K in the bank xD Is poor

crescentfeather • 17 July 2011 at 10:22 PM

@marinalily Oh no. didn't buy it.

Got lucky at Fruit Machine XD

bumblebee13_7 • 17 July 2011 at 11:40 PM

@marinalily: oh okay, well I think yours looks really great 😊

I can't believe I've been playing neo for 4 years, and I've never heard of that before XD

marinalily • 17 July 2011 at 11:46 PM

@bumblebee13_7
Lol, me neither. Just a month ago, now I'm hooked to it, for doing things like applying for my dreamie. But thanks for the complment. 😊
@crescentfeather
I got a Halloween PB, then Boochi got Sinstren & now she's a baby. WHAT A WASTE xDD

crescentfeather • 18 July 2011 at 10:14 AM

@marinalily ☹️ I know... that's why I'm scared of random events XD

marinalily • 18 July 2011 at 12:45 PM

@crescentfeather
Tren is now my Boochi guard. xD I don't need another baby Xweetok.

crescentfeather • 18 July 2011 at 12:50 PM

@marinalily How do you make a Boochi guard, I want ☹️

And can you un-zap them by applying another paintbrush?

marinalily • 18 July 2011 at 12:52 PM

@crescentfeather
Just have a baby pet as your active, so even if he zaps the pet it's still baby. xDD
Sure you can unzap them.

crescentfeather • 18 July 2011 at 12:53 PM

@marinalily Yay 😃 Because I don't want my Faerie or my Moltaran to be zapped >.<

I'm annzho14 on NP 😊

marinalily • 18 July 2011 at 5:30 PM

@crescentfeather
I'll check it out. 😊 What do you think of my application? Anything I should fix?

crescentfeather • 18 July 2011 at 5:30 PM

It seems fine. Maybe some more decoration?

marinalily • 18 July 2011 at 5:58 PM

@crescentfeather
I fail at art, & my parents won't let me get a photobucket/whatever account.. they are so overprotective, I don't even have an e-mail.
What would you suggest?

crescentfeather • 18 July 2011 at 7:22 PM

@marinalily You have a problem. ☹️

marinalily • 18 July 2011 at 7:46 PM

@crescentfeather
I know. ☹️ It fails.