New Soul - Semi-lit.

moosecake6 • 6 December 2013 at 9:26 PM

@ems I edited how about now can I join please?

Name: Elizabeth
Age(14-19): 16
Gender: F
Appearance: Elizabeth has wide gray eyes that are like two pieces of steel. Her luxurious, straight, chestnut hair is worn in a style that reminds you of a plume of smoke. She has a muscular build. Her skin is white. She has an elegant nose and small hands.She generally wears blue or red. Elizabeth generally is a very social person but she has a troubled past. She is the kind of person who reminds you of a lost puppy. Elizabeth has a horrible sense of direction and gets lost easily.
Bio(optional): Elizabeth grew up with foster parents. She doesn't really know what happened to her biological parents, she just assumes that they either died or were murdered. She struggled with a severe case of depression and cut herself not knowing what else to do. She believed that she couldn't trust anyone around her because everyone had on a mask or some sort. Elizabeth knowing what to do to look normal she put on an act for the rest of the world to see. What she did for fun was generally read or detach herself from the world. At the age of 15 her foster parents died and soon she found herself living here in the city. Unsure of what to do Elizabeth finds herself wandering the streets looking for something, anything to do and some place where she feels she belongs.
Other: Elizabeth's favorite food is a rare steak, followed by a scoop of rainbow sherbet for dessert.

Deleted • 6 December 2013 at 10:40 PM

@ems

Mind if I jump in? 😊

Name: Fang
Age: 19 (Although he's usually older, and a wolf.)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Fang is tall; about 6' 4" well muscled and fairly tanned for a Caucasian. His hair is a bleached-bone white and his eyes are a bright golden variation of hazel. His gaze is always detached and uninterested no matter who he talks to. His face mostly consists of sharp angles and has very little baby fat. He has multiple cartilage piercings in both ears; three helix per ear and two per lobe. These are usually adorned with basic surgical steel studs. He wears dark wash denim jeans that are torn across the knees and slashed across one thigh and both shins; his shirts however, are in much better shape. They are usually darker colors; you'll never catch him in pink, yellow or orange. Most of them are devoid of rips or stains. To top it all off he walks around in steel-toed combat boots. He packs knives in his deep pockets and keeps a Smith & Wesson tucked safely under his belt. He doesn't shoot often but he has excellent aim.

Bio: Has two younger sisters and a baby brother.
Other: MY personal favorite is prime rib, I love it. Fang loves nachos. 😋

ems • 6 December 2013 at 10:49 PM

@featherstar_stormclan @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah @cutebirdy79 Hey buddy, are you going to post?

@moosecake6 I'm sorry, I don't think I'll accept. You don't seem to be all that literate, and this is a sem-lit rp. Would you mind mailing me an example of your writing?
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Storm and Max's laughter drifted down the alley, alerting the others of their presence. Ella drifted up to the pair, smiling mischievously.

"If you guys don't shut it, the cops will find us!" The dark-haired girl teased, elbowing Storm. "Well let them! I'm sure it'd be a fun fight." Storm laughed back. The small trio was engulfed in the group of five or six others, and Max slapped Storm on the back proudly as he quickly explained there'd be new members on the way. Ella rolled her eyes at the pride.

"Well you remember the requirements, right? We're very exclusive." She smiled sarcastically, and Storm shoved her playfully. "Oh come on Ella, believe me, I wouldn't forget." She teased back.

"Well?" Someone spoke up impatiently. "When are they coming?"
"Nine pm. Corner of Fourth and Broadway."

Ella smiled deviously.

"All we have to do now is wait."
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EDIT:
Ah I'm sorry @whitescales. XD I didn't see that. 😋 Accepted~

featherstar_stormclan • 6 December 2013 at 11:29 PM

@ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah @cutebirdy79 @whitescales @ems I thought I posted last. I didn't get other notifications. Sorry.

Tusami slid from her house before slinking towards Fourth and Broadway. "Almost nine." She muttered to herself. "Gotta hurry." And with that Tusami broke into a run stopping only to check the streets.

Deleted • 6 December 2013 at 11:35 PM

@ems Nah, you're good. Thanks for telling me 'bout it 😊
@featherstar_stormclan
@ilovedoctorwho
@sarahzafirah
@cutebirdy79

Fang stalked down a random alley, his hands thrust deep in his pockets. He fingered the military-green switch blade in his left pocket and glared around at the walls. *Some short cut,* He thought while he glared at the grimy brick walls that surrounded him, *Next time I ask for directions I'll pass on asking old ladies.* He slowed his pace when he heard voices drift his way from somewhere ahead. He caught bits of their conversation, something about new recruits and Nine pm at some street. *Typical, I would run into trouble here of all places.* He thought snappishly as he trudged on, his hard gaze resting finally on a group of three delinquents.

ems • 7 December 2013 at 12:07 AM

@featherstar_stormclan Lol, I was talking to CuteBirdy. ^^ She hasn't posted at all yet. And try not to skip ahead yet, we gotta introduce Whitescales~ ^^
@cutebirdy79 Hey, you need to post man.
@whitescales You're welcome~ ;3 @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah
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Ella looked behind her as she heard footsteps. Her coppery eyes fell on very troubled-looking dude. He was much, much taller than her, by about a foot, but this didn't seem to deter the young girl. Ever so carefully, she reached a hand behind her back to grab her pocket knife, which she then held in a way to hide it behind her arm. Storm turned her head as well, her green eyes falling on the boy with a nonchalant gaze. Max simply smirked, his cruel eyes locking on the new meat as well.

