plz help

unebra • 28 August 2011 at 3:40 PM

i have a launguage arts project due tomarrow so can someone help me

ok i have to right a story i have the character robin hood and seanu and the scene is under water can some one post so i can put then rest 😃

pipkitten • 28 August 2011 at 3:41 PM

*post*

unebra • 28 August 2011 at 3:43 PM

setting:under the sea
protagonist: robin hood
antogonist:seanu

one day robin hood was walking through the woods when, he saw monkey tracks on the dirt trail , he wondered what monkey track were doing in the middle of the forest, he looked up and as he started back down the trail when he saw a monkey in front of him ? the monkey said "i am seanu" a talking monkey thought, robin hood am i dreaming ? suddenly behind Seanu the thick leaves turned into a beach and night sky Seanu suddenly grabbed Robin Hood's foot and dragged him into the dark sea as Robin Hood try?s to get away but cant.
robin hood wakes up the next day ....
(this is what i have so far)

elysian • 28 August 2011 at 4:26 PM

what do you want the help with?

trish • 28 August 2011 at 4:27 PM

@unebra I hope you fixed your grammar mistakes on the final draft! 😱