Fabulously Fabulous Writing Contest Extraordinaire! 030

randomkitty17 • 24 July 2011 at 3:49 PM

Heeeeey Guise!
Writing contest!
The prize is....a secret! There will be a prize for best poem and best story. The prizes are different.
You must write one of the following:
1. A short story
2. A poem

RULES FOR A STORY:
1. Must be ORIGIONAL. (example) Don't write a whole story about warriors, even if the characters are your own. :/
2. Be literate. Don't speak in text speak, and make the story somewhat long.
3. Don't make it tl;dr (too long, didn't read.). The maximum is three whole posts. I'm going to get mad if you make me read ten entire posts of your story.
4. The story doesn't have to be about eggcave creatures, but it may if you would like 😉
5. Remember the Terms of Service.
RULES FOR POEMS:
1. Doesn't have to be about eggcave creatures, but it may if you would like.
2. Minimum of two stanzas, maximum of ten.
3. Be origional.

Due date is the 26th.

Have fun!

Deleted • 24 July 2011 at 4:13 PM

May i join?^^ I LOVE LOVE writing❤️

qwaszx • 24 July 2011 at 4:20 PM

@randomkitty17
My Poem:
Mo:
Rarest bird in all of Ark
Fluttering by as the sun goes down
Twittering the most beautiful song
A very shiny egg
Glittering in the sunlight
Sparkling in the moonlight.

randomkitty17 • 24 July 2011 at 4:36 PM

@icicle_9510 sure 😸 it's open to all

@qwaszx very good!

snow_angel618 • 24 July 2011 at 4:49 PM

@randomkitty17 ok here goes!! 😃

ok, so i'll just go w/ a poem...

Deleted • 24 July 2011 at 4:50 PM

May I join?

@randomkitty17

whitefall • 24 July 2011 at 6:57 PM

Do you have to do both the story and poem?

lizardfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:10 PM

@randomkitty17 *wants to join 😊*

Now I have to go tink of something to write about 0.0

solaris • 24 July 2011 at 7:19 PM

Ooooooo! I want to join! 😱

I shall write something tomorrow! And it shall be a poem!

crescentfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:26 PM

(dwaaaahhhh I can't write >.< )

Good luck participants! 😊

crescentfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:27 PM

@avelaingia 😊

Nice poem, I couldn't write a poem if my life depended on it. >.<

crescentfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:29 PM

@avelaingia 0_o

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I suppose I could. But not a good one.

crescentfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:32 PM

@avelaingia What rhymes with "orange"?

crescentfeather • 24 July 2011 at 7:43 PM

@avelaingia


...I shouldn't have asked.

randomkitty17 • 24 July 2011 at 10:27 PM

@bluegirl80 yes it is open to all 😊
@whitefall no, just one or the other
@snow_angel618 great!
@avelaingia love em both, but you need to choose which one you would like to be judged 😊

randomkitty17 • 25 July 2011 at 1:53 PM

@avelaingia okay!

rosey77 • 25 July 2011 at 1:56 PM

Door hinge almost rhymes with orange! 😊

Deleted • 25 July 2011 at 1:57 PM

Poem:
Wind breeze
No more icy freeze
My hair whips around me
As I watch birds gently sleep
The grass is bright
Just like the sunlight
Summer is here
But Fall is near

We have to right a story too, right, @randomkitty17?

randomkitty17 • 25 July 2011 at 1:57 PM

@pwuffy nope, just one or the other 😊

Deleted • 25 July 2011 at 1:58 PM

@randomkitty17 Darn, I shoulda wrote a story then -n-

randomkitty17 • 25 July 2011 at 2:01 PM

@pwuffy you can change if you would like 😉

lizardfeather • 25 July 2011 at 2:01 PM

@randomkitty17
Poem

solaris • 25 July 2011 at 7:10 PM

@randomkitty17
Poem

A flash of pure, unbroken white
Descended down in silent flight.
A Gideh with eyes of dark,
Landed among the people of Ark.

He stretched his wings in brilliant display
And pointed up to show the way.
Approaching Ark at speed unknown,
The giant rock caused cries and moans.

The Gideh stood among panic and fear,
But from his eye a single tear.
The rock hit Ark with force extreme,
Kicking up dust and rock and steam.

A crowd gather 'round the hole it had made.
Slowly panic began to subside and fade.
The Gideh pushed through the throng
And let out a call both loud and long.

Creatures emerged from inside the rock,
And those of Ark began to mock,
For the strangers were different in look.
But from the Archives was brought a book.

Each creature was carefully recorded within
By a pen held in Sparktail fin.
Then both owl and fish told a tale
That caused the crowd to shiver and pale.

