Please read! Seeking any comments and/or CC.

Deleted • 16 September 2011 at 12:27 AM

I'm looking for comments and CC on my poem...

The darkness, as it grabs me
It pulls me down below
They sew a smile to my face
But that's only for show
The people here will never see
whats going on inside
Most people, if they ever saw
They'd run away to hide
This Hell inside my mind right now
It's making me insane
But if I could just end this all..
It'd take away the pain...
I'm sorry if this makes you sad
But, really, you should know...
That if I do not end this now
This Cancer, it will grow...

gisel4356 • 16 September 2011 at 12:29 AM

Its sad ;'( (But great poem)

pipkitten • 16 September 2011 at 12:29 AM

*applauds* Lovely poem~