Infected

iceyfira • 30 September 2012 at 9:53 PM

No, this is not an RP! I love writing, and on this topic I shall post some things I wrote, and I shall take all of the criticism needed.
😸 I just wanna improve my writing.

Deaths door

Sadness is my stronghold,
Pain is my friend,
sorrow is my only hope,
But of Him I shall see no more.
He brings terror to the children,
An end to the weak,
Mournings to the ones who lost their only friend,
And to those who wish to live no more,
He brings them peace of him.
But the only thing he brought to me,
Was the wish to bring him to his own door.
He brought great sadness to the nations,
He brought famine to the west,
He brought floods the the coastlines,
And Plauges to all the rest.
But I shall not stop,
I shall not sleep,
I shall not eat,
Till Death knocks his own hand,
Onto his own door,
And is sent back down,
to the never-more.
~~~~
~See posts 5, 14 18 35 47 49 for more~

goku • 30 September 2012 at 10:00 PM

@iceyfira o-o

iceyfira • 30 September 2012 at 10:02 PM

@goku

I sound so emo... XD Was it okay? Or do I have to type up some more creepyness?

lola622f • 30 September 2012 at 10:05 PM

@iceyfira

That was great! The poem flows smoothly and it has a lot of meaning. I love it. ❤️

iceyfira • 30 September 2012 at 10:10 PM

@lola622f Thanks~

LE ANNOYING PINGS:
@izzfred
@nightlock
@ems
@jupiter_hollow
~~~~~~~
Here is another creepy one:

Darkness rising,
Waves.subsiding,
Birds stop.singing,
Their lullabys.
For the darkness has has come,
Overshadowing the weak,
For the death in the night has come.
Keep away from the windows,
Chimneys,
And doors.
Keep your children out of harms way,
By keeping them indoors.
The black plauge of dreams has come,
to haunt your very thoughts.

goku • 30 September 2012 at 10:20 PM

@iceyfira Why are you so depressing?

dreamer • 30 September 2012 at 10:22 PM

@Iceyfira I am strangely attracted to your writing. XD I use the same depressing/emo/creepiness when I'm writing.

iceyfira • 30 September 2012 at 11:43 PM

@goku Cause I base my writing on my crappy life. =w= b

@dreamer Why thank you! 😃

goku • 30 September 2012 at 11:43 PM

@iceyfira Ah. I see

iceyfira • 30 September 2012 at 11:46 PM

@goku Lol, not really. Just some of it. Most I get from reading and my major over-maturity as a 12 year old. Usually. Actually, forget that. Im just epic at writing depressive things. XD I SHALL POST MORE.... TOMORROW MORNING!! 8D XD

Deleted • 1 October 2012 at 9:45 AM

@iceyfira you shall influence my nightmares. That deaths door one, I DREAMED ABOUT MY DOG DYING LAST NIGHT! No more I shall leave now.

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 3:04 PM

@izzfred

Oops, I forgot your nine. ^^" Anyways,.thanks for the compliment!

jupiter_hollow • 1 October 2012 at 3:19 PM

@iceyfira Now I... want to make the same topic. :X I dunno XD I love your poems! 😃 I've actually never tried writing one o.o Is it hard? 😋

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 3:28 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Depends. If your me, I just wait until something crappy happens in my life (which is all the time) and I get a flash of insperation. In other cases, like people who arent me, takes them days/weeks/months/years/decades for them to figure out what to write. Yay~ Imma post another~
Btw, your RPs are considered writing, my dear friend Jupe. 😸


Infected

Its killing me,
Killing me,
Its growing right inside me,
Its controlling me,
Keeping me,
from telling you how I really feel.
Its a poison,
a disease,
an infection from the ages...
Why did it come to me...?
Its killing me,
Killing me,
Its a lurking beast inside of me.
Its just waiting,
For the right moment to attack...
This hate,
this infection,
is keeping me from telling,
You how I truly feel....

