Wrighting a story (Critique?)

kalateevolk • 16 February 2013 at 8:32 AM

Ya, I'm writing a story and I don't know if I should continue because I don't know if it is really good. Could you guys please critique please because no one has really yet at all.


http://untoldtales.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=offtopicfanfic&action=display&thread=16119


Also I am not dead. I have been sneeking on the computer to occasionally feed a few of my creatures. (MY computer cought a virus and killed everything onit DX! My parents beleive eggcave caused it, so ya...)