Turle: creature suggestion:)

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tralala22 • 29 July 2013 at 7:54 AM

😃 I changed the name to Sprile suggested by @karamel 😉

Hi!! This is a creature suggestion for Sprile. It's a turtle-swirly type of thing.xD 😋 hope you like it! Picture is below and description right under. I accept all criticisms and positive comments (duh) 😋

Also, I would really like suggestions on the colour, because I just dumped a bunch of colours on that creature with no idea what to put.😃 oh, and the name.... It's horrible....D: so please tell me if you have suggestions for it. 😉 thanks!😃

Sprile egg and first stage:
http://tralala22.deviantart.com/art/Turle-egg-cave-creature-suggestion-389129793?ga_submit_new=10:1375098019

Sprile last stage:
http://tralala22.deviantart.com/art/Last-stage-of-Sprile-eggcaves-389387592?ga_submit_new=10:1375184780

.About Sprile Eggs:
Wow...are the swirling light growing?

More about the Sprile:
Sprile eggs are usually found in the caves of Ark. They have swirls growing from them. When these swirls grow up to around 10 inches, the egg starts hatching as baby turtle-like creatures start crawling out of it. At first the creature does not have any swirls growing out of it. But later on, in approximately 5 weeks, some light swirls start to grow. In about 5 months, the Sprile is fully grown. A Sprile's personality is generally pleasant and calm and, surprisingly as turtles, they are extremely fast and agile. Many Arkians adopt them because of their stunning and illusional appearance. Despite their popularity, no one knows how they came to exist in the Egg Cave.

Rarity: (You can change this if you want;))
Sprile eggs aren't rare, but they aren't common. They're about 60 in rarity. They are found in the SAR centre.😊

Please comment! ❤️

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@karamel= better description, different name. (X)
@karamel and @danijela= Another stage. ( X)
@kurochi-akuma = first stage and last stage facing different ways. ( )


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danijela • 29 July 2013 at 7:58 AM

@tralala22

It's really pretty. ❤️
I give big,big like! 😊

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tralala22 • 29 July 2013 at 7:59 AM

@danijela


Thanks YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!❤️ No improvements or colour suggestions?😊

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danijela • 29 July 2013 at 8:08 AM

@tralala22

I think that you should make another stage. 😊

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tralala22 • 29 July 2013 at 8:09 AM

@danijela

Hmmm... I will take that under consideration. 😸

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monchhichi01 • 29 July 2013 at 8:11 AM

@tralala22
I like it! ^^ I think everything is good! ^^

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tralala22 • 29 July 2013 at 8:14 AM

@monchhichi01

Thanks you so much!!!!❤️

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karamel • 29 July 2013 at 1:22 PM

@tralala22 Maybe Sprile or Spurle (although Spurle reminds me of spur...)? A combination of turtle and spiral. Or Swurle, but that sounds too similar to 'swirl'. c:

Description grammar fixes:
About Turle Eggs
Wow... are the swirling lights growing...?

More About the Turle
Turle eggs are usually found in the caves of Ark. They have swirls growing from them. When these swirls grow up to around 10 inches, the egg starts hatching as baby turtle-like creatures start crawling out of it. At first the creature does not have any swirls growing out of it. But later on, in approximately 5 weeks, some light swirls start to grow. In about 5 months, the Turle is fully grown.

I think you should include more about the Turle creature itself (such as where it can be found, what sort of personality it has, any weird habits, etc). 😸

As for the rarity, you can't really have a set number for it, as it is based on the amount of alive creatures (in this case, how many are bought from the SAR Centre).

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tralala22 • 29 July 2013 at 7:15 PM

@karamel

Hehe... Thanks for your comments!!😊❤️ I probably will change the name right now to....Sprile because that sounds nice. 😉

Sorry for the grammar mistakes.... I was a bit sleepy then😸
I will change the description and add a bit more to it!😃

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karamel • 30 July 2013 at 6:09 AM

@tralala22 Sprile sounds good! o3o

For your extra description:

A Sprile's personality is generally pleasant and calm and, surprisingly as turtles, they are extremely fast and agile. Many Arkians adopt them because of their stunning and illusional appearance. Despite their popularity, no one knows how they came to exist in the Egg Cave.

😸 Also, I agree - you should add another stage! c:

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tralala22 • 30 July 2013 at 6:45 AM

@karamel It does 😉
@danijela

Should I make another stage in the middle of egg stage and last stage or at the end?😊

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fakeworld • 30 July 2013 at 6:49 AM

@tralala22 Love it, love it, love it!

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tralala22 • 30 July 2013 at 6:51 AM

@fakeworld

Really?❤️ Thanks 😉 No suggestions?😸

Deleted • 30 July 2013 at 6:54 AM

@tralala22
I really like it! *w*
I like the light swirl on the top of the egg, too. The colors on the egg and on turtle's back are just amazing ... hope it will be made. So I can freeze an egg. And get another one fully evolved, too. ❤️

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tralala22 • 30 July 2013 at 6:55 AM

@wererage
Thanks!😃 No suggestions?😊

This following word may make you feel uncomfortable, if its your siganture word. I apoligize for any harm done.😋 :

Woof. xD ❤️

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@tralala22
Not at all. I don't find nothing I would change it it, actually. ❤️
And lol, you can say woof how much you like. We must spread the woof word because yes. ;-)

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tralala22 • 30 July 2013 at 7:02 AM

@wererage

Yay!
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karamel • 30 July 2013 at 7:09 AM

@tralala22 I think you should make a last stage with more spirals. c:

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tralala22 • 30 July 2013 at 7:18 AM

@karamel

Great idea, I will get to it now 😉

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tralala116 • 30 July 2013 at 7:51 AM

I am the side for tralala22

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The last stage of Sprile is here!^^

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@tralala22
OwO Okay, now I plan to adopt three of them. xD The last stage is just too much adorable. ❤️ Yay for bigger diamonds (we are rich now, weeeh!).

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tralala22 • 31 July 2013 at 3:39 AM

@wererage

Thanks so much!!!😊😊

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tralala116 • 1 August 2013 at 4:27 AM

Alive again

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power • 1 August 2013 at 4:35 AM

@tralala22

The Sprile is very beautiful, a model of a creature. The swirls are nice, too. However, if it was to become a creature, would the swirls take up half the space in the viewing space for the creature? Maybe the swirls can be made more translucent and wrap a bit more around the body of the Sprile. It truly is a magnificent creature, and is a great suggestion.

😸

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tralala22 • 1 August 2013 at 4:41 AM

@power

Thanks SOOOOOOO much!😸 Yes, I will do that, an doing you when it's finished. Thanks!

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power • 1 August 2013 at 4:43 AM

@tralala22

No problem. Feedback is my specialty XD

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tralala22 • 1 August 2013 at 4:45 AM

@power
😋

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power • 1 August 2013 at 4:45 AM

@tralala22

XD

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tralala22 • 1 August 2013 at 7:18 AM

@power

Really a thanks!!😊

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tralala116 • 3 August 2013 at 6:09 AM

Alive~~~

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