The Poem Game!

whitefire • 11 August 2012 at 9:55 AM

Okay, I just made this up. So. Here's how it works. I'm the first person, so I post a poem. The next person gets a choice. They can change one line per stanza, or one word per line. Example:
Person 1) Trapped in this cage,
I'm completely alone,
Silently letting loose
On my rage.

Person 2) Placed in this cage,
I'm stupidly alone,
Silently letting go
Of my rage.
--Or--
Person 2) Placed in this cage,
Having so much fun,
Silently letting loose
On my rage.

Person three would change it even more, and so on and so forth. You can change it to be funny, serious, anything you want! It doesn't have to be related to EggCave. When one poem is entirely changed, the next person to post writes another poem. The new poem has to be four lines per stanza, and four stanzas per poem.

Do not post yet, I need to type the first poem.

flareice • 11 August 2012 at 9:57 AM

---SPACE---

whitefire • 11 August 2012 at 10:03 AM

Here's the starting poem:

The night sky is Kira-kira,
Glittering with the stars,
Just like your eyes,
Beautiful.

But it's also Kira,
On a cloudy moonless night,
Just like my heart,
Never knowing light.

You are pure,
Pure as snow,
Kira-kira
One might say.

But I am Kira,
Thouroughly Kira,
No light shining
from within.

Tada! Now mess it up. By the way, Kira means Dark and Kira-kira means glittering.

flareice • 11 August 2012 at 10:36 AM

GRRR!!! Nobody's posting! Flareice (Whitefire) shall ping!

@Leafpelt
@Essieh
@SpiritHawk
@ChibiSteel
@FayBayBay

whitefire • 11 August 2012 at 10:53 AM

More pinging 'cause no body's playing!

@MidnightW182
@Essieh
@Leafpelt
@ChibiDarkness
@FayBayBay

leafpelt • 11 August 2012 at 10:55 AM

@whitefire
Hang on..I'll get back later.

whitefire • 11 August 2012 at 10:57 AM

@Leafpelt
>O< Nyah! NOW! No, JK!

spirithawk • 11 August 2012 at 12:32 PM

@whitefire Sorry I didn't come to your pings, I was still sleeping. xC
Sounds like fun. C8

The night sky is ugly,
Glittering with the ugliness,
Just like your eyes,
Ugly.

But it's also ugly,
On an ugly moonless night,
Just like my heart,
Never knowing prettiness.

You are ugly,
Ugly as me,
Ugly-ugly.
One might say.

But I am ugly,
Thouroughly ugly,
No prettiness showing
from within.

whitefire • 11 August 2012 at 5:38 PM

@SpiritHawk And I didn't mean to ping you twice, either! Sorry. And thank you for posting!

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 8:19 PM

ok i'll ping some of my friends
@albinodragon
@finfred
@mib666666
@world
@tralala44
@awesomeness365

tralala44 • 21 August 2012 at 8:21 PM

Thanks @izzfred

I ll ping others:

@eggs
@flavia
@jasmine33033
@ladyrhea
@onyx

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 8:26 PM

ok lets mess up the poem now

the night sky is pretty
glittering with the prettiness
just like your eyes
pretty

but it's also pretty on a pretty moonless night
just like my heart
never knowing ugliness

you are pretty
pretty as me
pretty-pretty
one might say

but i am pretty
thoroughly pretty
no ugliness showing
from within

@tralala44
now mess this up

tralala44 • 21 August 2012 at 8:30 PM

the night sky is dull
brown and dull
just like one's eyes
terrible and dull

but it's not pretty on the dull full of moons night
just like old one's heart
always knowing terribleness

you are ugly
not pretty like me
dull very-dull
everyone says

but i am the pretty one
really super pretty
no ugly or dull
just pretty

@izzfred

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 8:37 PM

the night sky is black
brown and black
just like your eyes
terriblie and black

but it's not pretty on the dull full of moons blackness
just like your heart
always knowing blackness

you are black
not pink like me
black very-black
everyone comments

but i am the pink one
really super pink
no black or dull
just pink

@tralala44
now mess this up

tralala44 • 21 August 2012 at 8:41 PM

the night is grey
very grey
your eyes are grey
just grey

but the moon is red because the pollution
not like your heart
your heart is grey

you are grey
just like me
grey whitish-grey
everyone says

I have to say i am even greyer
since i am with the grave-yer
and although i like mr. dreyer
his heart is even greyer.

@izzfred

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 8:45 PM

the night is very pink
very pink
your eyes are pink
just pink

but the moon is pink because the pollution
like your heart
your heart is pink

you are pink
just like me
pink pinkish-pink
everyone comments

i have to say i am even pinker
since i am with the pink-er
and although i like mrs.pinker
her heart is even pinker

@tralala44
now mess this up

tralala44 • 21 August 2012 at 8:49 PM

@izzfred you know mr.dreyer was my third grade teacher!?

the day is white
ghost white
just like ghost's eyes
just white

but the sun is white
because
it is about to explode

you are pale white
just like grandpa
just wery pale
everyone knows

but to tell the truth,
you are even whiter
and just because i like white
doesn't mean i am a fright!

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 9:04 PM

the day is blue
ghost blue
just like blue eyes
just blue

but the sun is blue
because
it is about to explode

you are blue blue
just like me
just very blue
everyones sees

but to be honest you are even bluer
and just because i like blue
doesn't mean i am a fright!

@tralala44

now mess this up

mib666666 • 21 August 2012 at 9:17 PM

the day is blue
ghost blue
just like blue eyes
just blue

but the sun is blue
because
it is about to explode

you are blue blue
just like me
just very blue
everyones sees

but to be honest you are even bluer
and just because i like the beatles
doesn't mean i am a fright!

Deleted • 21 August 2012 at 9:24 PM

the day is red
ghost red
just like red eyes
just red

but the sun is red
because
it is about to explode

you are red red
just like me
just very red
everyone knows
but to be honest you are even redder
and just because i like katy perry
doesn't mean i am a fright!

@mib666666
now mess this up

tralala44 • 21 August 2012 at 9:56 PM

the day is orange,
really orange
just like an orange
just like your eyes

but the sun is purple
idont know why
just purple

you are purple but i sm red
not like you
but very red
people say that
you are quite purple
just like katy perrys hair
becauseits purple

@izzfred

mib666666 • 22 August 2012 at 8:37 PM

the day is orange,
really orange
just like an orange
just like your eyes

but the sun is purple
idont know why
just purple

you are purple but i sm red
not like you
but very red
people say that
you are quite purple
just like ringo starrs hair
becauseits purple

animalz • 14 June 2015 at 2:46 PM

The day is Rainbow,
Slightly Orange,
Not like an Orange,
Just like your mouth,

But the moon is purple,
Idon't see why,
Just blue,

You are blue but I am red,
Exactly like you,
But very yellow,
Puppies say that,
You are quite black
Just like Misha Collin's hair,
Because it is extremely black.

Wait.... My version makes no sense >:/

sheepfox • 11 July 2015 at 10:31 PM

The day is mystic,
slightly purple,
not like an eggplant,
not like your mouth,

but the moon is white,
i don't know why,
Just curious,

you are blue but i am orange,
not like you,
But not yellow,
Puppies say it,
You are quite purple,
just like ihascupquake's hair,
because it's extremely lavender