EggCave Adventures 1: Dark River

lizkissz131 • 26 August 2011 at 8:20 PM

"Kay" I trot behind me.

redstar-fireclan • 26 August 2011 at 8:24 PM

Ashheart sighs. "I want to go on a jouney-to Dark River-. I've always wanted."

lizkissz131 • 26 August 2011 at 8:25 PM

I stop. "No. Please no." I shake my head in fear.

redstar-fireclan • 26 August 2011 at 8:32 PM

"Belive me! I'm fathers been there! He's been telling me stories- ya know. And I'm wanting to take Crystalstar! Why don't you come? Bring your leader!" Ashheart purrs loudly.

lizkissz131 • 26 August 2011 at 8:41 PM

I shake my head no and back up. "Every Goldox that has been there was either killed or disappered. I'm not taking my chances." I hear a growl and start running back.

redstar-fireclan • 26 August 2011 at 8:48 PM

Ashheart yells back. "MY FAMILY DID TOO! THEY'VE DIED! B/c of the River! ALL THEY DID WAS D.R.O.W.N."

lizkissz131 • 27 August 2011 at 8:14 AM

I look behind me. I was too far away from Ashheart. I start walking to the twolegs house. I scratch at the door. And whimper. The door opens and I walk in. It nice and warm. And I sniff the air, dinner time!! I start running to the nice smells. The give me some food and I curl up on a pillow with my name.

redstar-fireclan • 27 August 2011 at 9:52 AM

Ashheart rans to the house where Ki was. "She's a KITTYPET!" he hisses.

lizkissz131 • 27 August 2011 at 10:25 AM

I look at the window. I run out the small door. I run after. "I know I'm ashamed too. But, they helped me when no body else would!" I start braking down in tears.

redstar-fireclan • 29 August 2011 at 3:51 PM

Ashheart growled. "Idc!" his eyes are full of fire. "I hate you!"

lizkissz131 • 30 August 2011 at 8:49 PM

I go back inside. I curl up by my twolegs. A watch a moving picture in a box.

redstar-fireclan • 31 August 2011 at 3:38 PM

Ashheart cried all night. "I need a hero..." he sighed. He licked his paw.

lizkissz131 • 31 August 2011 at 8:29 PM

Tatto comes up. "Asheart, give Ki another chance. She needs more than you'll ever know."

redstar-fireclan • 1 September 2011 at 4:00 PM

His eyes still full of fire, he turned around. "I DON'T NEED HER!"
Lighting strook.
hE RAN AWAY.
tHE LIGHTING BURN A TREE DOWN (oops caps)


He started yowling this song...hopefully bringing Ki back:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zuyupBmHfVQ

lizkissz131 • 1 September 2011 at 7:29 PM

Once the two legs were asleep I ran outside. I howled in the pouring rain for Ashheart. I started running around the Dark River. I kept doging flaming trees and lighting. I keep howling. The same song that he was singing.

redstar-fireclan • 7 September 2011 at 3:48 PM

He isn't at Dark River yet O.o
@lizkissz131


Ashheart dropped on his belly. "Fire...Flames...Hero.."
He was close to dieing- breathing too much smoke.

"Just another family..torn..."

lizkissz131 • 8 September 2011 at 5:10 PM

I look at a body. I find that it is Asheart. I pulled him out of the fire and into the Twolegs house. They take care of him and wake him up.

redstar-fireclan • 8 September 2011 at 5:12 PM

Ashheart wakes up. "Huh? HISS!" he hissed at the twolegs. 'GO AWAY!'

lizkissz131 • 9 September 2011 at 8:45 PM

"It's okay." I say

redstar-fireclan • 10 September 2011 at 11:01 AM

"No, it's NOT!" Ashheart's fur get up. His tail puffed out.

lizkissz131 • 13 September 2011 at 3:46 PM

"No it is see." I begg for food and they give me a hotdog. I give half it to Asheart and stuff it in his mouth.

lily- • 13 September 2011 at 3:59 PM

@redstar-fireclan

Name:Lily
Age:15
Eye color: (don't fill out if your a Brohu.) A turquise bluey green like a freezing flame.
Fur: Like a Halldrag
EggCave Egg?:Halldrag
Stage (no eggs. Can grow/evolve ): hatched stage
Family:None
Leader:Me (if possible, because I think you said there wasn't one.)
Deputy:None yet (can't do two characters like you lot, I get confused)

seaangel • 13 September 2011 at 4:56 PM

HEY!!

redstar-fireclan • 14 September 2011 at 7:03 PM

@seaangel
SORRY I WAS GROUNDED!AND STILL!


Ashheart spit it out. "EWEWEWWEW!"

seaangel • 15 September 2011 at 7:59 PM

"You are so weird." I hop up on the couch and watch the T.V. It was a romance movie. I sigh. I beg for food. I get a bowl of steak and mash taters. "YUM!" I eat half.

redstar-fireclan • 16 September 2011 at 4:11 PM

@seaangel

Ashheart saw a window. He pawed at it. "OPENOPENOPEN!"

seaangel • 18 September 2011 at 3:14 PM

I laugh at Ashheart. I walk near the door. "Out here." I walk through the smaller door. "See,"

redstar-fireclan • 10 October 2011 at 4:26 PM

"Thank you!" Ashheart's fur rose. "NEVER BRING ME IN THERE AGAIN! EVEN IF I'M HURT!" he hisses and runs off, towards The Dark River

seaangel • 10 October 2011 at 8:18 PM

I run after him.

redstar-fireclan • 6 July 2012 at 11:47 AM

@SeaAngel
Ashheart blinked. A dark river flowed beath him. "Check this out! Dark River!" he purred, putting a paw in the river. He took it out. "It's cold!" He put his tail in river. "I wonder what fish is in here!" just as he mewed that, he was pulled in. "Help!"