The Eternal Code (Discussion)

twilight_ • 4 May 2013 at 12:09 AM

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@jupiter_hollow
@ems
@pirateseaz

Is there anyone else?

We need to figure this out.

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:25 AM

@twilight_ xD It's my job. *noogie* OK. *rubs hands* It be time for business. WE GONNA LAY DOWN DA LAWZ, SON.

But really...

Is Levi too young? D: I feel bad... Like, Mary-Sue or something. >n< Originally she's a dead 642 year-old, but having her actually be her apparent age is hard; I'm still working out the kinks.... Maybe *gasp* older Levi! XD It'd be kinda fun.... 😋 Blegh, I'm just rambling now, lol.

twilight_ • 4 May 2013 at 12:33 AM

@ems Wowowowow...What? She's a vampire or something? From like the 1300s or something? Don't worry about feeling Mary Sue.

Name: Tinkana Link Enchantica
Age: She's a 16 year old, but secretly lives a life as a 21 year old!
Looks: Beauitful blonde with slight tinge of dirty auburn, light heavenly wings and a beautiful white dress with sequins that cost 500$ and beautiful leather boots
Personality: Smart, funny, beautiful, amazing, good at everything, just flawless
Flaws: What?
Other: She was born from a really harsh family, but like she is so strong and fought, and became this beautiful angel and cold sales everybody and her mother is so regretting now she has a perfect life.

MARY SUE.


I'm not sure if the characters are old enough...Any ideas?

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:39 AM

@twilight_ XD No, it's really complicated, but if you look at the plot of this RP: http://eggcave.com/forums/topic/35070/ she's a demon trapped between realms. Since this was her original stuffs (this is when I first made her) I'm still trying to fit her into the average 12-year old life or whatever. ^^"

Well that's EXTREME! XDD I'm just saying smart kids are afraid of burning buildings... And generally don't join rebellions like Jupe said. >w< So I sort of feel like people are going to be mad at me for making her too brave, or rather, too stupid. ^^"

The biggest problem is I'm rather new with using Levi... 😋

twilight_ • 4 May 2013 at 12:45 AM

@ems Trust me, their going to get way more mad at me han you. Lets think of a genius idea that'll solve everything. And that is really complicated. Ok so maybe...

And life lesson:

Smart kids don't save little kids from burn buildings

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:46 AM

@twilight_ Can it not be complicated? I'm kinda sleepy... 😸 *hugs* Does yous ever feelz liek you needs to hug everyone? XD

Lol... Man, I suck at this stuff sometimes.

twilight_ • 4 May 2013 at 12:51 AM

@ems Yeah I'm sooooo sleepy right now. I needz a huggle *huggles myself*

How about...(yeah I'm bad at this too)

Maybe so these kids are actually the youngest in the whole group, and no one seems to believe in them, but they go on journey to defeat Spirit thing. So they team up and...Yeah.

Ok I'm really sleepy so I'm goina talk weirdly...

I can haz a cheez? Me likey hug...Me wantz huggle fuggles...me wantz huggle...I can haz pillowz? Me sleepeh...Meep

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:57 AM

@twilight_ I've walked a few miles (round school and such~) and went on a bike ride with lots of hills, and it's almost 10pm--zzzZZZzzzzzZZ

I agree with that. .-. we'd have to consult the others...

I just realized something. O_O Levi's 13, and the next youngest kid is like... 16. Q^Q I. HATE. LIFE.

THAT'S IT.

SHE'S FREAKING 14. Even though I hate it. So much. I hate changing my charries' ages... ><

I'm so freaking tired... Glob, today sucks. XD

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 7:38 AM

@twilight_ @ems DUDES! Dx I realized I sorta screwed stuff up for you two... Sorry about that :/

I've got some faint ideas, but... mleh.

It's a time of bombing buildings, blah blah, many people care more about staying alive than actually fighting the Spirit. There is a group of suicidal peole called the Rebellion .3. and they fight the Spirit's mercenaries and save the victims of wipeouts and so on. Those people are very very few. Most of the mature citizens realize how luducrous the idea of actually FIGHTING the Spirit is and they don't want anything to do with the Rebellion. However, many rebellious teens join the organization - most of these teens have lost their parents and want revenge. So Illuse lost her parets at a young age and since she was only __ at the time, she couldn't fight and was left in the healing center to help with whatever she could so by the age of ten or six (whatever you choose) she picked up a lot of stuff.

Now about Levi - Truth be told I actually CAN see this happening 😋 Imagine if her parents were keen rebels? ^^ So they taught her from a very very young age to fend for herself and be strong. So now when the fire breaks out, they leave their little girl at home and go help the victims in the fire. But unfortunately, they find their death amongst the flames .3. So now the other rebels recognize Levi as the daughter of a couple of their rebels and take her in and turn her into a true rebel ^^

Love you people .3.

