New Creature Draft *Need critiques*

luigi • 2 November 2012 at 3:16 PM

I have a cool creature but I haven't finished him out yet I have one graphic picture of him on


http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/547/mysplodergraphic.gif/

so give me ideas on what his egg should look like and how I could put more detail into him.
His name is Bersolic