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sarahzafirah • 13 February 2013 at 5:47 AM

This is what happened at my cove when I left Egg Cave for a bit.
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"Where are you going?" I asked eagerly, as I watched my owner pack her things. "Are we going to the docks? I hope we're going to the Brown Stone Mountains, Sarah! I've been wanting to go there all day!" I clutched my little brother , who was bouncing up and down playfully. She gave me a sad look and eventually shut her suitcase. "I'm going, Bungee. School's catching up and I can't afford to fail my end-year exams. I'll be back one day, you'll see. While that one day is coming, I'll be here to visit, okay? Take care of your brother for me." she said, wavering a bit. She grasped my chin, stroked my snout and gave me an extra-hard kiss on my forehead. She did the same to RibbonYarn, my Tific brother.

"There will be no problem with food, you are immortal. Anyway, if you're hungry some people will come over. It's for the best." She hugged both of us tightly and rushed out the door, her dress fluttering behind her. We were shocked, the two of us. Alone in her room, nothing to eat or drink. "Come on, Yarnie, it's best that Nausicaa knows." I said. Yarnie was still shivering, affected by the sudden shock. I led him down the stairs and into the hall, where Nausicaa was sitting. "What just happened?" she said in her ladylike voice.

"Well, apparently Sarah just left."

"W-why? Is it because she left us to die? Is it because she doesn't love us anymore?"

"No. Nu-nu, she left because of school. She can't afford to fail."

Nu-nu was my official nickname for Nausicaa. She didn't ever like it, but I don't think she cared about her nickname in this situation. She started picking out her gorgeous green feathers out from her wings. "Don't do that, Nausicaa." I said. I tried to sound strong, but tears were spilling down my face. After a few minutes, she decided to see Skava, the second oldest in the family. "You can come, Bunny." she laughed slightly. Nausicaa called me Bunny sometimes. I found it amusing at times, but maybe not this time.
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