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spirithawk • 29 October 2012 at 8:03 PM
Me and @sungrave are making a story. 😃 5 Pages or more (maybe) will be released a week depending on how popular our story is. 😊 Here's Chapter 1. Enjoy! 😉Chapter 1. The Holy Bible.Our creation, our history. And maybe you won't believe it, but our future. When I was 6 years old, my older sister showed me the pages of the apocalypse and said "Baby, God told us to believe. And if we are weak, the world will fall." Then, she read the lines about wars which haven't happened yet but the prophets said they will. I was a child. I didn't believe her and I made fun of it. I dreamt about an angel fly upon the sky, and fight with demons. I've never thought that it could happen after all. But it did. It really did.#HawkyTopics#HawkyStoriesCritiques are welcome. 😊
despair • 29 October 2012 at 8:14 PM
@spirithawk Hm...it's ok.
spirithawk • 29 October 2012 at 8:18 PM
@despair Okay, thanks for your opinion. 😃
despair • 29 October 2012 at 8:19 PM
@spirithawk Welcome😃At first, I thought it was mocking the bible xD
sungrave • 30 October 2012 at 12:18 PM
soo I made a comic page to the chapter,,,just a sketch but I think it's nice x)http://cridh.deviantart.com/art/A-Story-3-335147561
spirithawk • 30 October 2012 at 1:44 PM
It's nice. 😸Actually, do you think you can make the next page? I'm pretty tired and I don't have many ideas. xD
sungrave • 30 October 2012 at 2:13 PM
'kay, I have some idea so I try it 😸Chapter 2. The ApocalypseIt came like a summer plump. No dark clouds, no cold wind, just a dazzlingly sharp light: for a second the whole world turned into bright. And it begun. Fire swept over the streets, waters came out their bed, dark shadows snatched away people. Was it the Apocalypse from the Bible? Or a simple scientific fail? Nobody knew it but one thing was sure: what happened changed the world absolutely. Most of the people survived it however the world was wasted. But the most mind-bending thing just came after this: the angels. And the demons of course.