Kelpa's Description Reads Wrong

Deleted • 5 May 2016 at 10:53 PM

I noticed it a few days ago, but it hasn't really bothered me til now ^^;

In the egg's description, it currently reads "in a sand well upon ark's beaches." It doesn't really make sense and it doesn't flow well. Also pretty sure it's grammatically incorrect .___. It should read, "in the sand well up on ark's beaches." I can check my original description, as I do have it saved, but I'm positive that's how I originally wrote it ^^; any chance it could be fixed?

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jazzyleia • 6 May 2016 at 8:11 AM

@mcmelody

I have changed the upon to up on but as I am reading it, the "a" seems more correct than replacing it with a "the". Because it references towards just any sand well rather than a specific one. I guess that is how I'm reading it.

Deleted • 6 May 2016 at 8:14 AM

@jazzyleia

It's not saying it's buried in a sand well, though ^^; well goes with up on- like that ball is well up on the roof and can't be reached.

EDIT: Looked up what a sand well actually is. It's the initial starting point for a well to be put it o-o

jazzyleia • 6 May 2016 at 11:04 AM

@mcmelody
Okay I see now. Changed that around. Does it read right now?

Deleted • 6 May 2016 at 11:09 AM

@jazzyleia

It does c: Thank you!