Supernatural War ~Discussion~ ((No longer accepting forms...sorry))

cutebirdy79 • 5 August 2014 at 8:14 PM

@lumpkinz11

Here is how I would like your post to go. It's just a suggestion so you don't have to change your post.


Sam smirked as they barked at him. He stood up slowly and put his hands to the side of his body. Suddenly he began to change into a giant monster, that smelled like garbage. He roared and the guards stepped back in terror. One of the guards ran off while the other still pointed his gun shakily at Sam. Sam changed back into his old self and focused on the guard's brain. It was weak and could be easily manipulated, and Sam made him feel the worst kind of fear. A guard took out a knife and throw it at Sam. It grazed his arm and landed beside him. Sam was too into the rush of adrenaline from killing, that he didn't feel the cut and he picked up the knife. The guard fell to his knees and screamed in fear. Sam gave the guard a demonic smile and slid the knife's blade against the guards throat, the guard's blood gushing out as he fell to the ground and died in seconds. Sam pulled away, dropped the knife and his demonic smile returned but somehow more terrifying. It was a smile so demonic that it sent chills up the spine's of anyone that looked at it.

tigerkid0307 • 18 September 2014 at 8:18 PM

@cutebirdy79 could I join as a supernatural girl who has hid herself and was finally found and taken to the camp? I know this was started WAY long ago but this is looks like the best rp ive found. I dont mind if I cant, I just wanted to see if I could. Thx 😸

cutebirdy79 • 18 September 2014 at 8:35 PM

@tigerkid0307 Just post your form hear and I'll think about it. Is that okay?

tigerkid0307 • 18 September 2014 at 9:02 PM

@cutebirdy79
name: Kolby (girl)
Age: 14
Race: human with powers
Placement: T.P.S

Appearance: honey colored hair with lime green eyes, usually wears a dark purple hoodie and Jeans, sneakers, and a braid in hair. light gray feathery wings that show when she Wants to fly.

Personality: Is usually VERY shy. Can kick your butt easily. Fun and very loving

Powers: shapeshifting (is only mythical animals with feather wings) and controlling elements (she controls air)

Backstory: parents were torn wether to give her up or abandon her because she kept freezing, burning, etc. everything. They then abandoned her at an age of 6. Luckily, she was very mature at her age and survived alone. now she's 14 and has still survived in the woods outside the city.

She is hard to get to open up but always cares for everyone and everything.
Other: Teal

EDIT: do I need to change shape shifting into something else because I noticed that someone else has it.

entry: she was at a different camp site when they transferred her to this one. She's been there a month now and meets them when she gets kicked out of Her old group and put into this one.

she often uses fighting skills.

hope this is good XD. Does she get chosen like the beginning of the rp or is that for soldiers?

cutebirdy79 • 21 September 2014 at 9:42 PM

@tigerkid0307 What I have listed below is not in any order so basically what I say is going to be random.

Question(s): Why does she have wings?(This question is just out of curiosity: Why does she like big cats?)

This answers your EDIT question: You could change it to where she could shift into mythical creatures. Also to me, your character's powers seem a little too perfect, if you know what I mean. So could you add a little weakness or downfall to Kolby's form. For example(These are just suggestions. You could choose to use one of them if you wanted to):

Kolby could just shift into mythical creatures and since she has wings, the downfall to that power would be that she could only shift into creatures with wings like a griffin, Pegasus, alicorn, or Roc) and for her secondary power she can control only one element.

OR

Kolby could be able to shift into a Thunderbird; which is a bird that can control the weather like precipitation and lightning but she could also be able to control precipitation and lightning without being a Thunderbird.

tigerkid0307 • 21 September 2014 at 10:26 PM

@cutebirdy79
Ok I really like your first suggestion and I really like it so I will use your suggestion . I dont know why I added the big cats part in, it was like 1:00am and I was tired is my best guess....
Her only element will be air. Just a question (and a stupid one) do you watch Mlp (from the word alicorn)?

cutebirdy79 • 21 September 2014 at 10:55 PM

@tigerkid0307

Yes, I'm a Bronie.

tigerkid0307 • 22 September 2014 at 5:26 PM

@cutebirdy79
yus!! brohoof!

ok so am i qualified for the rp?

cutebirdy79 • 22 September 2014 at 5:35 PM

@tigerkid0307

You are halfway there. You need to edit your form and tell me how you're going to introduce Kolby.

tigerkid0307 • 22 September 2014 at 5:55 PM

ok. Edited
@cutebirdy79

cutebirdy79 • 22 September 2014 at 6:22 PM

@tigerkid0307

Edit your Backstory and since your coming in a long time after this rp started, your going to have to come up with a new entry. I can help you if you want.

tigerkid0307 • 22 September 2014 at 7:49 PM

@cutebirdy79
Luna is best pony!!!!

I have redid backstory

cutebirdy79 • 25 September 2014 at 8:02 PM

@tigerkid0307

Could you please change your entry? It wouldn't fit into the story because of the way the to is right now. You have yo make where she was already a soldier or something and then my characters and the other roleplayers characters meet yours and then they all escape together or you could have where Kolby is on the government's side and is aiding in the assistance of finding the other characters. I don't know what else but I do know that the entry you have would not fit into the scenario we are in right now. Sorry if this is an inconvenience. ☹️

tigerkid0307 • 26 September 2014 at 4:53 PM

K its changed @cutebirdy79

lumpkinz11 • 26 September 2014 at 6:26 PM

Wait did we add someone?
Im sorry im so confused

cutebirdy79 • 26 September 2014 at 9:47 PM

@tigerkid0307

The entry is still a little confusing. Could you send me a example entry paragraph, where you post your post here so I can see how she would meet with the other characters and help them.