The visitors that came from above,
Were ripped from their home of comfort and love.
The Gideh turned and extended his wings
Which a small Tenalp grasped with shiny rings.

Those of Ark admired the Gideh
And asked the visitors to stay.
Now they live in our mountains and plains,
Knowing that our love for one another will never wane.

Deleted • 26 July 2011 at 8:00 AM

Please dont pick the winner yet!😱 iv got to type!!!! XP

scorch_cloud222 • 26 July 2011 at 8:16 AM

Said the old man to the old tree,
Whilst staring at branches barren and free,
"Were I but you, to reclaim my youth
Once the winter is passed,
But keep the lessons of ageless truth
Until I breathe my last."
Still silent it stood, lessons aripe
But secret its words; illegible type.
"Were I but you, to blossom anew
Once the hardships fade
But gain the vigor of daily toil
Until my grave is made."
Then with a gray moan, a wind-prompted speech,
It fell with a crash, its lesson to teach:
"You are like me, you foolish old man,
Once the seasons are gone,
But useful you are to unlearned youth
Until you've ceased to learn."

Deleted • 26 July 2011 at 8:25 AM

Poem that seems more like it should be a song to me:
Going to the Beach

mellyottl • 26 July 2011 at 8:26 AM

[Atop the gate in the old schoolhouse, creatures would whisper over flashlights and fires, there lay in wait a concrete Terron statue that would take flight at night and catching a glimpse of it would allow it to eat your soul.
This was utter rubbish, but it didn't stop young creatures from sneaking in at night. Pomergranate, the Obarn, often exploited this fact by hiding in the hay to ambush them, ensuring that the legend continued to spread and grow. But the odd thing about legends, especially in a place such as Ark, is that as more people believe in them, the more real it becomes.

edited 😋]

Deleted • 26 July 2011 at 8:57 AM

~*~Isphera's Moment of Truth~*~
Isphera glanced around quickly, surveying the area. 'KoolKat and his cove of cowards will never see it soming, they shall surely lose the attack! The Thieves will be hit first, and then the rest of my troos shall rush in, and the cove will be hit.' Isphera thought darkly. The large iramae turned to her top commander.
"Moonlik, I trust the troops are ready?"
"Yes, general," replied a gravelly voice.
"Good."
Isphera turned to her two ragon minion.
"Liadan, Eonzo, are the others that shall be following you two ready?"
"Yessiree!" replied two voices.
"Good, now it's time to fight!" Isphera loomed on the rocky overhang above her troops. "Then... CHARGE!" she roared. Creatures followed the hallowolf Moonlik in one direction, and the rest of the creatures followed the two ragon, Liadan and Eonzo. A squeak of surprise came from the Thieves den, followed by loud shouts, and hollers. Then came loud cries and shouting from the rest of the Cove as Moonlik's troops attacked. Battle Cries were yelled, and total chaos ensued. The worl seemed to slow down around ISphera as she charged across the battle field, unable to be touched by her enemies. Isphera rushed on forward, entering the cove and dashing through the many interlocking caves that made up the Cove of Icicle_9510....

Deleted • 26 July 2011 at 8:58 AM

>BUMP<😊

Deleted • 26 July 2011 at 9:06 AM

Isphera ran straight to KoolKat's Den. 'He's finished!" Isphera thought. "I'll kill him and then, I'LL be the Cove Leader! He's only a 1st stage olimpt!' Isphera broke through the small wooden door of the Den."YOU'RE FIni-" Isphera broke off startled and backed away. The creature in the small cave wasn't KoolKat. "Wh-WHO ARE YOU?" Isphera demanded in a stuttering voice. The creature looked on calmly. "You know who I am." a tiny voice replied. Isphera was confused then it hit her. "Y-you're that little colatay hatchling! The on name -Oils- right?"
"Yes," the little chocolate colored colatay replied.
A moment of silence followed. "Are you sure you want to do this?" -Oils- asked, breaking the silence. Ispjhera was surprised. She closed her eyes, then slowly opened them. "Yes." Isphera said at last. "WHY?" the intensity of the small colatay's voice made Isphera jump. "Because you like hurting others? You enjoy betraying your cove? You-"
"STOP!!!" Isphera cried out, bursting into tears. "It's complicated OK!?!?!" and with that, Isphera ran off.
Isphera's troops won the battle that day, and the War lasted another long month. In the end, quick thinking by KoolKat defeated Isphera, and at her trial, banished her with her two ragon to the Barrenlands. Moonlik was watched carefully, and the others were deemed "Afflicted by the greedy prospect of power," and were allowed to stay. Isphera's name is now nothing more than a name in a story....or is it?