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thebrokenvibe • 19 November 2017 at 8:33 PM
lazyanon • 19 November 2017 at 9:43 PM
Name: NightwingAge:20 moonsGender:She-catFormer rank:WarriorFromer clan: both thunderclan and wind clanLooks: a pure black she-cat with green eyes with lean frame, very skinny and thin. Also has a scar on the right side of her neck.Kin:Wingpelt is her sister. Her parents are unknown.Past: Was first of thunderclan but fell in love with a wind clan tom named Grass whisker who died during the clan collapsing. So she changed clans to avoid conflict. Same with all but one of her kits. Her scar was from a fox attack. She wishes she could speak to Starclan.Personality: a scared mother and fearful but has hope.Mate/Crush: Grasswhisker(deceased mate)Kits: Moorkit (deceased) leap-kit (deaceased) and Boulderkit (living)Anything Special: because of the scar on her neck she sounds like a cat that got hit by a car when she yowls (kinda scary)Other:noneName: BoulderkitAge: 6 moonsGender:tomFormer rank:kitFormer clan:WindclanLooks: a grey kit with a white underbelly and white paws. And has green eyes.Kin: Nightwing (mother) Grasswhisker,Moorkit,leapkit all deceased Personality: a bit bold and still a bit curious.Past: once of windclan and doesn't remember much of it. The only one that survived. Yet to become apprentice. Barely knows that clans once existed.Mate/Crush:noneKits:noAnything special: noOther: noName:WingpeltAge:20 moonsGender:She-catFormer rank: warrior Former clan:thunder clanLooks: a big soft and fluffy pure white she-cat with amber eyes.Kin:NightwingPast: was first a warrior but then became a medicine cat apprentice and she she going to become one the half -moon after the clans collapsed.Personality:a bit forgetful but kind and quite smart.Mate/Crush:nopeKits: noAnything special: can see twice as far than the average catOther: know how to use herbs to heal/cure minor wounds and and some sickness.Is it okay to use these cat to rp with?
reality • 19 November 2017 at 9:50 PM
@thebrokenvibe I'll create these for now. Knowing me, I'll add probably too much. 😋Name: MarigoldfallAge: 28Gender: She-catFormer Rank: WarriorFormer Clan: ThunderclanLooks: A golden colored cat with blind green eyes. Her foot and tail tip is white, and there are splashes of white all around her body. Marigoldfall has several fading scars running all over her body, the most prominent is ones are the ones over her eyes.Kin*: Brightkit, Birchkit, Beechkit, and BriarkitPast*: Marigoldfall had a relatively normal life, but she fell in love with a Riverclan warrior during the gatherings as an apprentice. She was blinded in an skirmish between a loner, when she was almost a warrior. Still, they kept up their nightly meetings until they decided to end their relationships. They stopped when the roughly a few moons before the clans collapsed. She found out that she was pregnant by that time. Her kits were born about a moon after the Clans collapsed. Personality:Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): Oakfur(status unknown)Kits*: Brightkit, Birchkit, Beechkit, and BriarkitAnything Special*: NoneName: Brightkit Age: 4 moonsGender: FemaleFormer Rank: NoneFormer Clan: NoneLooks: Brightkit is an exact copy of her mother, save her blue eyes.Kin*: Marigoldfall, Birchkit, Beechkit, and BriarkitPast*: NonePersonality: Bright, positive, and clumsy. She is humble and selfless, yet naive. Tends to be quite loud sometimes. Mate/Crush*(Please Specify):Kits*: NoneAnything Special*: She can hear, see, and smell things better than most cats do. Other: --Name: BirchkitAge: 4 moonsGender: TomFormer Rank: NoneFormer Clan: NoneLooks: A light brown cat with splashes of white on his pelt. His eyes are green.Kin*: Marigoldfall, Brightkit, Beechkit, and BriarkitPast*: NonePersonality: Serious and mature. Very attentive towards everything.Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): NoneKits*: NoneAnything Special*: NoneOther: --
thebrokenvibe • 20 November 2017 at 8:53 PM
@panda9983 Accepted@lazyanon Your forms are very confusing, you say that Wingpelt was going to become a medicine cat after the Clans collapsed? Even though she wouldn't have been able to. And it seems unnecessary to have changed Boulderkits name. Not to mention, you've stated that Wingpelt had a connection to StarClan before the Clans collapsed yet she wasn't a medicine cat before then?And Boulderkit's additional ability seems a bit unnecessary, you haven't stated specific restrictions not does he have a set quota on what he can or can't sense even though poisoned food and foxes are two hugely different things, but rocks can't be sensed.
