A story I'm writing!

kalateevolk • 17 March 2013 at 4:49 PM

I reeally really really really want feed back on my story, I beelive mostpeople refuse to read it due to the length but what I cantell themit is probably shorter thanthe adverage book they read. Socansomeone,atleast one person give me some feed back,I have been refusing to postthe nextpart of it because no one seems to be appealed to it...

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