Dasiystar's Secret

redstar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 5:58 PM

Hello! Everyone! Yes, you are probally expecting a RolePlay. NOPE! This is the acually story~❤️
Anyway, is this the right catigory?


((I am drawing the Title Page now!))

Prologue

Redfrost padded towards a TwoLeg Den.
"Spot," he snarled. "What do you want?"
Spot, a short-furred cream-and-brown-spotted she-cat, leaped over the fence. Two kits dangled from her mouth.
"I want you to have these kits." Spot mewed.
"They're kits!" Redfrost exclaimed.
Spot narrowed her eyes, advoiding his gaze.
"Your kits, Redfrost..."she meowed after a while.

"I...I" Redfrost blinked.
"Their names are Dasiy and Red." Spot meowed. She pricked her ears as her TwoLegs call for her.
"Bye," she mewed, leaping over the fence...
Leaving Redfrost alone with the kits.

"Two questions..." Brighttail, a orange-and-white she-cat, said. A calico tom-kit slept beside her hindpaw.
"Yes..." Redfrost narrowed his eyes.
"Can I name them?" Brighttail licked the white, red-striped tom-kit. Then the long-furred cream-and-brown one.
"No," Redfrost meowed. "They're called Dasiykit," he looked at the cream kit.
"And Redkit," he purred as he said his son's name.
"Can they know they're secret?"
"NO!" Redfrost hissed, starting to padd out of the Nursery. "NEVER!"

"No,Brighttail," he calmed down, still not looking at her. "but, no. They mustn ever know they're secret."

dasiystar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 6:04 PM

@Jupiter_Hollow
@SeaAngel
@PirateSeaz
@PJBuzzy
@lskam

Please Ping more, Thanks!

lskam • 2 October 2012 at 6:07 PM

@redstar-fireclan Nice... *pokes status* IKR D:

redstar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 6:19 PM

@lskam
Yea Dx

Chapter 1

The secrety in Brighttail's gaze scared Dasiykit.
'She's keeping something from me and Redkit...' the kit thought.
Dragonkit, a calico tom-kit, yawned and padded up to her. "Hi,"
"Hi, Dragonkit!" Dasiykit purred. "Wanna play Mouse-Throw?"
"Sure," Dragonkit purred back. "Redkit! Spottedkit! Blackkit! Wavekit!Tinykit!"

All five kits woke up, yawning.
"What is it?" Blackkit, a white tom-kit with a black paw and ice-blue eyes, hissed.
"We're going to play Mouse-Throw." the calico purred.
"Aww..."Spottedkit, a leopard she-kit, frowned. "I want to play Rabbit-Throw!"

"No, you're not!" Spottedkit's and Blackkit's mother, Bramblethorn, hissed. "That's FireClan's favorite prey! If you want to play that, then don't play at all!"
Brighttail nodded. "Yes, Redkit only played Rabbit-Throw because Redfrost let him. A warrior-not us- has to let you play. It's Leaf-Bare, you know."
"Sorry,Mama..."Dragonkit frowned.

Deleted • 2 October 2012 at 6:33 PM

@redstar-fireclan interesting...

redstar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 6:49 PM

@Izzfred
Thanks!

(Still Chapter 1)

Dragonkit threw the mouse in the air. "Spottedkit!" he yowled.
"Got it!" she purred.

A snarl came from behind them.
Dasiykit crouched low. "Wh-What was that...?"
"Nothing," Redfrost said. His teeth showed, a growl rising in his throat.
Spottedkit shrugged, pasting it to Redkit, who missed.
"Badger-Dung!" he spat.

The snarl turned to a bark.
Dasiykit's fur went up. "DOG!"
Redfrost shook his head. "It's nothing."
Dragonkit looked down the hill. "I'll get it!"

The kit padded down the hill. He grabbed the prey, and walked off. A dog burst out of a den, giving chase to the young kitten.
"Run to the Gorge!" Redfrost yowled. The kit did as he was told.

When the cats reached the gorge, Dragonkit was on the edge. The dog pounding after him.
The dog hit him, throwing Dragonkit off the edge.
Dragonkit held to the clief with my claws.
"DRAGONKIT!" Spottedkit yowled.