lazyanon • 20 November 2017 at 9:12 PM
Ok I'll change it and if it helps she was a warrior first (like yellowfang) then a medicine cat apprentice and she still is because she didn't get to become one before Starclan got cut off from the clans.
reality • 20 November 2017 at 10:56 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: BeechkitAge: 4 moonsGender: TomFormer Rank: NoneFormer Clan: NoneLooks: A sleek brown cat with green eyes. His paws and tail tip are all white.Kin*: Marigoldfall, Brightkit, Birchkit, and BriarkitPast*: NonePersonality: Calm and collected, but can get quite excitable when it comes to fighting.Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): NoneKits*: NoneAnything Special*: Has natural fighting instinctOther: --Name: BriarkitAge: 4 moonsGender: She-catFormer Rank: NoneFormer Clan: NoneLooks: A brown cat with splashes of white all over. Her fur is sleek and she has blue eyes.Kin*: Marigoldfall, Birchkit, Beechkit, and BrightkitPast*: NonePersonality: Compassionate and kind, she does not look at what a cat has done in the past but for what they would do in the future. Briarkit is quiet and soft spoken though, but calm and collected.Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): NoneKits*: NoneAnything Special*: She can feel the pain of other catsOther: --Name: OaktailAge: 38Gender: TomFormer Rank: DeputyFormer Clan: WindclanLooks: A tabby brown cat who is heavily scarred all over and has a torn ear. His eyes are green, which holds authority. The way he walks often shows his authority too, with his head and tail up.Kin*: All deadPast*: He was a natural born leader from the very start of his birth. He trained well as an apprentice and went on becoming a warrior. He received his very first apprentice, Grasspaw, at a very young age. He fell in love her and they planned on becoming mates. She died of greencough shortly after they became mates. At that time, he was chosen for deputy. He grieved quietly in his heart and went on becoming a good deputy. A few moons later, the clans had collapsed.Personality: As a natural born leader, he is used to authority and would often boss the other kits around. He is very wise and mature, who is used to caring for others. Oaktail is selfless and brave, more or less liking the taste of danger and adventure at times. As good natured as he is, he is prideful however, and often lacks the skill to be humble at times.Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): Grasstail(formally; deceased)Kits*: NoneAnything Special*: NoneOther: --
thebrokenvibe • 21 November 2017 at 3:24 AM
@panda9983 Accepted. I'll have to update the list later, I'm away from my laptop currently.@lazyanon If Wingpelt was never a medicine apprentice why is it stated in the form? And are Nightwing and Boulderkit with the travelling cats or are they separate? That aspect of the form is kinda strangely worded.
lazyanon • 21 November 2017 at 3:01 PM
i thought they where all traveling separate. but nightwing are with the traveling cats. and wingpelt was a warrior but then became a medicine cat apprentice and still is a medicince cat apprentice
thebrokenvibe • 21 November 2017 at 8:17 PM
@lazyanon It was stated in the rules and in the introduction how characters are travelling. And Wingpelt's past stated she was to become a medicine apprentice after the Clans collapse.
reality • 21 November 2017 at 9:15 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: StreamrippleAge: 16 moonsGender: She-catFormer Rank: Medicine Cat ApprenticeFormer Clan: RiverclanLooks: A slender, sleek silver tabby with bright blue eyes. Kin*: None livingPast*: Streamripple was born into Riverclan, with the natural gift with herbs. That made her take up the road of a medicine cat apprentice. After the clans collapsed, she joined the traveling cats. Her mentor's whereabouts are unknown.Personality: Compassionate, gentle, and shy. She is patient and calm, and serious about her former job. Any cat that she let die under her care she blames herself for not doing a better job. Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): NoneKits*: NoneAnything Special*: --Other: NoneName: PineshadeAge: 29 moonsGender: TomFormer Rank: WarriorFormer Clan: ShadowclanLooks: A dark brown tabby with sharp green eyes. He has a long scar running from his neck to the side of his body, which stops halfway.Kin*: NonePast*: Normal, his scar was from a fox attack.Personality: Quiet and aloof. Prefers to be alone most of the time, a little ill tempered. Mate/Crush*(Please Specify): Cedarshadow(formally; deceased)Kits*: NoneAnything Special*: -- Other: None
thebrokenvibe • 21 November 2017 at 10:55 PM
@panda9983 Accepted. First thread should be updated.
lazyanon • 22 November 2017 at 6:40 AM
Ok I think I get it now. I'm going to add wingpelt's other or past that knows how to use herbs to heal so everything makes more sense but she'll be a warrior.