Spirit Book 1 Ch.1

Deleted • 17 June 2014 at 11:33 PM

Chapter One – The Kit
A flash of lightning. A clap of thunder. A painful wail sounded from the nursery in Thunder clan. The queen gasped, ‘Starclan! Help me!’ She broke into a spasm and a kit was born. It was a flame-coloured. The medicine cat called, ‘It’s a she-kit!’ The queen called Frostpelt meowed, ‘I shall call her Flamekit.’ The kit’s father Harvest- claw padded in and licked the kit. The kit meowed and stood up. The whole nursery gasped. It isn’t normal for a newborn kit to stand up so early! The clan leader Firestar, who had just walked in exclaimed, ‘What -----.’ He hurried after Leafpool the medicine cat, who just left the nursery to get some herbs for the queen.

Pls tell me how you feel about this first chapter. ^~^

awkolicious • 20 June 2014 at 6:47 PM

I think the chapter was a little short but cool.