As for Aizel and Reid - they're both nearly nihilistic (nihilism - not caring about anything) hence the time they've spent witnessing deaths and wipeouts 😋

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:39 PM

@jupiter_hollow ... That idea is so awesome! So ya think I should put that in the form or something? .3. Oh glob, I'm so glad the confusion is over. XD Wait, so they die in the fire that just happened, right? Because then I'll have to fix a few posts. ^^

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 12:42 PM

@ems Idk, whatever you want .3. They can die and maybe she still doesn't know yet ^^ And then she finds out and all. I don't think any of your posts need re-writing or anything ^^"

idk how she would find out though 😋 Maybe identify the bodies or search aroudn town for them... Or maybe there's a list of missing/dead people 😋 We could have a scene of their burial 😱

OI! Imagine if they were the leaders of the rebellion! >w<

And now they have to choose another leader or something 😋

@twilight_ yo homie, wazzap? >w< u liek?

ems • 4 May 2013 at 12:46 PM

@jupiter_hollow ~(o3o)~ Sweet. XD I hate re-writing stuffs...

The list is good, I think. Burned bodies wouldn't be very easy to identify. XD Plus... That'd be pretty gruesome. It'd be awesome if they were the leaders, but that would make me feel all awkward. 😋 I'd want to OK it with Twilight_ or other peeps first. X3

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 12:48 PM

@ems Them being leaders most probably wouldn't involve Levi being a leader too, but maybe they would start heavily training her? 😋 Gosh, imagine if the rebels didn't know their leaders had a daughter and suddenly BAM she shows up xD

@twilight_ We be only ramblin' bruh!

ems • 4 May 2013 at 1:20 PM

@jupiter_hollow Well duh! She wouldn't be the leader, get any special treatment or whatever. I'm just awkward all the time. XD But it'd be awesome if they didn't know. O.O I love writing. ~(o3o)~ Ideas... So many. X3

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 1:50 PM

@ems

Gah, just yesterday I was headdesking 'cause of universal roleplay lag and now my brain is going bonkers xD

ems • 4 May 2013 at 1:51 PM

@jupiter_hollow xD Universal roleplay, you say? Oh my glob, what is that?! 8D Oh, your poor brain. Is it because you had so many ideas, but you couldn't use them? 😋

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 1:53 PM

@ems No, I mean universal lag in RPs xD Just, I'm uninspired for EVERY RP out there - that's what it means.

Arghwuh, nope, all the ideas I don't use just flutter out through my left ear and out into the air like a little singing bird .3.

Gawsh, that sounded so romantic xD

ems • 4 May 2013 at 1:55 PM

@jupiter_hollow Crap. I thought there was a site dedicated to roleplay. *feels stupid* xD Daw, I hate that... Wrier's Block of sorts, I suppose. D: The worst. Freaking. Thing. Ever.

You could write romance novels and poetry. XD

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 1:57 PM

@ems

I'd end up killing one or two or every single yeeping character in my book because I'm completely sure that at one point, the book will turn unbearably sappy xD ME and my depressiveness .3.

ems • 4 May 2013 at 2:00 PM

@jupiter_hollow I imagine the last page would look like this. XD

Then everyone died.

The End.


Page 12

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 2:02 PM

@ems

x'D Omg, yes! Gah, I remember my first post as Caleb!

'Lounging on a bench near the park a lone black and white haired teen puffed a cigarette. The bag under his eyes were indicators that he had not slept for the past few days. His leather vest was hung over next to him - he'd apparently spent a good amount of time there.'

IMMEDIATE DEPRESSION! .3. Just, this is proof of my sappiness and the terrifying flaws that I have xD Oh lemme create a rebel character that is proud and mostly sly. First post: DEPRESSING REVELATION OF MY CHARACTER! x'DDD

ems • 4 May 2013 at 2:05 PM

@jupiter_hollow xDDD In "author's notes" you'd tell everyone that you couldn't take it anymore. 😋

Look at my first post on this RP! XD So depressing..l you're rubbing off on me. XD I hate happy sappy crap now. It's all a lie. XD

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 2:14 PM

@ems And like, the last pages would be coated in tears and the last page - in blood from my suicide xD

HAppy sap? OnO Fawk dat! DEPRESSING SAP IS LOVE AND OTPs THAT WILL NEVER HAPPEN ;A;

ems • 4 May 2013 at 2:16 PM

@jupiter_hollow xD I was going to say you committed suicide, but I thought that was too far! X'D

It happens once and a while. Not like Twilight however. XD But I still hate books with sad endings. ;^; ENDINGS MUST BEH HAPPEH. Heh. Heheheheh. MEOW.

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 2:29 PM

@ems I was planning this book about a nihilist who ends up saving the world xD He doesn't feel anything and he ends up getting stuck with a girl who is from the evil side. They're both nobodies and they both don't care about anything, they're both sinners. Just, the only good character is a little angel girl who ends up dying in my main character's arms and gets him to actually feel a tiny amount of sorrow xD PROOF that I am a weirdo .3.

ems • 4 May 2013 at 2:32 PM

@jupiter_hollow Holy crap that sounds awesome. XD I would read that and die inside. ;3;

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 2:34 PM

@ems Oh and guess what! xD At the end both the girl and boy remain nobodies, but they're nobodies together :'D Nobody knows they saved the entire world .3.

ems • 4 May 2013 at 2:35 PM

@jupiter_hollow Too... Sad.... Can't.... Live.... *dies*

jupiter_hollow • 4 May 2013 at 3:05 PM

@ems It's not a sad ending, it's a nice one .3. Because they don't care if they get noticed, they only care that they're together >w<

ems • 4 May 2013 at 3:08 PM

@jupiter_hollow True. I'm still sad though. XD Poor angel child thing. D: I've killed a character in a story once. XP I don't have the heart to do it.