A story I wrote (part of it) about a cat

stellie • 18 November 2012 at 2:25 PM

Purring softly, Noodles slowly opened his bold green eyes. The sun warming his body as he stretched out in his cat-bed. He stood up and stretched his body some more and yawned widely. He was an American Short-hair, His fur was charcoal and black tabby skin and soft white, which patched is feet, stomach, front of his face and his chest. He wiggled his large body through a doggy-door to the wild backyard. It was plentiful of birds of all types, squirrels, and mice to chase. He quietly strutted off the deck and down the few steps to set his feet on the plush, emerald green grass. He curled is body around the railing and rubbed his cheeks on the wood- He stopped right in the middle of it, Pupils wide and dialated, he went into stalking position. A blue-jay was feeding at the bird-feeder, oblivious to Noodles. Noodles' stealthily starting to sneak up to the bird. He was at the wooden post that held up the bird-feeder. So close, but yet so far. He was directly under the bird. Wiggling his plump behind, he jumped agilely for the bird, Barely touching the blue-jay's tail feathers with his white paw. He loved stalking the animals, if only he could actually catch one! Noodles sat down at the post, and cleaned his paws, gently nibbling on his pads and in between his toes to get granules of dirt and debris from out of his paws. He then amusingly dived to the grass and rolled on his back curling his back toes together and his fronts resting on his belly. The warm morning sun mildly beaming down on him, warming his underside. Nothing could how relaxed and how happy he was feeling~

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cqpkytty • 18 November 2012 at 2:48 PM

Awesome! 😃 Keep writing! 😃

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stellie • 18 November 2012 at 4:19 PM

@cqpkytty

Thanks! I didnt know I was good at writing... until now!