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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 6:00 AM

@jupiter_hollow so your saying that Christineis annoying :,(

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jupiter_hollow • 11 February 2013 at 6:04 AM

@amelialightwing No, just saying she is becoming the center of the roleplay. It's nice that she's beautiful and has a nice personality. But being a ninja... by giving her a ton of abilities you make her the most important character, which might irk a few roleplayers. And the tragic past must be my least favourite Mary Sue trait. I'm not saying she's annoying, I'm just saying that giving her more believable traits, giving her flaws will make her more likeable.

Nobody is perfect and I'm sure not everybody likes a perfect character. 😊

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 6:13 AM

@jupiter_hollow well I I don't want her to be the center of the rp and I I didn't mean to * cry cry cry sob sob* I'm stupid I should have nevr made this rp

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jupiter_hollow • 11 February 2013 at 6:16 AM

@amelialightwing No, don't say that! â˜šī¸ It's a wonderful RP ^^ It's a wonderful idea. But you're new at roleplaying, it's normal to not know what a Mary Sue is. I was way worse than you when I first joined ^^" I was terrible. But I learned step by step 😊 I can help you learn too. It's just four or five universal rules to follow. 😋

I have to go to school now >< But I'll post when I get back ^-^

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 1:47 PM

@jupiter_hollow well did you read it right to be hounest she landed on one of the men dressed in black so the only one who was harmed was the dude

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jupiter_hollow • 11 February 2013 at 1:49 PM

@amelialightwing But she still jumped off a rollercoaster when it was moving and didn't get hurt whatsoever and she did it without a reason so it would've been more realistic if she'd gotten hurt o-o It would've been more realistic if she hadn't jumped at all ^^"

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 1:57 PM

@jupiter_hollow well she did scrap her knee and elbow and it is bleeding fast so yeah she is losing blood while running away from the men in black and plues she didn't think things through so yeah she is in pain and Jack I paralized

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dragonii • 11 February 2013 at 3:04 PM

@amelialightwing sorry to intrude --' you could just edit it or something

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 10:25 PM

@dragonii I just did
@jupiter_hollow edited waiting on you
@ems waiting on you teehee

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ems • 11 February 2013 at 10:35 PM

@jupiter_hollow
@amelialightwing
@dragonii
Gahhhh... Too much drama. O-o *wades through junk* Woo, glad I mad it. 😸 *posts*
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Savvy screamed as the they whooshed down the first slope, her hair blowing out behind her. She laughed in delight. This was truly the best day she'd had since she moved here.
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Ella whooped with exhilaration, the wind tousling her rainbow-colored hair.

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 10:44 PM

@ems awsomeness
@jupiter_hollow sorry that I was being an idiot
@dragonii thanks

Christine screemed with delight and feeling gravity shift on her was kind of fun "WOOHOO THIS IS FUN " she said putting her arms up and just start having a great time

Jack yelled at the top of his loungs with exsightment he just couldent hold it all in he felt like a kid again not an averige teenager "WOOHOO YEAH BUDDY BEST DAY EVER !!!!" He yelled

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dragonii • 11 February 2013 at 10:55 PM

@ems @jupiter_hollow @amelialightwing
Ichinose to short how bout you play were the little kids play
Ichinose: NOOoo!
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I looked at the roler cpater hearing the screames of joy from the roller coster. I stood by the line waiting for the others.
" man my hight has nothing to do with anything" i grumbled mad becuss I coulden get one the rollercoster

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ems • 11 February 2013 at 11:06 PM

@amelialightwing I'm bored. *ride ends* yay, let's do more stuff. 😸
@dragonii xD
@jupiter_hollow
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Savvy laughed until the ride ended, and she leaped off the coaster as it stopped. "Come on, let's go find another exciting ride!" She squealed, pushing through the crowd, oblivious to the men in black standing around.
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Ella rolled her eyes at the happy girl. Just another squealing, excited little idiot, who thought everyone was just as happy as she. Ella snorted, and strode off to find another ride, brushing past the girl and her friends.

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amelialightwing • 11 February 2013 at 11:23 PM

@ems oh well let try to make you have fun
@dragonii poor ichinose
@jupiter_hollow

Christine gets off of the ride and smiles "that was fun let get on another ride" she said with exsightment flowing in her eyes then she looked at her friends and her brother with the same shining eyes it made her feel like everyone is eguil and no one should be left out

Jack gets off and falls down on his knee and laughs "I gess I have not gained my balance" he chuckled then gets up and starts skiping then he sees the men in black "oh no savvy we have to get out of here and fast" he said with a terified face

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dragonii • 11 February 2013 at 11:34 PM

@jupiter_hollow @ems @amelialightwing
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I looked at the rolercoster ending I looked at everyone hopping out of the ride spotting. Christine, savvy, the dude with savvy, and victor
" Finally " I snorted walking up to them.

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ems • 11 February 2013 at 11:35 PM

@dragonii
@jupiter_hollow / @aizel ~ Just in case...
@dragonii
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Savvy didn't hear Jack; for she was already lost in the crowd. Soon, she was far away from her group, and couldn't find her friends. "Whoops." She muttered.
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Ella frowned at the boy and his terrified gaze. Scared of what? Crowds? 'Whatever.' Ella thought.

