What Have I Done? (Redstar's Past)

redstar-fireclan • 16 December 2013 at 3:51 PM

I plan on finishing this story, depending on how many people post. As long as someone posts after each chapter, I will be able to do another.
I WILL ONLY DO ONE CHAPTER A DAY, UNLESS I FEEL GENEROUS, AND THEN YOU WILL HAVE ANOTHER.
Also, I will be having questions after every chapter. Whoever gets them all right (except for opinion ones, if any. Those are automatically right) will get a sneak peek, by PM, of the next chapter.

Now, lets begin.

Prologue

"Mrrow!"
A dark red tom laid on the ground, bleeding heavily from the shoulder. Blood foamed at his mouth.
As a StormClan cat raced past him, he thought, 'No! I CANNOT let them win!'
The dark tom got up, wincing. He gazed around, looking for a close StormClan cat.
"Get out of here, StormClan scum!" the tom hissed, lunging himself at a gray-and-white StormClan she-cat.
"Never!" she spat.
The tom flattened his ears, slashing his claws across her cheek.
"Help!"
The tom whipped around, seeing his apprentice, a small light brown tabby tom-paw, being attacked by a dark gray she-cat.
'No, not Tippaw!' he turned to the gray-and-white cat, snarling, "Get out." and ran to Tippaw.
"I've got you covered."
Tippaw nodded, his blue eyes sparkling.
The dark red tom leaped at the dark gray StormClan cat, clawing at her the best he could while he chased her.
"Darkfire!"
Darkfire turned around, expecting his leader, Flamestar. However, it was his trusted friend, Lionclaw.
"What is it?" Darkfire narrowed his eyes.
"Snowflake..." the lion-like tom panted. "She needs you now."
"In the middle of a battle?"
"Yes, come on!"
Darkfire rolled his eyes, followed the senior Warrior.

At camp, Lionclaw called to a white she-cat with gray paws. "I found him, Snowflake!"
"Really?" the medicine cat whipped around, purring. She ran to Darkfire. "Oh, thank StarClan!"
"What do you want?" Darkfire growled.
Snowflake didn't flinch at the Warrior's tone. "Snowslush had kitted. She wanted to talk to you."
Darkfire's green eyes lit up. "Thank you, Snowflake." he padded to the nursery, where a white-and-gray she-cat was curled around three kits.
"Have you named them?" Darkfire asked.
"Yes, of course." Snowslush meowed. "The silver-and-white she-kit is Silverkit, the red she-kit is Rubykit, and the runt is Tinykit."
"Wait... TINYkit?" Darkfire tilted his head. "No. Let me see the kit."
Snowslush narrowed her blue eyes, lifting her tail.
"How about Redkit? That seems for fitting to me."
"Whatever." Snowslush growled.
"Well, I'd better go back to the battle." Darkfire said, and left.

QUESTION TIME! (most are opinions)
1. What do you think so far?
2. What cats are related?
A. Darkfire and Snowflake
B. Lionclaw and Snowslush
C. Darkfire and Lionclaw.
3. Do you agree with what Snowslush had named Redkit before Darkfire renamed him, or do you think Snowslush was a bit harsh?
4. Do you think Snowslush was happy about Darkfire changing Redkit's name?
BONUS QUESTION! (optional to answer)
What was Redstar's Warrior name?

Deleted • 17 December 2013 at 9:56 PM

@redstar-fireclan I love it!

1. It's AMAZING.
2. Darkfire and Snowflake?
3. I think she was a bit harsh.
4. No.

redstar-fireclan • 18 December 2013 at 2:03 PM

@Dramatic
Thanks!
You are correct on number 2!
You will get a sneak peek at Chapter 2!

Post again and I'll post Chapter 1
(I'm at school at the moment)

featherstar_stormclan • 18 December 2013 at 11:23 PM

@redstar-fireclan
This looks interesting.

redstar-fireclan • 25 December 2013 at 6:20 PM

@Featherstar_StormClan

Thanks.

Chapter 1 coming soon!

quillbunny • 26 December 2013 at 1:57 PM

Looks cool!