Talents

lola622f • 13 September 2011 at 6:41 PM

@seaangel Oh


Kirsten jumped. She never noticed another person in the cage with her. Jasper asked the question again. "May I think about it. . . of course no" Kirsten replied annoyed.


PS. Jasper's hypnotism works on EVERONE.

seaangel • 13 September 2011 at 6:48 PM

"Thank you." I say. The cage opens and I walk out into the light. I look at Jasper. He asked me the same question for over year. "You know my answer." I walk back to the cage and it closes.

lola622f • 13 September 2011 at 7:06 PM

"Hmm. . . then I guess I have to hypnotize you two", Jasper said. Then Jasper hynotised the prisoners.

As for Kirsten she felt relaxed. Jasper told her to obey everything he says once she is out of trance. Kirsten obeyed. Once she was out of trance the cage opened. "Get that", Jasper said to Kirsten. She obeyed imediatly.

Deleted • 13 September 2011 at 7:24 PM

sorry double posted

new plot for me i guess. i'm trying slmething different. i'm not sure if lympha will count as a chafrie if you want her to count i won't make a ne one

lola622f • 13 September 2011 at 7:50 PM

@fluffly its best to have the same characters because they will understand what has happened and everything. I know I sound a bit bossy but it's just my opionion

And should I ping other people in Talents because they're not posting.

lily- • 14 September 2011 at 2:30 PM

Lily was at the lake. Everything there felt, so serene and peaceful. Whenever she came there she didn't wan't to leave, but she knew she had before anyone got worried. She was getting up when an injured squirrel came to the lake. "What's wrong? What happened to you" Lily asked.
The squirrel replied by saying "Thank goodness I found you here. I was passing a cave where I heard voices calling for help. I heard this persons name called Jasper and I think he was hypnotising some people there, because they wouldn't help him steal peoples talents. I think the name of one of the people getting hypnotised was..Wait what was it? Kris..Kir...Kirs yeh I remember Kirsten!"
"No it can't be. Are you sure it was Kisten" Lily asked and was answered by a nod from the squirrel. "Thank you for telling can you show me the way? Though First I'm going to have to the others and tell them the bad news". The squirrel replied with a yes and they went out to find Val, Fiona or well someone, anyone who could help.

"This isn't good" Lily thought, "If what Bitsy (the squirrels name, sorry I made it up on the spot so it ain't that good) said is true then we have to stop that Jasper guy"

Deleted • 14 September 2011 at 5:15 PM

can i still post a new charrie? i'll kil her somehow if things get too confusing.

name- Pericaliya Elias
Age- 14
Description- Very quiet and calm, doesn't get frustrated very easily and can solve almost any problem (but doesn't hsve the super smart talent just has deductive ressoning)
very good at solving mysteries and gold with riddles. Freshman in he highschool thst she USED to go to and was way above graded level. (vut not kirsten smartical like)
*but
physicak descript-slim, but not naturally skinny, does gymnastics so is flexible and has muscle also does tra k so she can run really fast. :-P tan, but not too tan like paleish tan if you can imagine that. Grey blue eyes with flecks of gold when she's facing the light. Light brown hair with dark blonde highlights. A small slim face and body with a smile that looks sarcastic and flashes white teeth when she smiles, which is rather often.
Talent- brilliant with puzzles (although that's not her talent} a socerress who can caxt magic spells of ANY kind. She has a book with incantations ( doesn't know she's a sorcerress yet)
i'll explian her limitatins and how i'd like for the sorcerer thing to work 😱

thanks:-)

lola622f • 14 September 2011 at 6:39 PM

How about this you can make two characters if you want.

Kirsten saw Jasper glancing at her map. The one she made. Oh well, she thought not really caring because of the hypnotism. "Ah one of your friends are coming to rescue you", Jasper chuckled," Kirsten why don't you make a trap for her to not find this place?". Kirsten didn't want to do it but Jasper said so she obeyed.

lily- • 15 September 2011 at 2:16 PM

Lily couldn't find anyone. "Where had everyone gone?" she thought. This wasn't good. She couldn't totally go alone, especially with no preparation. What if there was a trap or something waiting for her so that she could be captured by it? She couldn't risk it! She may be the only one who knew about Kirsten getting captured! She decided to send a few birds to scout the place described by the squirrel, but told them not to change there behaviour in anyway, so no-one gets suspicious. She then followed the squirrel at walking pace to the cave, so that the birds had time to finish scouting and come back with any kind of news.

