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ems • 3 December 2013 at 9:09 PM
@ilovedoctorwho Dawww@katdemon9 @featherstar_stormclan--Song glared, stuffing the poppy seeds back in Shock's mouth. "You, mister, need to sleep. And don't move, all you'll do is make it hurt worse," she chided, gaining confidence as cats gathered around. She no longer shook with fear like before, carefully spreading more marigold into the worst of his wounds before beginning to wrap them in cobwebs. Song rested a paw on his forehead for no more than a second, sighing as she remembered she shouldn't be showing any signs of her affection. Not yet. She'd have to wait a few moons.Storm padded a bit closer, standing next to Song, who smiled warmly at her before eying her handiwork proudly. "I think I'll let Raven check it over, to make sure I did it all right." She confided quietly to Storm, who smiled and nodded. Song glanced at the other cats, as if confused by their presence.
ilovedoctorwho • 3 December 2013 at 9:20 PM
@ems I know, right!@katdemon9 @featherstar_stormclanRaven returned with Dandelion for Shock to chew for a painkiller and turned to Song. "Impressive work." This was one of the highest compliments to get from him, considering he was often quite quiet. Turning towards the cats, he told them Shock would be fine and he needed his space, causing the crowd to disperse one by one.
Deleted • 3 December 2013 at 9:24 PM
@featherstar_stormclan @ilovedoctorwho @ems "Hnnn,I don't know what to do! I told you!! What do you mean I'm going to find the light!? No! I don't understand!! Don't leave me!! Sharptooth!!" Lightshadow me meowed in her sleep,and awoke with a start. "Sharptooth? No,I forgot,he's dead...That was a weird dream,there's no such cat that will like my personality oh well,I'm going to the pond then back to the camp. Humph,my life is going to be very interesting." Lightshadow thought,as she ran to the pond watching the fish and thinking alone.
featherstar_stormclan • 4 December 2013 at 10:48 PM
@katdemon9 @ilovedoctorwho @ems Hazel scoffed, "Just leave it." He snapped. "She wants a sob-story every time she says something let her."
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 5:15 AM
@featherstar_stormclan@ilovedoctorwho @ems "Ok back to the camp I guess." Lightshadow said and ran to camp she got there just in time to hear what Hazel said. "There was no sob-story! I was only thanking you and the other cats,so if you cats don't appreciate thank-yous then SO BE IT!!! And not everything that comes out of my mouth is a sob-story,so do me a favor,Hazel,don't you DARE talk about me like that again,or I will easily tear up your face,got it!? Now if you'll excuse me,I have business to do." Lightshadow meowed in a normal/angry tone,turning and stalking away from Hazel,her tail flicking wildly to show her anger. 'I am never speaking to those ungrateful pieces of fox dung.' She thougt.Then she left the camp,going to her cave,going to the very back of it and finally letting out her anger,all the shadows came out from her body,going out of the cave and up towards the sky,this was letting out a sort of ringing sound,as she let all the shadows go more injuries came upon her...(forgive me,I'm always dramatic in RP,if it gets annoying tell me please. đ )
ems • 5 December 2013 at 10:06 AM
@katdemon9 @featherstar_stormclan @ilovedoctorwho x3--Song smiled as brightly as she could manage. But that smile fell away as Lightshadow returned, shrieking at Hazel."What in the name of Starclan..." Storm just shook her head. "That cat is more troublesome than me. And yet she has the indecency to shout at us all the way she did." Storm hissed with displeasure. "I'm not sure if she's a 'former' clan cat anymore because she sure likes to bring it up." Storm realized Raven was still there, and hissed more. "I'm off to hunt. Sorry for my... Treasonous speaking." And without another word, Storm stalked off to blow off some steam.Song sighed sadly, glancing back down at her work. It didn't seem so 'impressive' anymore. She sat down, her smile wiped of her face.
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 5:24 PM
@ems @featherstar_stormclan @ilovedoctorwho what's up with hating Lightshadow,I'm just wondering....??"Fine! If they dispise me so much,they can have their way,I'm leaving and I'm now gonna be a rouge. I guess I can live near the cave by the river,and they can appoint a new leader,they can hate me,I don't care......who am I kidding,I do care,I just wish they cared too......." Thought Lightshadow. "Maybe I'll just hide out for a couple of days.....give everyone time to calm down.....and I will apologize too.....not now though..." Lightshadow thought sadly,she put her head down and dragged her tail along behind her,while trekking through the forest. Tears coming down her face in depression,she sank down in a field,then she started scratching her own face leaving deep and bloody wounds,still crying she still wondered how she messed up everything so badly, "I didn't mean to....whatever,I'm a stupid cat,matter of fact I'm not even worthy to be called a cat,if anything I'm a cowardly,stupid,selfish dog!" Thought Lightshadow sinking more and more into depression.