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amelialightwing • 12 February 2013 at 12:06 AM

@ems uh oh
@dragonii
@jupiter_hollow

Christine turns around and hides behind Victor trying to stay out of sight she trembled at the sight of the men in black and seeing her boss with them she tightens her grip and takes deep breathes to calm her self down she was spoted and now she is in big no her friends are in trouble she just put them in danger she risked everything to keep them safe and now

Jack tried to blend in with the croud and tries to find savvy he takes hisphone out and texts savvy"savvy we need to get out of here and fast" he sent the text and looked for savvy

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ems • 12 February 2013 at 12:17 AM

@amelialightwing Uh oh indeed.
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Savvy didn't feel the vibration of her phone, and had lost all sense of direction. "They can ride with Jack..." She muttered, too lazy to find them all. She ran towards the gate, and her car.
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"Looking for someone?" Ella suddenly asked the boy, pink eyes flashing with curiosity as she seemingly popped out of nowhere.
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Savvy climbed into her car, and texted Christine. "Hey... I sort of lost ya. ^^' I'm heading down to the studio, have Jack drive y'all down there..."

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amelialightwing • 12 February 2013 at 12:33 AM

@ems @dragonii @jupiter_hollow

Christine took her phone out and text savvy back "okay see you there" Christine sends the text and hears one of the men in black say get them and then they rstart running at the direction of us "we have to get out of here and fast come on let's find savvy before she leaves

"Gaaaah where did you come from?" Jack asked turning pale "oh I'm looking for savvy have you seeh her?" He asked ella

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ems • 12 February 2013 at 12:35 AM

@amelialightwing
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"Savvy who? You mean the bouncing blonde chick?" Ella asked, rolling her eyes. "No idea, sorry. I can... Help you look though." Ella replied.
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Savvy pulled out, and headed towards the studio.

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amelialightwing • 12 February 2013 at 10:31 PM

"Thank you" Jack said smiling and starts to follow her

Christine grabs Victor and ichinose's hand and runs "oh no this is not good they know your talinted they even know that savvy is talinted" Christine thinks out loud and tries to run faster then she usaly does " pant pant pant I'm to slow they are going to catch them easily I don't want to have them be stuck in the studio like I'm supost to be I don't want them to be alone like I was" she thought and stops trying to catch
Her breath "go...on with out...me I'll just slow you down " she said panting

@ems gah I don't know what else for Jack to say or do
@jupiter_hollow I'm so sorry â˜šī¸
@dragonii yo yo yo 😸

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ems • 3 April 2013 at 12:28 AM

@amelialightwing We should revive this.

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amelialightwing • 3 April 2013 at 12:44 AM

@hay7199 @jupiter_hollow let's get this on air
@ems yes we should
@dragonii let's get this back on air

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ems • 3 April 2013 at 12:56 AM

@amelialightwing WOOO!
@jupiter_hollow
@dragonii
@hay7199
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Ella stood on her tip-toes and glanced around the crowd. Sadly, no bouncing blondes. "She might have already left... Let's check the parking lot." She suggested, weaving her way to the entrance.
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Savvy hummed a few songs, casually driving down the streets towards the studio.

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amelialightwing • 3 April 2013 at 7:52 AM

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Jake look at the enterance "okay then et go see if she is there" he said grabing her hand and started running

"Oh we missed her "christine said panting and still holding vick's and ichnose's hands still trying to escape the men in black let's go of ichinoses hand and puls out her phone and calls savvy

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ems • 3 April 2013 at 10:34 AM

@amelialightwing
@dragonii
@jupiter_hollow
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Ella yanked her hand away from the boy, a frown on her face. "Excuse me, but I'll do the leading." She said shortly, making her way in front of Jack and grabbing the front of his shirt. Towing him forward, she continued to weave through the crowd, finally making it to the parking lot. "What does she drive?"
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Savvy's phone went to voicemail as she turned the music up, the rings completely lost in the music.

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amelialightwing • 3 April 2013 at 10:47 AM

@ems @dragonii let's just say that Victor went home

Oh my apoligez miss "he said walking forward so his shirt doesn't rip "um she drives a yellow car but I think we missed her"he said ooking for savvy's car then spots christine ichinose and victor "hi guys Seem we missed her christine where is she?!" He asked waveing

Christine taped the end call butten and sighed"she's not awnsering her phone" she said frowning then looks up and sees jake waveing lke a maniac " she's at the stdio do you think ha you can drive use there?"

Jack smiled "sure!" Then looks at the girl with a sour expresion on her face "do you want to come"

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ems • 3 April 2013 at 11:06 AM

@amelialightwing Ella: *shifty eyes*
@dragonii
@jupiter_hollow
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Ella looked a but surprised, the irritated expression melting. "Are you talking about /the/ studio?" She asked. A bit of excitement rose inside her. She'd finally get noticed!

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jupiter_hollow • 3 April 2013 at 11:06 AM

@ems No pingie bro, I'm out 😋

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amelialightwing • 3 April 2013 at 11:14 AM

@ems @dragonii

"Yes the night studio christine says that its really stricted but anyone with talient can be in the studio maybe you can try to get in" jack said smileing

Chrstine felt wobly her head started throbing her heart had this feeling that someone stabed her in the heart she started getting woozy "what is this feeling I I can't think strait I think I ran to much I I feel week to the knees yep I ran to much" she thought then blacked out

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