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Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:24 PM
So before i get started, here are some pings:@izzfred (You know thsi story from school *wink*)@sakura2596 (Your story encouraged me)@pebblestar-nightclan Chapter 1: The moon was high in the sky and the sounds of the forest were swallowed by the wind. There were pawsteps in the distance. "Attack Lightningtribe!" A tom voice yowled from a bush. In a blink of an eye tons of cats leaped out of the forest. "Attack Tornadotribe!" Yowled a she-cat voice from the other end of the river. Cats of 'Tornadotribe' leaped out and started attacking the cats of LightningTribe. The female cat then leaped on the tom. "Foolish cats! Tornadotribe is the tribe of power and we shall never be beaten!" She hissed in the tom's face. The tom swiftly slid out of the grip of the she-cat. "We're the tribe of swiftness. Fast as a lightning bolt!" The tom and the she-cat then started tackling each other with claws as sharp as thorns.To be contuinued.#claws
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:26 PM
it's coming alone good albinodragon.sad story about my book âšī¸ it got destroyed i have to start over âšī¸
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:33 PM
@izzfred aww sad :'(The tom then hissed. "Prey stealers Wildwind!" He hissed at the she-cat. Wildwind then hissed back. "We need the prey Fireflame! Kits are dying due to our prey!" She snarled. A tom named Cheese was flying threw the air and landed on his back aginst a tree. Fireflame then ran away from Wildwind and helped Cheese up. "Go to Shootingstar, she will help you." He ordered Cheese. Then a beautiful gray she-cat leaped infront of Fireflame. "We have to retreat!" She told her deputy, Fireflame. "Stripeflower is almost-" The she-cat was interrupted by a shriek. "Dead." The gray she-cat finished. "Storm we better go check on Stripeflower!" He hissed. Fireflame then saw Tulipheart pushing through the crowd of fighting cats. "My mother is dying! A tom killed Stripeflower!" She snarled, she then slashed the tom that killed Stripeflower on the cheek, the tom limped away. "Mom wake up!" She shook Stripeflower as hard as she could.
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:35 PM
lol cheese đ
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:41 PM
@izzfred lol yes i had no other name to think of đStripeflower's eyes slowly opened. "Good bye Tulipheart, you were a great daughter." She then closed her eyes and her breathing grew shallower and shallower until all she could do was stop breathing and lay there. Tulipheart started to cry and grabbed her mom by the scruff and carried her back to camp. "Retreat Lightningtribe Retreat!" Storm at Dusk yelled. Cats of Lightningtribe stopped fighting instantly and vanished into the forest. Wildwind laughed hystericaly. "IS that ALL you can do?" She hissed with laughter. "My cats hardly have any scratches!" She then turned to her clanmates and saw that they were a bit scratched. "Well let's head back and tell Wind."She then smiled evily. Fireflame turned to look at Wildwind. 'Something tells me she is up to something.' he thought. But it was too late to look again, He was the only one left on teh battlefield stained with blood.End of chapter 1
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:43 PM
nice ending of chapter one very descriptive and lol"is that all you can do>my cats hardly have any scratches"she looks an the cats have lots of scratches
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:49 PM
@izzfred he he >đ¸ Soft woke up with joy. "Today is the day were becoming paws!" She told three other kits. Mocha was a brown and tan she-cat, Fire was a handsome tom with an orange fired colored pelt like his father, Fireflame. And Eol was a gray tom with black feet. "Do you have to say that out loud?" Mocha hissed. Fire then pushed Mocha. "TODAY IS THE DAY WE'RE BECOMING PAWSS!" He yelled at Mocha. "Duh!" He then got out of the hollow and went to teh top of the rock. Mocha hissed. "Ignorant, Dumb, Stupid Fire!" She snarled. Soft blinked and giggled. "Well let's go and meet Storm at the rock. Mocha got up as fast as she can. Eol then smield at Soft. "After you." He said to Soft.
Deleted • 14 August 2012 at 9:51 PM
albinodragon i have to leave by i'll see you tomorrow maybe and please respond to the 1x1 role-play for you and me đ thanks see you tomorrow maybe bye!