Outsider (story I wrote)

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:00 PM

@puppyloverlauren

Fish can fart?! =O

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:03 PM

@hedwig68 lol i don't know XD

"Did you see that?! Lala slapped her for no reason!" one of the minions started. As if it was a chain reaction, the whole hallway was bursting in whispers.
"Why did she even slap her? That is so rude of her!"
"That was so mean!"
"I caught the whole thing on tape!"
A bunch of comments and insults filled the hallway. I quickly swam away to me next class. P.E.

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:04 PM

@puppyloverlauren

XD Now I am going to have to go look it up online. XD

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:06 PM

@hedwig68 lol XD good luck

"Alright class! Today we are playing dodge ball! Team leaders are Lana and Renji!" Coach Bulk announced. Everyone gasped; Lana and Renji were never against each other. It was like creating a World War 4 or something, both equally strong. After a few punching, screaming, and catfights, I ended up in Lana's team. Like, practically all the girls were on Renji's side, with a few boys, and all the guys, with a few girls, were on Lana's side. I ended up in Lana's side. I sighed in relief, around Lana, I feel more comfortable.
I looked over to Renji's side and saw those girls. I felt anger rising in me; I glared at them picking up a ball, petting it like evil villains pet their cats. I smirked evilly. 'They are going to get twice the pain I got!' I thought. The coach blew the whistle and BAM! I threw the ball and it hit that leader girl square in the face. 'Take that!' I thought.

Deleted • 30 September 2012 at 11:07 PM

@puppyloverlauren I love this story! 😃 More???

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:09 PM

@puppyloverlauren

I discovered that in fact fish can fart. XD They can also burp. XD

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:09 PM

@amulet thank you >///<

"Lala! Detent- OH MY GOODNESS!" Coach Bulk yelled. Great, I was transforming again and my seaweed was all the way in the locker room. I choked, gasping for air. I felt my lungs burn as the salt water coursed my lungs. In the corner of my eye, I saw Lana rushing towards me as she stuffed the seaweed in my mouth.
My breathing slowed and I calmed down as the seaweed took effect. Suddenly the whole class broke into laughter and whispers.
"Oh my gosh! Did you see that! Lana helped a lowly mermaid like her!"
"She shouldn't even be called a mermaid!"
"Ha! Ha! She looked so funny!"
"She was dancing like a madman!"
"Freak Girl!"
"Get out and go back to the nasty human world where you belong!"
I winced at those comments. I slowly got up as the bell rang signaling the end of school. I blew the whistle and Roa appeared in front of me. Smiling a little, I climbed onto Roa's back.
"Come on Roa, Let's go home."

Deleted • 30 September 2012 at 11:10 PM

@puppyloverlauren 😃 oooh!!!!!!!! Do you have more?

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:13 PM

@amulet yes but I'm soon gonna run out of things to post lol XD

Chapter 4
"I'm home mom." I mumbled as I walked up the steps. I slammed the door and climbed on my bed. I closed my eyes as I remembered the pearl and the incident with the class. 'Speaking of the pearl, I don't think I've ever seen a pearl with this color.' I thought. As I was in my thoughts the door bell rang snapping me back into reality.
*Ding! Dong! Ding! Dong!*
"Coming!" I yelled. I swiftly ran down the steps and opened the door. Standing there was my favorite girl mermaid, besides my mom, in the world.
"Lana! It's so good to see you! Not that I haven't recently seen you that is." I laughed.
"Haha, it's good to see you to. Hey, don't be bothered by those comments okay? If I could I would have beaten the daylight out of them!" Lana yelled. I chuckled.

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:15 PM

@puppyloverlauren

I discovered that in fact fish can fart. XD They can also burp. XD

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:17 PM

@hedwig68 oh lol XD

"Yeah okay. Hey, do you want to come inside?" I asked.
"Sure. Hey! Let's make some kelp cookies!" Lana exclaimed.
"Great idea! Wait, where's Renji?" I wondered.
"Oh, don't mind him. His fan girls are currently hunting him and he's hiding." Lana answered. "Such a sissy." She added. Lana and I went inside to the kitchen. After a lot of screaming, things bursting into flames, and laughter, the kelp cookies were finally done.

lynncrow • 30 September 2012 at 11:21 PM

@puppyloverlauren

sweet

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:22 PM

@puppyloverlauren

Yeah. xD "After a lot of screaming, things bursting into flames, and laughter, the kelp cookies were finally done." That sounds a lot like me and my friend. XD

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:27 PM

@hedwig68 oh lol XD

We went up to my room to finish the cookies and watch TV. I almost forgot about those nasty comments until I got a text message.
*Bzzt! Bzzt!*
Lana looked at me with a quizzical face.
"Don't worry, it's just a text message." I told Lana. She smiled in return and continued eating the cookies.
'She's going to get fat is she eats too much.' I thought as I giggled. I opened the tezt messages and frowned. A bunch of nasty and mean comments were in my inbox.

I had only one question.

'How did they get my phone number?"

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:32 PM

@puppyloverlauren

XD

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:33 PM

@hedwig68 lol but thats what I wrote so far TT-TT do you have any ideas?

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:37 PM

@puppyloverlauren

Hmm, not really. Though maybe something crazy could happen that could cause Lana to become mad at Lala and make her side against Lala. I am not good with ideas. *runs away and hides under a rock*

puppyloverlauren • 30 September 2012 at 11:42 PM

@hedwig68

hmmm... so the plot is supposed to be that Lala is being bullied, but Lana couldn't take it anymore and just protected Lala, thus losing her status maybe? I have no idea how to end it XD

hedwig68 • 30 September 2012 at 11:46 PM

@puppyloverlauren

XD It should be something shocking, everyone likes a good twist. XD I am probably not being very helpful. xD

puppyloverlauren • 1 October 2012 at 12:10 AM

@hedwig68 no you are being helpful 😊 how about at the end, she wakes up and it was all a dream 😊 then she goes to school with a bunch of friends around her and her best friend Lana with her too!

you are right! Lana and Lala should fight lol XD but in the dream gotta sleep goodnight!

hedwig68 • 1 October 2012 at 12:13 AM

XD That sounds great! 😃 Night ^^

Deleted • 1 October 2012 at 10:10 AM

@puppyloverlauren it's awesome!!!