jupiter_hollow • 1 October 2012 at 3:30 PM

@iceyfira o.o That sounds easy... Hm, I'll try writing something 😋 I'll tell you if it's hard for me XD

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 3:36 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Lol, okay. XP I SHALL POST ANOTHER STORY/CREEPY AS CRUD/SCARY/EMOISH POEM!! 8D














Later. =w= b

jupiter_hollow • 1 October 2012 at 3:48 PM

@iceyfira It's not hard =O Well, it's not good either but eh >.>

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 3:54 PM

@jupiter_hollow

~Laughs~ PM it to meh~ Anyways, ANOTHER ONE OF MY WEIRD LOVEY DOVEY CRAP THINGS! XD Its so weird... and makes no sense...

You always said you would love me,
You always said you would care,
You always said,
We were those star crossed lovers,
Hidden,
In the clouds.
You always said we would never part...
You always said our names were written in the stars!
Why did you lie to me?
Why did you say those things to bring my hopes up high,
But ended up,
Burning them to the ground...
I always said we were to be together forever,
But I guess I was lying to my,
self,
too....

jupiter_hollow • 1 October 2012 at 4:08 PM

@iceyfira Favroutie so far 😋 And mine actually rhymes o.o ...hardly XD

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 4:09 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Poems actually dont have to ryme. o-o Anyways, ty~

jupiter_hollow • 1 October 2012 at 4:10 PM

@iceyfira I knows XD I knows Icy. =3 I;m just not good with free verse XD

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 4:13 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Im good with free hand drawing... xD My friend bothers me sometimes about it, I was drawing Catwoman, and she was all like this:
Friend: Where are the outlines, like the shapes and circles and stuff so you can get a better feel of the drawing?

Me: Erm, I cant do that, I can only do free hand.

Her: Well, ~Starts lecturing me~

Me: ~Falls asleep and drools~

Her: ~Still lecturing~
~~~~~
Anyways, my favorite one is the "Darness rising, waves subsiding" one. And the one on my profile.

Deleted • 1 October 2012 at 5:06 PM

@iceyfira I didn't mean it in a bad way. It's scary. I like scary stuff.

iceyfira • 1 October 2012 at 5:08 PM

@izzfred

I didnt take it offfensivly. 😸 Thanks.

Deleted • 1 October 2012 at 5:12 PM

@iceyfira *lurks*

iceyfira • 3 October 2012 at 7:50 AM

@izzfred I SHALL MAKETH THOU NIGHTTERRORS COMETH TRUE!! >8D

The Vampires

Drink the blood from the hearts of many,
Haunt the dreams of mortals,
Day and Night.
Sing the songs of the hunting blood-fest,
And return to thy castle,
Hands stained in scarlet.
When the Sun rises,
Thou may cower in fear,
But when the Moon glows,
The Vampires strike again.
Blood chilling screams rip through the air,
But to the Vampires,
Its just another meal.
Drink from gold sculped cups,
The blood of many.
Distant screams still fill the air...
Until the Vampires strike again.
~~~
>.> I hope I dont get in trouble for this awesome thing, if I do, the should go think about the things written by R. L. Stine. She writes much worse. Its about Vampires, so thats why its so... /gory/

Deleted • 3 October 2012 at 10:04 AM

@iceyfira O_O

iceyfira • 3 October 2012 at 2:51 PM

@izzfred

My words shall haunt your daydreams,
Your nightmares,
Your very thoughts. =w= b

Deleted • 4 October 2012 at 9:51 AM

@iceyfira

You are the creepiest person I have ever met.

iceyfira • 7 October 2012 at 10:56 AM

@izzfred

Are you kidding? Because if you arent, you are now my bestest friend in the world. ~Huggles you~ Your the first person to call me creepy. I have been called:

Emochild
Weird
Crazy
Demented
Ready made for the underworld
Phycotic
Idiot
Stupid
Demonic
Sent from the Devil himself to scare the souls out of mortals. 😸 This ones my favorite. XD