Need someone to do a creature description

crazydazy0 • 28 April 2014 at 5:35 PM

So, I've thought of this creature, and I think it looks swell. I have the picture all ready, but I need someone to write the description. I prefer someone who is good at writing summer themed pieces, because my creature suggestion is summer themed. Some people tend to lie, so I'll test ya'll...

Rewrite this so it's more interesting:

"The sun shone down on the ocean. Seaweed waved in the blue water."

I'll pick the best one. Whoever wins will get the picture PMed to them and will write the description. If you weren't picked, I'm glad you tried😃! Good luck, ya'll! ^-^

Deleted • 28 April 2014 at 6:21 PM

The burning hot sun shone down on the crystal clear ocean, and it seemed to glitter when the sun hit it. Green seaweed waved in the glittering blue water, and it attracted some turtles from a few yards away.

vampire666 • 28 April 2014 at 6:33 PM

@crazydazy0 - I'll give it a shot. 😃

It was noon and the sun was high and bright. Far below, light glinted off the undulating ocean waves. Seaweed could be seen swaying gently in the currents under the clear, cerulean waters, the green tips clumping together on the surface. Fish and baby turtles danced within the underwater forest.

Wasn't sure if you wanted more description or if you needed something to actually happen, but here's what I got. 😋

crazydazy0 • 28 April 2014 at 6:41 PM

@vampire666

Perfect! You have a good chance of winning. Lets just wait for other users to enter! 😊

vampire666 • 28 April 2014 at 6:43 PM

@crazydazy0 - 😃 Sounds good! Can't wait to see what other people come up with. ^^

crazydazy0 • 28 April 2014 at 6:47 PM

@rushingwater

Oh, nice! Me likes! 😸

spiritkoi • 28 April 2014 at 7:21 PM

@crazydazy0

The cerulean waves glistened as the soft rays of light shone on the sea. Strings of seaweed rode the water to the golden sands, where land and sea met. White foam drifted on the edge, only to be disturbed by the constant motion of the waves. Gulls called boastfully, knowing they were part of this world and the sun, high above in the cloudless sky, radiated a warmth unlike any other. This was the ocean, a place of wonder.

crazydazy0 • 28 April 2014 at 7:35 PM

@spiritkoi

Great! Maybe I could split the writing, cause its so hard to pick!

spiritkoi • 28 April 2014 at 7:56 PM

@crazydazy0 Ya, like egg description and creature description. ^^

sarahsaurus • 28 April 2014 at 9:05 PM

@crazydazy0
The sun shone down on the ocean. Seaweed waved in the blue water
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The sun, recently uncovered from the billowy clouds scattered over the sky, extended its rays and embraced the sapphire waves of the ocean in a warmth so toasty you could almost taste the pure droplets of sunshine melting on your tongue. The glassy reflection resulted in flecks of crystal glimmers over the ocean, giving the appearance of thousands, perhaps millions, of shining fish scales underwater. Thin strands of seaweed swayed in the crisp water as if they were yearning for only a touch of the sun's welcoming warmth. They seemed distraught, convinced that they would never grow to feel the summer heat above the water.

crazydazy0 • 2 May 2014 at 4:04 PM

@sarahsaurus

Nice! Don't see how I can split this writing thing.... Maybe there could be "About the egg" and "About the creature" and "More about the creature".... (°_°)

EDIT: THE WINNERS!

@sarahsaurus <---Egg Description
@vampire666 <-More about the creature
@spiritkoi <---About the creature

CONGRATS! I will PM you the picture. See yas!