Lycire Creature Description

cirrus • 17 July 2016 at 1:14 PM

I was just looking and the Lycire creature description in the archives and noticed two fairly obvious grammar errors. The first being that it says "This means they constantly covered in ash and cooling embers." The second problem is in the following sentence where it says, "This does not hurt them but does make them rather messy and them embers can hurt non-Lycires they come into contact with." I'm surprised no one has noticed this yet, and thought it should be fixed. Thanks! 😃

reality • 17 July 2016 at 1:24 PM

@skittlejig

I never bothered to pay attention to the creature description much when I read it. Lol. X3
That is bad grammar btw.

jazzyleia • 17 July 2016 at 1:24 PM

@skittlejg
Thanks for pointing these out. They have now been fixed to be more grammatically correct.

cirrus • 17 July 2016 at 1:28 PM

@jazzyleia Thank you! You can close this topic now.