((End of Chapter 1))

seaangel • 2 October 2012 at 6:51 PM

I like so far.
@redstar-fireclan

Deleted • 2 October 2012 at 6:53 PM

@redstar-fireclan O_O

redstar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 6:57 PM

@SeaAngel
Thanks ^^

Chapter 2

"DRAGONKIT!" Spottedkit yowled.
"Errr..." Dragonkit pushed his way up.
SPALASH!

The dog just landed in the water.
"I'm glad your okay..." Spottedkit rubbed her head against his.
"Um...guys..." Dasiykit mewed. "MORE DOGS!"
Dragonkit's fur bristled. "Not again!" he hissed, getting chased by the other dog.

This time...the dog flung himself, and Dragonkit, into the water.
They hit the water five minutes later...

HARD...

Deleted • 2 October 2012 at 7:09 PM

@redstar-fireclan more? more?

redstar-fireclan • 2 October 2012 at 7:35 PM

@Izzfred
Wild but Human?

Chapter 3

"DRAGONKIT!" Spottedkit raced to the edge.
"Come on," Blackkit mewed. "Let's go to FireRocks!"
Everyone nodded and followed.

"Dragonkit!" Spottedkit, even though she hated water, padded in the ocean. "Dragonkit!"
The young kit breathed very...slowly. Dasiykit knew he was going to die.
Dragonkit coughed. Blood came out.
"Dragonkit..." Spottedkit cried. "Please don't die on me..."
Dragonkit licked her face. "It's my time..." he mewed quietly. "I am sorry..."
Dasiykit lowered her ears. She turned to her father, who showed no sadness or grief.
"You're not sad?!" Dasiykit snarled.
"No," her father meowed. "I only love Redkit."
Dasiykit blinked, tears filling her eyes. Not because of Dragonkit's horrible death...but because of her father...

Hating her...

((Yes Chapters are becoming short.))

seaangel • 2 October 2012 at 7:37 PM

more!!!

iceyfira • 2 October 2012 at 7:52 PM

MORE MORE MORE!! 8D

Deleted • 2 October 2012 at 9:07 PM

@redstar-fireclan more!!!

redstar-fireclan • 3 October 2012 at 4:23 PM

Chapter 4

"Dasiypaw! Redpaw! Spottedpaw! Blackpaw!" The Clan cheered the new apprentices' names.
'I wonder what my Warrior name will be?' Dasiypaw thought. 'Dasiyfrost.'
'Dasiyfrost! That's pretty cool!' Dasiypaw started to padd down HighRock.
"Come on," her mentor, Fangtooth, a brown tabby, meowed. "We're going to pratice fighting."
"Okay!" Dasiypaw purred. She let out mrrrow of laughter as she heard her brother's mentor, Cloudsky, said that they're collect moss.

"Okay," Fangtooth meowed. "First, claws out."
Dasiypaw did as she was told.
"Then," Fangtooth crouched low. "yowl 'Fire Claw!'"
'Um...'Dasiypaw thought, then shrugged it off. "Fire Claw!" she yowled.
Her paws turned to fire, but, to her surpise, it didn't burn her.
"Now attack me."
Dasiypaw stared at her mentor. "ATTACK you?!"
"Yes, come on. It doesn't hurt a FireClan warrior, unless intended to be used as a kill." Fangtooth explained.

((I know ThunderClan,RiverClan,WindClan,and Shadow don't yowl attacks. Apprentices do this when they are training. When they become Warriors, or in battle, they think it so the Ememy doesn't know what to do. Yowling in training helps Apprentices. This Chapter is preeety long, so someone please post,
Thanks.))

@SeaAngel
@IceyFira
@IzzFred

taunter • 3 October 2012 at 4:24 PM

@redstar-fireclan MORE MORE

redstar-fireclan • 3 October 2012 at 4:52 PM

Dasiypaw leaped towards her mentor. She felt her paw slice his shoulder. A small cut was on his shoulder.
"Not bad," the warrior commented, licking his shoulder. "For a apprentice."
Dasiypaw snorted.
She put her claws in.
"RABBIT-BRAIN!" her mentor snarled. "KEEP YOUR CLAWS OUT!"
"Sorrrey!" Dasiypaw snarled back.
"Now, the Flame Tornado." Fangtooth calmed down. "It's a move that helps you run faster, for longer distances, without getting tierd. "
"Cool!" Dasiypaw purred. "Flame Tornado!"
The she-paw raced across the Clearing, running into Fangtooth.
"Oof!" he spat. "Nice job, though."