ems • 5 December 2013 at 8:12 PM
@katdemon9 Well she did just start screaming at Hazel, when she could've been a lot less melodramatic and childish about the situation, and huffed off, and now she's blaming everything on herself just to make us feel bad about being irked by her dramatic, sappy speech earlier. Not that the other cats can hear her, but the other roleplayers can. Over-dramatizing and turning everything into silly drama is a irritating for others."Tears coming down her face in depression,she sank down in a field,then she started scratching her own face leaving deep and bloody wounds,still crying she still wondered how she messed up everything so badly, "I didn't mean to....whatever,I'm a stupid cat,matter of fact I'm not even worthy to be called a cat,if anything I'm a cowardly,stupid,selfish dog!" Thought Lightshadow sinking more and more into depression."Okay, what does this even accomplish? What did Hazel ever say that would make her this depressed? If anything, anger was a better option, though the way you went about it earlier can irritate other players and/or characters. Storm doesn't hate Lightshadow, but the constant sappy speeches and screaming for no good reason really makes her upset. See, while another character wouldn't be able to even hear this right now, people have a way of being able to tell what others do when they aren't around. After an outburst like Lightshadow's, Storm is simply left aggravated. Song is left weary and slightly irked that her good work today was out-shined by Lightshadow's outburst, and as a result, is unhappy as well.Furthermore, why would she leave the group after a simple comment? Why would she sink into the deepest depression over something as simple as what Hazel said? Is she bipolar? It makes little to no sense, and all it does is make other people a bit irritated. Drama is good, but too much leaves huge plotholes, and worst of all... Mary Sues. If you go too over board, people will think Lightshadow is a Mary Sue. Which she isn't, but she can become one if you aren't careful with your execution of the drama in your posts.Sorry if I sound rude, I'm just trying to explain a bit and help you. ^^(If it makes you feel better; I did stuff like this all the time, and while it's fun, I look back and think of how silly I was. đ)@ilovedoctorwho @featherstar_stormclan--Storm gave up on hunting, a bit too irked to do so, and instead climbed a tree; the familiar atmosphere and slightly cool air calming her frazzled nerves. She sat in silence, enjoying the peaceful quiet of the forest."So...." Song started awkwardly, "Did I do well enough? Is there ways I can improve?" She asked, almost eagerly as she tried to push Lightshadow out of her mind. The leader had completely out-shined her work; leaving the little apprentice a bit saddened, but ever-so-eager to learn.
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 8:20 PM
@ems ok,look,I'm not trying to be dramatic and she's not doing it to make you feel bad,I'm not doing this RP anymore,it's apparent I can not live up to y'all's role playing standards,so I'm going to leave. And I'm sorry I caused this roleplay to be dramatic,and what right do you have to judge my cat huh? There's no point,I'm outta here, Lightshadow never existed,bye *poof,MEOW!!*
ilovedoctorwho • 5 December 2013 at 8:30 PM
@katdemon9 I haven't been hating on Lightshadow, I'm just roleplaying my characters đ¸ @ems @featherstar_stormclan_____Shock was fast asleep, but he had fought it indeed. Raven shook his head just a bit at Lightshadow's outburst and offered the tiniest smile ever to Song. "You did great, my pupil. But, you must be faster. For every second you lose, another second the patient loses of their life. When you get older, you'll get the hang of it all. And you just saved Shock's life, be proud of yourself!" is what he meant. In reality though, he shortened all of it by just nodding and saying, "Faster. Well done."It's not much, but it held all the meaning of the intended words.Sky softly beamed affectionately at Raven. She knew how highly he thought of his apprentice and now he would be retelling this story to her for days, although she had witnessed it herself. Looking down at Frost - looking quite bored - she motioned with her tail for her to follow and left the area.
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 8:41 PM
@ilovedoctorwho not you, I'm not trying to be whatshername name and I'm not trying to overdramatize anything,I'm just going with my zodiac 'cancer' instincts, I'm sorry if I'm over dramatic I don't mean to,but I resigned so...
ilovedoctorwho • 5 December 2013 at 8:42 PM
@katdemon9 Oh, alright âšī¸Sorry to see you go, hope to see you around...
