Mai Poems and Stories

newlife • 9 October 2012 at 11:17 PM

I have so many of these. XD Here are some examples, I can write something up for you. (No essays gosh golly)
---Examples
---Writing (One)

As the snow suddenly exploded, my dog jumped in front of me and made me sink five feet into the snow. I started laughing, and I petted the soft light brown fur that was turning white. My dog looked at me with a goofy expression, then started licking my face. I pushed her away and sat up.

--- Example Two (Writing)
Darkness, that's what I felt. My heart was ice, and nothing could melt it. Being immortal had it's faults... but nothing could get me out this of coldness.
Each day I would walk into town with my head down with a hat on top and walk quickly. I was doing this one day, when I bumped into someone. "Sorry" is what I muttered, and I kept walking.
It kept happening day after day, and I wondered if it was a coincidence, or fate.

---Poems
---Examples (One)
Down on the steep hills,
Lays a cavern.
Deep inside there is nothing,
Except the cold and dark.

If you look carefully,
Diamonds litter the place.
Each is poisonous,
Touching one means death.

The person inside,
Is frozen by years of work.
Never to see the sunlight again,
They locked themselves in here.

---Examples (Two)

Deep, moonlight skies.
Calming, stroking wind.
Rustling leaves.
Nothing fazes me.

Cries of fear and loss.
Laughter of love.
Pain of death.
Nothing fazes me.

How I wander this world, I do not know.
But I walk around hearing these.
And nothing.
Nothing fazes me.

menagerie • 9 October 2012 at 11:21 PM

@newlife These are lovely! But in the second piece of writing, I think you mean 'coincidence' not 'coincident'

Will you turn the writing pieces into full stories?

newlife • 9 October 2012 at 11:23 PM

@menagerie
Haha fixed~~
And there might be a possibility, but I always quit ><
xD Just me.

iceyfira • 9 October 2012 at 11:27 PM

@newlife

Beautiful. Try adding just a bit more detail, to make it more interesting, more than it already is. 😸

newlife • 9 October 2012 at 11:28 PM

@iceyfira
This is all a rough draft. xD
I usually do add more detail in final edits. c:

iceyfira • 9 October 2012 at 11:30 PM

@newlife

Ah okay. XD Im a speed reader so I tend to miss some things when reading. "XD

newlife • 9 October 2012 at 11:30 PM

@iceyfira
I didn't add that. xD
I just get bursts of imagination. xP
Randomly.
In.
Sleep.
SOMETIMES

menagerie • 9 October 2012 at 11:31 PM

@newlife Aw xD If you ever do make them into full stories, I would love to read them! 😊

newlife • 9 October 2012 at 11:33 PM

@menagerie
Always a hope! XD
Just bug me a lot.
A LOT.