Deleted • 7 December 2013 at 12:22 AM

@ems 😃 *BTW, Fang kinda hates the whole world, nothing personal.*
@featherstar_stormclan
@ilovedoctorwho
@sarahzafirah
@cutiebirdy79

Fang noticed one of the girls slowly slip a hand behind her back. He grimaced, *Just great, they're packing. Fine then.*

He stopped a few feet away from them his feet spread in a neutral but easy to maneuver position. His eyes glared coldly and at the group as if he saw them as nothing but dirt. "You punks want something from me?" He snarled and pulled the switch blade out from his jeans pocket, his index finger ready on the release button.

ems • 7 December 2013 at 12:42 AM

@whitescales Don't worry. xD
@featherstar_stormclan @cutebirdy79 @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah
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Ella's neutral gaze became icy in a matter of seconds, just as Storm stiffened. The green-eyed girl stood straighter in the glare of the taller boy. Max's smile fell away and he simply shrugged, letting Ella take the lead here.

"Punks?" She laughed, but it was just as cold as her eyes. "I was under the impression you maybe wanted something from us, coming around here." She tilted her head to the side, letting her straight black hair move with it. Ella no longer attempted to conceal her own knife, rather, brandishing it with a flourish. She looked back slightly at Storm. "Three to one. I think we can take him if it comes to that." Ella boasted. Her eyes flickered back to the other boy.

"Now, we can be civilized, or barbaric. Your choice really, though if I were you I wouldn't want a knife in my throat."

Deleted • 7 December 2013 at 1:03 AM

@ems
@featherstar_stormclan @cutebirdy79 @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah

Fang glanced down at the straight haired girl's knife and smirked. "Punks. Am I making too great of a leap in assuming you know the meaning of the word?" He shoved the switch blade back into his pocket and rested his hand on the back of his belt. "It won't 'come to that'. I don't really feel like filling a bunch of kids skulls up with lead. If you catch my drift that is."

He leaned back and eased the butt of his Smith & Wesson pistol a little farther up out of his belt. "I'm not here for you kids, some senile old hag pointed me down this way. Said it was a short-cut." He said lazily but kept his eyes focused on the trio.

ems • 7 December 2013 at 1:23 AM

@whitescales
@featherstar_stormclan @cutebirdy79 @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah
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Ella frowned at the first comment. "Well she's definitely trying to get you killed." She flicked her knife back into her back pocket. "This is territory of the Lost Souls." She jabbed her fingers back at Storm and Max. "These are my mates. Anyways, I guess I can let you pass with a warning. Meet us at the corner of Fourth and Broadway at nine if you're interested in joining us." Ella stepped past the boy, leading Storm and Max out of the alley.

Deleted • 7 December 2013 at 1:47 AM

@ems @featherstar_stormclan @cutebirdy79 @ilovedoctorwho @sarahzafirah

"Whatever." Fang said as the girl led her friends past him. He stalked past them and out of the alley, "Yeah, I'm definitely not listening to anything that old lady says again." He mumbles.

He walked down the street towards his final destination; the convenient store. He walked in past the clerk and snatched up a root beer, some lays and a box of questionable looking nachos. "I'll take these." He said as he laid the items out on the counter.

"Alright. Would you be interested in a candy bar? They're all fifty percent off today." The clerk asked as she rung up the food.

Fang looked back at the candy section and grabbed a random chocolate bar from the stack. "Here." He said shortly.

The clerk bagged up his food and handed it to him, "Have a good day sir."

"Like that'll happen." He muttered as he walked out of the store, the chocolate already in his mouth.

ilovedoctorwho • 7 December 2013 at 1:55 AM

@ems What should my character do?

ems • 9 December 2013 at 12:24 AM

@ilovedoctorwho Well she could stumble upon another character. Not saying my characters, but perhaps she finds someone else. Interacting with other characters is usually a good place to start.

moosecake6 • 9 December 2013 at 6:17 PM

@ems I edited how about now can I join please?

Name: Elizabeth
Age(14-19): 16
Gender: F
Appearance: Elizabeth has wide gray eyes that are like two pieces of steel. Her luxurious, straight, chestnut hair is worn in a style that reminds you of a plume of smoke. She has a muscular build. Her skin is white. She has an elegant nose and small hands.She generally wears blue jeans and a red shirt or a completely red outfit it all depends on her mood. Elizabeth generally is a very social person but she has a troubled past. She is the kind of person who reminds you of a lost puppy. Elizabeth has a horrible sense of direction and gets lost easily.
Bio(optional): Elizabeth grew up with foster parents. She doesn't really know what happened to her biological parents, she just assumes that they either died or were murdered. She struggled with a severe case of depression and cut herself not knowing what else to do. She believed that she couldn't trust anyone around her because everyone had on a mask or some sort. Elizabeth knowing what to do to look normal she put on an act for the rest of the world to see. What she did for fun was generally read or detach herself from the world. At the age of 15 her foster parents died and soon she found herself living here in the city. Unsure of what to do Elizabeth finds herself wandering the streets looking for something, anything to do and some place where she feels she belongs.
Other: Elizabeth's favorite food is a rare steak, followed by a scoop of rainbow sherbet for dessert.

ems • 9 December 2013 at 6:57 PM

@moosecake6 There was no problem with your form, but I would like an example of your writing. Please mail me an example. Also, rather than posting your form again, I would like you to go edit your other post.