I'm writing a Story

Deleted • 8 March 2013 at 4:03 PM

Please tell me if you like it. Feel free to make suggestions, Tell me what I could do better because I won't take any offense, tell what's good any changes, Anything you can think of.

So here it is.


Living a Nightmare

The last thing I remember was shopping at Claire's in the mall with my best friend. The next thing I know, My dress is ruined and i'm sitting in a waist deep swamp with alligators closing in on me in some dumpster land with toxic plants and gargantuan man eating dragonflies. "Come on!!!!!" I screamed at the top of lungs.

kelch100 • 8 March 2013 at 4:08 PM

@izzfred

Woah I've never heard of such a story! It's weird but kewl too! Write moar and I'll read it. 😃

Deleted • 8 March 2013 at 4:14 PM

@kelch100 thanks! BTW for below my friend suggested the indian thing

I just realized that you don't know me. My name is Kathleen and i'm 14 years old. I have shoulder black hair, brown eyes and I am decended from indians. I am average for a 14 year old. My parents say i'm very stubborn and have a temper but I don't think so, and i'm about to get eaten by alligators! Yay for me!

The only escapes were covered by toxic plants. Suddenly I noticed a vine over me. I couldn't reach it. Just as an alligator was about to eat my leg I jumped on it's head and jumped onto the rope. I started to climb. As I neared the top it started to crack. I jump onto a cliff and just as I let go the vine shattered into pieces and fell into the swamp below where the alligators swam over to eat. "That was close." I said. "If that had been me..." I didn't want to think about it.

Deleted • 8 March 2013 at 4:16 PM

@izzfred cool!

Deleted • 8 March 2013 at 4:17 PM

@moonthief thanks! I'll post more soon/

kelch100 • 8 March 2013 at 4:18 PM

@izzfred

It's still amazing! 😃

Deleted • 8 March 2013 at 4:30 PM

@kelch100 thanks