Three Kingdoms

epicthings451 • 30 July 2013 at 10:38 PM

Before Embony could actually identify the girl, she heard a bell ring. Signaling that dinner was soon to be ready. She raced to her room with Blaze and Loral trailing behind her. Embony changed into her velvety/silky white sparkling dress. Then she placed a glittering diamond tiara on her head. "What do you think?" Embony asked her two kitsunes. They both nodded in approval. Then Embony gracefully walked down stairs into the dining room. She sits beside her mother and father. Her kitsunes walk to their two plump cushions where they eat their dinner.

@quillbunny are there two separate castles in the white kingdom? Or is there one castle that both princesses family's live in?
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xoxo5959 • 30 July 2013 at 10:57 PM

@quillbunny ok I'm pretty sure Forlan and Tune aren't related. But should they lived in different castle yet in the same kingdom?

lightkiss • 30 July 2013 at 11:05 PM

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No the silver kingdom split in two...

cutebirdy79 • 30 July 2013 at 11:32 PM

Victoria jumps off of Hallow and tells Auscar and Hallow to run out of the black kingdom before they close the gate. They do as she says and Victoria pulls out her bow and her arrows and fires a couple of shouts at the guards before she started to run towards the gate. "CLOSE THE GATE" The guards shouted and then the gate began to close. Victoria began to run faster and before the gate closed she slid under it. "Happens every time" She said as she looked around for Auscar and Hallow. She whistled for them but only Auscar came. "Where's Hallow" Victoria asked Auscar sadly. Then Auscar began to run into the woods and Victoria followed. When they got to Hallow she was tangled in thorns. "What did you get yourself into" Victoria said as she pulled out her sword and began to cut the thorns. When Hallow was out of the thorns she was all cut up so Victoria made her pants shorts and rapped the fabric around her cuts. Then Victoria led Auscar and Hallow out of the woods and towards the white kingdom.

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xoxo5959 • 31 July 2013 at 8:11 AM

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Are the other kingdoms split in two?

quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 8:57 AM

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Uhh maybe 2? Up to @lightkiss

lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 2:26 PM

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No only the silver kingdom

quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 2:30 PM

Okay lets start...?

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epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 2:34 PM

The kingdoms should look the same only they have different colors. If the sliver kingdom has split castles then the other kingdoms have split castles.

'Ones decision is not always the correct one' by-meh

xoxo5959 • 31 July 2013 at 3:04 PM

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Ya why can't the white and black kingdom be split ☹️

epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 3:09 PM

anyways ... i was just confused about the kingdoms and their distance so i created a map.

http://s1330.photobucket.com/user/epicROYALness/media/threekingdom_zpsc2fadb54.jpg.html#/user/epicROYALness/media/threekingdom_zpsc2fadb54.jpg.

What do you think? 😊 If there's anything wrong or something you want me to change just let me know!!!! 😊


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cutebirdy79 • 31 July 2013 at 3:11 PM

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its awesome.

epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 3:14 PM

oh and the only reason why i drew only one castle per each kingdom is because that castle REPRESENTS the kingdom.

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lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 3:18 PM

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Lets just start again

Liran-

Without saying one more thing she summoned her dragon and hopped on she went to the silver kingdom and told her father that she was alright

xoxo5959 • 31 July 2013 at 3:23 PM

Tune walked down to the dining room and sat next to her father and her step-mother. Tune thought "Ugh, more like step-monster." She sat down exacally like her step-mother wanted her to just so she won't ne nagged at again.

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Gots to go. Be back in an hour.

quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 3:37 PM

My characters -

Eveylon, White

Forian, Black

Holland, Silver


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Eveylon rode Shay through the forest back to the castle so she can get her dress on, and eat. "Shay, hurry up." She said to her white clysdale. She looked behimd her to see her dog, Zoey, running behind her. She chuckled her ringing laugh, as Shay turned into the castle gates.

Forian walked down the stairs with his armor on and he walked over to his seat by his mother and father. He looked at the oher royals, that he would soon meet, and smiled.

Holland rode his black and silver fresian unicorn through the woods to the castle. He got off and led the unicorn to the stables. He brushed down the horse, and gave it an apple. "Good girl" He said to it.

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lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 3:37 PM

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K

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Are you gonna post

epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 4:15 PM

@lightkiss yep
@quillbunny are Eveylon and Embony's families in one castle or do have separate?

The waiter came over and placed menus in front of Embony and her parents.

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quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 4:26 PM

Same @epicthings451

Eveylon got in her white sparkly and diamond gown and walked in the dining room. She sat down next to her parents and patted the seat for Zoey to sit on it.