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 8:45 PM
@ilovedoctorwho yeah,maybe I'll come back,@ems I didn't mean to steal the spotlight from song and I don't even know who that lady you were talking about is.
ems • 5 December 2013 at 9:15 PM
@katdemon9 I'm not saying you ruined the role play, and I'm not saying you aren't living up to our standards. In fact, you even stated that you want us to tell you if the drama got annoying. I'm not judging your character either, I'm just saying you may want to take it down a notch. I wasn't trying to be rude, hurt your feelings, or make you feel bad, but I didn't want the role play to have too much drama, okay? *sees other post*Whoopsies, didn't see that. xD It's okay, I don't mind, it was just the reason Song was upset. ^^ Mary Sue isn't a person, rather a term to describe an annoyingly perfect character, or in contrast, a character so miserable and dramatic that it just irritates everyone. Lightshadow isn't a Mary Sue, but she can become one. ^^ Please don't take my comment the wrong way, I don't want you to leave the rp.@ilovedoctorwho @featherstar_stormclan--Song beamed. "I'll keep drilling myself all night!" She squealed happily, getting the meaning from Raven. She'd quickly learned that while Raven was soft-spoken and never said much, Song could get what he meant rather easily. She nuzzled him and dashed off to the medicine den to begin her own little quiz on every herb it contained. She recited all the uses for every herb to herself quietly, going through as many situations as she could manage to think of. And this is how Song managed to amuse, calm, or enjoy herself. The young she-cat greatly prided herself in her healing, and spent most of her free time collecting herbs or drilling herself. Song loved her mentor and her job; helping cats was much more rewarding than fighting for Song.Finally calm once more, Storm leaped down from branch to branch, landing on the forest floor without a sound. She shook out her dark fur and began padding back towards camp.
Deleted • 5 December 2013 at 10:03 PM
@ems ok, for future reference Lightshadow is going to apologize,and those scratches on her face were never there. And she didn't cry.Lightshadow calmed down and went back to the camp,she leaped on the rock and said "cats of The Storm,listen to me,I'm sorry I got upset and brought up the 'sob-story' it won't happen again and I especially apologize to Hazel for yelling,I got upset when I heard what you said and acted without thinking,I truly am sorry." Lightshadow meowed blushing and stammering a little bit,she jumped down and went to her den. "Gross,I should change these leaves." Lightshadow thought,as she looked at her 'nest' she dragged the bloody leaves out of camp and brought in new ones. She then went and hunted to stock up the food pile bringing back squirrel, bird, a couple of mice, and a rabbit. She set these on the food pile. Then she went and looked for some herbs to help Song and Raven. (She knew the minor ones like cobwebs and marigold) She set those near the medicine cats den,last but not least she got Hazel new bedding and left him a mouse.
featherstar_stormclan • 5 December 2013 at 10:27 PM
@katdemon9 @ems @ilovedoctorwho Hazel sighed as he left the camp. "Wolf!" He called out. "Where are you?"Wolf crouched in the shadows of the cave her breathing ragged. She limped over to a pool of water and saw her reflection, her normally light orange eyes had changed to a very dark amber and her gray fur was ragged and unkempt, despite the size of her muzzle her teeth still stuck out of it and were yellow. Her paws were huge and black nails were where her claws should be. -Why?- She thought. -Why do you choose me to be like this?- She pleaded with the Star Cats.
ems • 5 December 2013 at 10:49 PM
@ilovedoctorwho @katdemon9 @featherstar_stormclan--Storm returned, and upon seeing Lightshadow apologizing, padded right back out. The leader was the last cat she wanted to see, her anger instantly returning.Song thrummed with excitement as she continued drilling through the herbs. She knew them all by heart... There was nothing more to learn. She frowned. These drills would no longer help her... She'd learned everything she could from them. She stepped out of the den, finding the herbs lain there. Picking them up with a smile, she put them in there proper places and exited the den again.
Deleted • 6 December 2013 at 5:42 AM
@ems @featherstar_stormclan @ilovedoctorwho "Huh. All is well then. I think I'm going to go to my den I need time to think...." Lightshadow thought to herself. She went to her den (which was in a darkish corner of the camp) and sat in her nest. Thinking about whatever popped in her mind.......(don't know where to go with this,teehee đ)
featherstar_stormclan • 6 December 2013 at 11:34 PM
@katdemon9 Please don't put things like (don't know where to go with this,teehee đ ) In our posts.Wolf heard voices above her but shook her head digging her paws into the ground. -Get control.- She snarled to herself. -Focus, become normal.-Night slunk out of camp before walking towards where Wolf's scent faded, near what appeared to be a tunnel entrance.
Deleted • 7 December 2013 at 1:21 AM
@featherstar_stormclan fine.Lightshadow slept in her nest,mainly dreaming about the night sky and stars.