((Post more, please.))

@Tauner

taunter • 3 October 2012 at 4:56 PM

MORE MORE MORE MROE

Deleted • 3 October 2012 at 4:56 PM

@redstar-fireclan I like it. 😊

fuzzykins412 • 3 October 2012 at 5:20 PM

@redstar-fireclan

MOAR! 8D

redstar-fireclan • 3 October 2012 at 5:29 PM

I could've sorn I posted something O.o? Oh well.

Fangtooth got up. "Now for Flame Tail."
'Flame Tail?' Dasiypaw tilted her head.
"Flame Tail!" Fangtooth yowled, his tail turning into fire.
Dasiypaw's mouth dropped open. "Wow."
Fangtooth nodded your turn.
"Flame Tail!" Dasiypaw watched as her tail burst into fire, making it seem thicker and longer.
"GREAT STARCLAN!" she yowled excitedly.
Fangtooth purred. "Good. We've got one more move."
"Huh?" Dasiypaw mewed as the warrior padded towards water.
"Now, FireClan cats CAN'T swim, or climb trees, but, this move involes water." the bigger tabby meowed. "Flame Wave!"
A giant flame-wave appered. Fangtooth leaped on to it, his paw full of fire.
"This move works better with Fire Claw." he meowed, reaching land.
Dasiypaw padded towards the water.
'Can't swim, eh?' she thought. 'I'll show them. I'll swim at Dawn. My dad will be so proud!'
"Flame Wave!" she yowled, gliding across the water.

((End of Chapter 4))

taunter • 3 October 2012 at 5:33 PM

MORE

redstar-fireclan • 3 October 2012 at 5:35 PM

@Taunter
@Skylight
@Fuzzykins412
and everyone who is here.

Please, before I continue, What do you think so far?

taunter • 3 October 2012 at 5:36 PM

LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED

iceyfira • 3 October 2012 at 5:55 PM

MROW MROW MROW MROW MROW MROW MROW MROW!!!
(More more more more more moe moer more more!!)

redstar-fireclan • 3 October 2012 at 5:57 PM

@IceyFira
I LOVE YA xD!
*Glares at JackoLamp*
But NOT YOU, YOU MOUSE-BRAINED KINUP!

Any...more...odd....Comments...?

iceyfira • 3 October 2012 at 5:58 PM

@redstar-fireclan

Yup. SAVE ME FROM THE EVIL JACKOLAMP!! (ThATS HIS NAME) HE BIT MEHHHH!!! D"8

fuzzykins412 • 3 October 2012 at 8:54 PM

@redstar-fireclan

MOAR! I luvs it! C:

Deleted • 4 October 2012 at 9:46 AM

@redstar-fireclan

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(MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!)

redstar-fireclan • 15 November 2012 at 6:09 PM

Chapter 5

It's been 6 moons sience you've last seen me. I am 12 moons now, and doing my Hunting Assessment. Redstripe and the others are, too.

Daisypaw sniffed the air. Rabbit. FireClan's Favorite prey.
Daisypaw crouched down. She silently stalked towards it. Just as she was about to pounce, a cat leaped on her. The cat was a dark gray tom-paw with blue eyes.
Daisypaw growled, reconizing the scent.
'StormClan!' she thought.
The cat twiched his ears. He slashed at Daisypaw's cheek, leaving a mark. He then raced off, towards the Camp.
'StormClan invading!' Daisypaw raced after StormClan.
Daisypaw leaped on the cat who attack her.
"Stormpaw?" she breathed.
"StormRIVER," The cat snarled, raking Daisypaw's belly.


Yellowstar stood on HighRock, her fur still covered in blood. She told Wavefoot, the new Medicine Cat, to take care of everyone else, even though she was the worse and losted a live.
"I have decited to gove the Apprentices their names for fighting off StormClan." she meowed. "Redstripe, Daisyheart, Spottedheart, and Blackfoot (I know. Blackstar's Warrior Name.)."
The Clan cheered the new Warrior's names.
'Daisyheart. That is also pretty good.' Daisyheart thought. Now, she relized, Stormpaw wasn't the only Apprentice who just got their names, but her and her friends.