Forian looked at Tune with curiousity. 'Who is she?' He thought. 'I have never seen her before in my life.' He thought as he looked on at her.

Holland ran up the stairs to his room. He undressed and put on his light armor. He lookednout of the window at his unicorn and thought about what he should name her. He shrugged and left his feet barefoot. He ran down the stairs and walked over to his seat.

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epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 4:30 PM

@quillbunny so they're in the same dinning room???

Embony and her parents chose their appetizer...

lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 4:32 PM

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Okay

Liran-

She was going to a meeting at the other silver kingdom. She was on the road then she was attacked by bandits not that far from the castle walls she screamed.

xoxo5959 • 31 July 2013 at 4:34 PM

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Tune looks at the other royals and sees a boy she've never seen before. Her step-mother snaps "Tune, stopped gazing. That's rude." Tune wips her head to her step-mother "Yes mother" Tune looks down at her hands in embaressment (Can't spell 😋 )

quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 4:39 PM

@epicthings451 Yes

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Eveylon ate her supper- turkey with gravy and potatoes.

Forian stopped looking at Tune when her stepmother said to stop. He looks down at his food and takes a bite of food.

Holland hears a girlnscream and he runs out of the castle. The rocks on his bare feet, it is just that he doesnt want a royal to die. He runs quickly to where he heard the scream and sees a girl.

cutebirdy79 • 31 July 2013 at 4:43 PM

Victoria came to a four way intersection but knew that one way was a dead end. Victoria ignored the feeling to cry and continued her journey to the white kingdom. Hallow was growing tired but she ignored it and kept up with Victoria. Auscar kept ahead because he was trained to be a protector. Up ahead Victoria could see the white kingdom. 'Another one of my false homes' Victoria thought as they drew closer to the kingdom. When they were at the gate. "Its you again. Pay your fee and you may enter." The guard said. "Here" Victoria said as she handed the guard 20 gold coins. "OPEN THE GATE" the guard yelled. The gate opened and Victoria walked into the kingdom. Then she turned to the guard. "Where is the healer?" Victoria asked. The guard looked at Victoria and laughed. 'Fine. Don't help.' Victoria thought as she turned and walked away. Then she began her search for the healer.

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lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 4:45 PM

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Liran:

She screamed again as the bandit held a knife to her neck. Everybody wanted her powers. She screamed. The bandit pulled out a soul gem and she screamed even more as he pinned her to the ground to take her soul with the gem

xoxo5959 • 31 July 2013 at 4:46 PM

Tune quietly eats her food and every now and then wipes her mouth. Tune was wondering who's this other boy was. He is probably the prince she is arranged to marry to something. She takes another bite of her lobster

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epicthings451 • 31 July 2013 at 4:51 PM

Embony heard laughter and got up. "Please excuse me" she said to the people at the dinner table. Her kitsunes got up and followed her to the castle entrance. Embony was out in front of the castle. She saw a girl with cuts and bruses. Embony rushed over to the girl. "Are you all right?" she said to the girl. "And were you laughing at her?!?!?!" she said to the guards.
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quillbunny • 31 July 2013 at 4:56 PM

Eveylon ate quietly, not really saying anything.

Forian takes a bite of his baked potatoe and he wonders who the girl is.

Holland runs even faster to Liran. He gets out his sword when he sees the bandit and he pushes the bandit down and kills him. He looks at Liran.

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lightkiss • 31 July 2013 at 4:56 PM

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Liran:

She gasped in horror as the bandit was killed with such skill. She looked at Holland. She saw a certain emotion in his eyes

cutebirdy79 • 31 July 2013 at 5:05 PM

"No don't worry about it" Victoria said. Then she looked at the girl before her. 'Shes a princess' Victoria thought as she bowed. Then she sat up. "Do you know where I can get any food?" Victoria asked as her stomach growled. Victoria then began to look around for food carts but instead she spotted a familiar face. "Hold on a second" Victoria said as she ran towards the peasant she thought she knew. "Timothy is that you" Victoria asked. The peasant looked up at Victoria. "Yes I'm Timothy." Timothy said with a smile. "Oh Timothy" Victoria said as she kneeled down and put her hand on his cheek. Timothy took Victoria's hand in his. "Its not safe for you here" Timothy said. "I know but its not safe for you either." Victoria said as she helped Timothy up. Then she led Timothy to the girl she saw before. "Um sorry about that." Victoria said as she helped Timothy on her horse. "Well me lady. What are you going to do with me" Victoria asked as she took Hallow's lead in her hand. Then Auscar came running up to Victoria and licked her hand, which signals danger. "Um me lady I have to go" Victoria said as she got on Hallow and began to head towards the gold kingdom.

@lightkiss can I make a knight? if I can't then I can drop him later in the story.
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