Deleted • 15 September 2011 at 4:57 PM

Sorry about the wait.

Sorceress Limits and stuff.

((Book Of Spells))
-a bunch of spells that can be cast by the user
-takes energy to cast more complicated spells and spells that need more components.
-all spells are temporary
-alterations in someone's mind are NOT temporary but the spells remain hidden for that
-wizard (sorceress/sorcerer) does NOT need a wand, wands can be used to magnify the power.
-mirrors or reflective devices, binoculars or things like that all magnify power.
-Anything that makes things small do NOT magnify but they are good for spells that require focus.
-Words must be spoken

((Limitations))
IMPOSSIBLES
--can not cast spells without a small token that contains something special to them
i.e. a locket, small book, necklace, bracelet, earing, stone, anything that has symbolic value.

(contined later

seaangel • 15 September 2011 at 7:57 PM

I feel the trance. I follow everything he says. My are tell you I'm screaming for help.

lola622f • 15 September 2011 at 9:15 PM

When the trap was finished there were some birds watching. Kirsten didn't notice and went inside. " Just in case the trap doesn't work stay here" , Jasper said to Kirsten as he transformed into her and went out.

Deleted • 15 September 2011 at 9:16 PM

I guess we'll discover limits later

lola622f • 15 September 2011 at 9:18 PM

@fluffy Yay you're online!!!

Deleted • 15 September 2011 at 9:27 PM

lol not for long. I have like three or four minutes left and then I have to go.... I'll post something XD

((PERICALIYA ELIAS))
It was my first day at a new school. I should be used to it by now. I was always moving. Not more because my dad got a new job or my mom got a new job but to avoid lawsuits. Everything would just happen when I got mad. A kid would explode, the school would just break apart. I couldn't understand what was wrong with me, everything just happened the way it did. But I was always blamed for everything. It wasn't even fair to me, but humans are always looking for people to blame.

Recently, before all this weird stuff happened I found a small book. It was tiny, it was strange that I had even spotted it because it could literally fit into the pocket of my skinny jeans. Now I punched a hole through it and keep it as a necklace. It's hidden in the locket that my mother gave me for my birthday.

I guess I shouldn't have said that my mom would get a new job. I guess she has a job now, watching me down from heaven. I say heaven because she's dead and she'll probably stay that way. I've come to accept it, it's hard but there's nothing I can do about it unless i'm like an all powerful sorcerer or necromancer who can raise things from the dead....

OH WAIT, I'm the sorcerer, or sorceress as people say but I don't think I can raise people from the dead.

I know it's something to do with that book though!

That, pesky, little, book.....

lola622f • 16 September 2011 at 8:35 PM

@fluffy and @lizkissz can you two still have your old characters or at least one you have your old characters(and still have the new one)?? I'm not trying to be bossy or anything but the old characters know more things than the new characters.

meixiaotian • 16 September 2011 at 8:37 PM

Sylpha walked through the halls of school again. Now, she had put herself into a strong position. Whenever the battle came for freedom she would just have to sit back and watch.

lola622f • 16 September 2011 at 8:41 PM

While Jasper was still outside the hypnotism wore off on Kirsten. She realized that Jasper used hynotism. Thinking hard to escape, it was better to act instead.

Deleted • 16 September 2011 at 9:02 PM

@lola662f yeah, that's what I was planning, I was thinking somehow to have my two characters like intertwined if you know what I mean?

((PERICALIYA))
back to what I was saying about that book. There are some things that are better left unsaid though while we're at it, those things might as well have been my past and what I've seen of my future.

My magical talents of course are something that should be known to the world. That's why I was at this weird little place where I would have to learn to control my powers and not use them OR be forever vanquished and all interesting features about me squashed.

