Summer Creature Suggestion - Desla

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whispers • 9 July 2013 at 1:38 PM

@brookie

Simple, yet beautiful - great job!

But, I do think you should try to show change in maturity of the creature to show it growing. ^.^

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marie_lily • 9 July 2013 at 2:48 PM

@brookie

It's nice, but I don't see any growth. The colors are pretty and elegant.

Please check out my creature suggestion? #flub

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brookie • 9 July 2013 at 2:53 PM

@whispers

Thanks!

@marie_lily

Well it goes from playful (left drawing) to darker and serious looking. Similar to creatures like the Battyrus, Brownil, Clocat, and many others.

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mighty-lair • 9 July 2013 at 6:01 PM

@brookie

I really like the coloring on the Desla with the look of stars on them. Born of the galaxies and living in Ark waters. Very poetic and beautiful to look at.

All the stages have colors that would be worth freezing or depending on how they grow a tab marked, "View Only" would suffice as I recently learned 😊

I would purchase this one in the CSP and buy enough to have one at each stage. I think it could easily be a Monthly creature and a prize at that!

I also think that it would be fantastic as a seasonal creature like the Elge where there is a limited time to get one from the cold and stingy Cave. I mention this option as this type of species has a migration lifestyle and there is no guarantee of seeing one.
Very impressive color theme 😊

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semofox2005 • 9 July 2013 at 6:06 PM

@brookie it's adorable by the way I'm @semo2005 just on side so don't ping me cause I told you my opinion already😊

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aliney • 9 July 2013 at 6:21 PM

@brookie
Love it! (: I love the colors especially and the dolphin! I love dolphins! Though the only thing i dont like is that all the stages look the same or similar except the egg.

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sony • 10 July 2013 at 1:32 AM

@mighty-lair
This is really cute ^^
Simple to be exact, sure it looks more like a real dolphin than the Whoon, but... ☹️ I don't know if this is Egg Cave-potential?
I mean... it should be a little more colorblasting, or more detailed, and not too much alike to the REAL dolphin.

The egg stage, however, reminds me of a penguin with no face! xD At the same time, there isn't much difference between the 3 other stages, they just change poses, that's all =(
Like, you need some additions into this creature, such as vibrant colors (blue is nice, but cookie-cutter for a dolphin, perhaps mid-purple mid-yellow, orange-y?)
And there should be a bigger tail, or some corals, seaweeds, starfish,... etc attached to it to make it look more awesome!

I still love your art anyway, I just don't think that this suits a creature suggestion, sorry ☹️

But good luck ^^~

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brookie • 10 July 2013 at 8:44 AM

@sony

Well the Egg Cave artists can always add things if needed. Thanks.

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sony • 10 July 2013 at 9:08 AM

@brookie
Ya sure then ^^
And you're welcome!

Deleted • 10 July 2013 at 9:13 AM

@brookie
Hey! I was wondering, why did you decide to call it a Desla? 😊

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brookie • 10 July 2013 at 9:30 AM

@cutiepie101

I honestly just thought it sounded cool and different haha πŸ˜‹

Deleted • 10 July 2013 at 9:32 AM

@brookie
Oh LOL! It does sound cool and different. Did it take long to think of the name? 😊

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brookie • 10 July 2013 at 9:40 AM

@cutiepie101

It actually didn't take long at all! I just came up with it on the spot. πŸ˜ƒ

Deleted • 10 July 2013 at 9:42 AM

@brookie
Wow! That's impressive! Well I really hope it gets made! Good luck to you!~ ❀️

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brookie • 10 July 2013 at 9:59 AM

@cutiepie101

Thanks so much! ❀️

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april__ • 10 July 2013 at 4:45 PM

@brookie

Very pretty!

I really enjoy it.

As for the comments about it not showing maturity, eggcave artists can always change things. But there's also a few other creatures that simply seem to change poses and turn out looking quite awesome. πŸ˜ƒ

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wallie987 • 13 July 2013 at 7:58 AM

Cute! 😸 EC needs more dolphins.

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tralala22 • 13 July 2013 at 8:10 AM

@brookie

It looks really cute!❀️ 😸

But if I had to criticize, maybe you should make the poses a bit different on each stage.πŸ˜ƒ But other than that, its perfect!

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indigochan • 13 July 2013 at 12:08 PM

It's sparkly, and it's a dolphin. I love this.

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