My Awesome (I think) Song, PLEASE Rate, again!

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roversydneygirl • 23 August 2011 at 2:34 PM

Here is my awesome (I think) song (you may have seen this in the Suggestions & Ideas section, that was the wrong one. I'll try here!)!

We just keep running through.
Through the night.
We ain't stopping for nobody,
Not even you.
Cause we've got things to do.

*instrumental 3 second break*

This, this, this,
This is our time, our time.
This, this, this,
This is our time, our time.
This, this, this,
This is our tiiiiime.
Don't you keep on bugging;
We just walk right past.
We don't have stuff to say,
Cause we gotta leave fast.

*instrumental 3 second break*

We got everything we need.
Clothes, drinks, food, and all.
But we won't pick up our phones,
So forget all calls.
We got a mission to complete.
Our reward is sweet!
But just don't forget (No, no, no);
Just don't forget;

*instrumental 3 second break*

This, this, this,
This is our time, our time.
This, this, this,
This is our time, our time.
This, this, this,
This is our tiiiiime.
Don't you keep on bugging;
We just walk right past.
We don't have stuff to say,
Cause we gotta leave fast.

That's all I have so far. I think it's done, but I have 3 questions for Egg Cavers.

1. What's a good name for it?
2. Does it need more verses/content?
3. Do you rate it great (5), good (4), okay (3), not so good (2) or really bad (1)? I f you really hate it, put 0.

Thank you! Ping some people you know if you think it is good or great!

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