((FIONA))
I was talking to Kirsten when suddenly I felt dizzy and told her that I would be off somewhere (sorry about using your charrie @lola622f I just had to think about a way to get me out)

Deleted • 16 September 2011 at 9:03 PM

((continued from @fluffy ))


((FIONA))
I didn't know where I was going to to be exact, that's the funny thing about "life" you never really know where you're going, you just get there and then reflect back onto the process. I ended up back in my dorm room and Lympha materialized next to me.
"How'd you do that?" I asked surprised. I didn't even blink when she snarled, "You've really got to start paying more attention to your life. This is a whole bunch of waste of your talent do you realize that? You can control SHADOWS, don't you want to explore your power?"
I laughed dryly, knowing that sometimes Lympha would be so annoying when she was right, "Lympha, you know as well as I do that i can't use my power in times like this. So you've better stay hidden. My shadow self won't last that long and should be coming back anytime." I fell silent and Lympha stared at me in astonishment, "You created a shadow self?!" she looked at me in amazement.

seaangel • 16 September 2011 at 11:05 PM

KK

LIZ
I go back. i don't know why but, something strange happened. I don't really know how to explain it. As I walk back I call someone something.

lola622f • 17 September 2011 at 11:56 AM

Lol mostly everyone is creating another character. I'm not going to because I kind of created Jasper in a way(but everyone can control his actions).


@Lily-
Kirsten saw the map lying on the ground. Lily was coming. Then a memory appeared in her. When Kirsten was little, she remembered playing with a boy who can change shape to amuse her. But one day he disappeared. Kirsten always questioned her parents but they didn't say anything.


Kirsten watched the map to see what will happen.

lily- • 17 September 2011 at 12:31 PM

Lily was approaching the place when she was intercepted by the birds. They told her to get to the place by taking another direction and after she asked them why, they explained that the way she was going now had a trap waiting for her there. Lily was confused. How would someone like Jasper know where she was, he was a hypnotist not a person who knew where everyone was and then she remembered Kirsten's map. But if she went from another direction, this Jasper person would still see me coming and he may set another trap.

Lily then got an idea. She could stay on the same path but go from above - from tree to tree. She couldn't jump from tree to tree, but he could climb them and the trees in the forest were quite close together and there branches were quite sturdy. She could try walking on them, but she wasn't the best at balancing, though she had to do this, for Kirsten. She just had to be careful and luckily the birds also decided to help her keep her balance when on the branches. She just hoped everything would go well.

lola622f • 17 September 2011 at 12:35 PM

@lily- Yay you're on! How would Lily know that Jasper is a hypnotist?

lily- • 17 September 2011 at 12:39 PM

@lola622f
because the squirrel told Lily that he thought Jasper was hypnotising people when he told her Kirsten was trapped. It's written in my previous posts

Deleted • 17 September 2011 at 12:53 PM

@lily-
@lola622f I'm on too 😊 Now three of us are online!

((PERI))
I sighed as the helicopter dropped me off at a large stately building. it was very beautiful since the architecture was quite lovely and it seemed very well built. Almost like a temple in the modern days. It was wonderful really and I took a liking to the place immediately. There was a problem though with this that I didn't understand. There was something almost sinister about that solitary building just being there. Like it had been abandoned for too long and nobody wanted to have any part of it anymore. I couldn't understand why anybody would want to leave such a beautiful place and was almost immediately put under almost like a trance. She felt peaceful as a woman came out of the building and took her arm. I was led by the woman who introduced herself as Mina Hellon (right that's her name?) and was the principal of this place and worked to keep everything managed.

She lead me towards my new room where there was a strange girl that was lying carelessly on the edge of her bed and playing with a small bouncy ball that she bounced on and off the wall. She caught it and stared at the principal. Mina Hellon walked towards her and whispered a few words into her ear. Then she straigtened and walked back towards me and said, "This is Fiona, she's going to be your new roommate, Fiona's been here for a while and she'll be instructing you on how to go about the school in an orderly manner."

lola622f • 17 September 2011 at 1:01 PM

@lily- oh yeah. Sorry 😊

Kirsten waited being very bored.

lily- • 17 September 2011 at 1:08 PM

@lola622f It doesn't matter.

Lily had climbed the tree and was getting quite close when she started losing balance. Luckily there was a small branch next to her which she quickly gabbed and went back to balancing herself, but as soon as she was back in balance the branch she was holding broke and fell and made a loud thud. Lily went still and hoped no-one noticed.

lola622f • 17 September 2011 at 1:13 PM

@lily-
@meixiaotian Yay you're online.
(Jasper(My second character) )

Hearing a loud noise I hurried to see what happened. If it was Kirsten's friend Lily, I won't hynotise her just to make it fun. I really want to see what the others would do though although they haven't noticed. But then, I can still bribe them.

lily- • 18 September 2011 at 4:34 PM

Lily saw someone moving, but couldn't make out who it was, she just stood still and hoped the person didn't notice her.