Why does she use weapons instead of her powers? I mean I'm not saying she can't use weapons but you haven't really said that she uses her powers to fight. Another question: Can you move the pieces of her personality that are in her appearance to the other section or add a personality section?

Sorry if I'm being mean, pushy, picky or all of those but I just want to understand your character better. ☹️

@lumpkinz11

No we haven't added a new person yet. Tigerkid and I are still sorting out the details of her form. So you don't have to be confused yet. Sorry if this jus confusing you more. ☹️

lumpkinz11 • 29 September 2014 at 8:11 PM

No, it doesn't. I just really Wanna RP. 😊@cutebirdy79

tigerkid0307 • 30 September 2014 at 9:14 PM

@cutebirdy79

Took away bow and arrow, added personality section, hope I'm not being rude 😊

lumpkinz11 • 17 November 2014 at 10:58 PM

@cutebirdy79

Okay so I just wanted to say two things:

1) I just wanted to clear up SAMs sexuality. He is I guess homosexual or bisexual (lets just see where the RP takes us).

2) if the RP doesn't pickup I may leave it for a while and check back less frequently (like once a month) mainly because the RP is too irregular with posting and this RP is the only reason I go on here.

Just wanted to say those few things and I hope I'm not bothering you.

cutebirdy79 • 22 November 2014 at 7:51 AM

@lumpkinz11

Your not bothering me and I'm sorry for the irregular posting on my part.

I want this rp to continue and glad you still want it to too.

Glad to see you got Sam's sexuality cleared up because I was still a little confused. 😊

@kreptacat
Do you still want this rp to continue and are you still in it?

kreptacat • 22 November 2014 at 9:16 AM

@cutebirdy79 Yeah, I was just wondering if we were still doing it O<o

cutebirdy79 • 22 November 2014 at 12:13 PM

@kreptacat We're still doing this rp and I will see to that 😊

starly • 17 December 2014 at 8:44 PM

Name: Alice Greevways (says her name is Nobody if she isnt sure to trust someone)
Age: 20
Race: supernatural w/ powers
Placement: Military
Appearance: She's rather tall at 6'2, with shoulder length red hair and green eyes. She is rather flat, with very little curves and rather fit, so it easier for her to act like a boy to escape if needed. She has a crooked smile, but rather healthy teeth (not perfect, but average) and sharp canines that are just slightly larger than normal. She normal wears and skintight black catsuit with a red vest and shorts over them, and a long red scarf.
Power(s):
Power #1: She can 'connect' the space between two doors, but only a few (3-4) times a day before it starts to damage her body, causing blood loss and nausea before it progresses to knock her out and/or put her in a coma.
Power #2: She also has the ability to resist most mind control.
Backstory: Will rp out.
Other: Orange
Personality (just so i remember, just the basics): She is rather cocky, greedy, and prideful, but can be extremely loyal and kind to anyone she thinks has earned it. Normally her pride gets her into a lot of trouble, since she doesn't listen to someone if she thinks they're trying to boss her around (unless you have her loyalty) and often starts fights over the smallest insults. Alice also finds it hilarious to just pop up out of nowhere and startle people. She doesn't really have a side in the war. Multiple personalities (Pride, Hat, and Mouse) But they tend to be more a hallucination on her part.

(just to let you know, i should be online at least 4-5 days a week, but sometimes i might be gone for a 2-3 days in a row, so if i don't pop up just move on without me, ill catch up)

cutebirdy79 • 17 December 2014 at 9:28 PM

@starly Your form is great. Accepted.

If you want to start you can but try to start sometime tomorrow if you can.

Also to start you off, just have Alice pop up at the camp. If you want she could pop up and save @lumpkinz11 's character or something else but have her start off at the camp please.

@lumpkinz11 @kreptacat

We have a new roleplay buddy!!!! 😃

starly • 17 December 2014 at 10:32 PM

@cutebirdy79 Alright, thanks! i actually might have to start the day after tomorrow because i have work, is that okay with you?

cutebirdy79 • 18 December 2014 at 5:57 PM

@starly

yea, that's fine. But you may have to just have Alice appear because Sam has been rescued.

starly • 20 December 2014 at 9:35 PM

@cutebirdy79 alright then. ^^

cclynn2855 • 12 January 2015 at 1:15 AM

@cutebirdy79
Name:Vala
Age:17
Race:, supernatural w/ powers
Placemet.T.P.S
Appearance: average height but slender long brown hair with a silver streak silver eyes
Power(s): Shape shifting in dog or hbird like animals and amazing ability too be very agile/ fighting skills
Backstory: far too painful to talk about
Other- gold

cutebirdy79 • 12 January 2015 at 10:51 AM

@cclynn2855

You know your not supposed to post until I have accepted your form?

But that's alright and your form is almost completely accepted, you just forgot the part about the other section. In the other section your supposed to put your favorite color so I know that you have read the rules. Just fix that and you'll have an accepted form. 😃

cclynn2855 • 12 January 2015 at 11:16 AM

@cutebirdy79 kk fixed it......come to think about I remember reading it....I guess that's what happens after reading all 18 pages till 3:04 am the rushing to join XD