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thebrokenvibe • 24 November 2017 at 3:54 PM
lazyanon • 26 November 2017 at 3:00 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: NightwingAge: 20 moonsGender: She-catRank: WarriorLooks: a pure black she-cat with green eyes with a lean frame, very skinny and thin. Also has a scar on the right side of her neck.Kin*: Wingpelt is her sister. Her parents are unknown.Kits*: noneMate/Crush*(Please specify):Past: Her parents are rouges and left her with the clan when she was a kit. Her scar was from a fox attack. Personality: A tad shy. easy to persuade if it's for the better overall. can be very blunt sometimes.Anything Special*: because of the scar on her neck she sounds like a cat that got hit by a car when she screams (kinda scary)Other*:Name: WingpeltAge: 20 moonsGender: She-catRank: Medicine catLooks: a pure white she-cat that is big, soft and fluffy with amber eyes.Kin*: Nightwing.Kits*: noneMate/Crush*(Please specify): Nope!Past: Her parents are both rouges and left wing and night when they where 3 moons old.Personality: a tad forgetful, clam, kind, but stubbornAnything Special*: none.Other*: holds the nickname Fluffpelt.
animalliterature • 26 November 2017 at 7:32 PM
Name: SilkheartAge: 20 moonsGender: She-catRank: Medicine CatLooks: A silver she-cat, light gray spots on head and face, and most likely other places. (You could say she looks like a different version of Snowfur from Bluestar's Prophecy.) Light blue eyes, sleekly pelted. Very thin. (Due to under-eating.) Has a scar on shoulder and a small scar on left paw.Kin: Coal (father, deceased.), Jay (mother, deceased.), Nightfang (half-brother) Kits: NoneMate/Crush: None, really. She never intended to mate, anyways.Past: Coal and Jay had one day disappeared, leaving their four-moon-old kit, Stream, to survive alone. She fumbled around for days, and, when on the brink of death, stumbled into BorealClan's camp. There she grew, receiving her full name and obliging to protect their Clan as a medicine cat. Personality: Slightly socially awkward, shy, uneasy around others usually. Very kind and obedient, though can be stubborn around cats she is comfortable with.Anything special: She can see spirits (only after their death, sometimes in dreams that haunt her memories), this causes her to be "socially awkward," flitting around after a cat dies near her (whenever that happens) and occasionally gets snappy when a cat is on the brink of death.Other: Nothing else to tell.Name: ShadeAge: 24 moonsGender: TomRank: LonerLooks: A black tabby with dark gray stripes along back. One amber eye on left side and a dark blue one on the other, dark brown, muddy-like fore-paws and stone-colored hind paws. A large gash across the right shoulder, and a nicked right ear. Two large scars above the left eye, and another gash on the left side of the cheek. A scar near the right side of his chest, also. He has a lean and powerful body.Kin: Brook (sister, deceased), Creekflower (sister, living) Stoneheart (father, deceased), Night (mother, deceased)Kits: NoneMate/Crush: Silkheart (crush, one of the medicine cats of BorealClan.)Past: Shade sighed and glanced back over his shoulder at his younger sister and father as he left with his mother and older sister. It was half a moon before he would've been made an apprentice, and he would've liked to spend more time with the rest of his kin. But now he had had to make a choice: live a full life in BorealClan, where he never felt truly useful, or leave the Clan and never look back as he began a new life. Only three moons later, a severe coldness swept over the loners' territory. A famine began, where all cats searched day and night for any sign of prey. Shade had learned that in BorealClan's territory no famine had started quite yet, but it was too late to tell his kin. He found Brook and his mother dead as he came back to their makeshift den. Shade lived the rest of his life officially as a loner, nobody to share his prey with, as he secretly slipped through the shadows, hunting and sleeping on the border of BorealClan. There he waited as he hunted slightly for a gossiping patrol to tell him his daily news. Some days there was never gossip, so he occasionally went to check on the other loners. He had learned their favorite hiding, hunting, and den spots, so it was quite easy to locate them. He had also learned their scents, though many had discovered how to hide their own scents, so he had to rely on more than that. When there was no gossip, he always learned how the famine was doing back in the loners' territory. It gradually began to rise and prey began to come out of their dens, but then, in the middle of Warm Suns, it dropped harshly. Shade watched in dismay as cats began to die in starvation, and he began to grow more attached to waiting for a BorealClan patrol than seeing death occur in his old territory. Some days he actually got some good gossip, others, the gossip wasn't very important. Some days he dreaded the memory of his sister and father, and one day he got a pawful of news. From this day on he listens keenly for any mention of his sister.Personality: Stealthy, deceptive, cunning, and intelligent. Hardly speaks, and is a very keen and patient listener.Anything special: Not much.Other: Nothing else to tell.Name: CreekflowerAge: 24 moonsGender: She-catRank: Queen (expecting)Looks: A stone-gray she-cat with muddy brown paws, light blue eyes and a fairly long, striped tail. Spotted on back and stomach, also along the forehead and muzzle, two stripes running down the back of her head to her tail, and a single stripe running down her stomach. (All stripes and spots are black.) A sleek pelt and a lean body, a scar on her muzzle and three small scars on her chest.Kin: Brook (sister, deceased.), Shade (brother, living.), Stoneheart (father, deceased.), Night (mother, deceased.)Kits: Unknown.Mate/Crush: Unknown.Past: Creekkit pressed closer to her father and watched as the rest of her kin left the Clan. She envied this moment, but she was glad of her decision. A loner life just wasn't meant for her. Sure, she had felt forgotten when their parents fought over whether or not to take the kits to become loners or to stay with the Clan, but that was their mistake, not her's. She wasn't her parents, and she didn't intend to follow in their paw-steps, either. Once the time came, Creekkit was apprenticed, and learned under the mentoring of her father. She became a very exceptional warrior, and vowed to protect her Clan with all her might. Only a few moons after her warrior ceremony, Stoneheart fell ill of greencough and passed away. During that period of time, Creekflower insisted she stay with her father, though the medicine cats advised and pleaded against it, afraid she would catch the deadly disease, as well. For a while Creekflower did indeed catch greencough, but she soon recovered and continued her duties as a warrior of BorealClan. One day she came back from a hunting patrol alone with no prey, and the medicine cats discovered she was now expecting. She was sent to sleep with the kits and other queens in the nursery, though she had disagreed many times and told them that she could care for herself. Personality: Kind and generous, though can get snappy at times. Has a sarcastic humor, and always seems to know how to cheer others up.Anything special: Nope.Other: Not really much more.
thebrokenvibe • 26 November 2017 at 8:06 PM
@fluffy-birdy-flower @animallitterature Ash -Paws is not a proper warrior name, nor would Cloud be a proper Clan name. In addition, fluffy, your form is missing something please re-read all the rules.@lazyanon Please re-read the rules, your forms are missing something. And I'm kind of confused as to how a scar can disfigure a throat severely and only when screaming. If it was disfigured she would have general trouble speaking.
animalliterature • 27 November 2017 at 3:04 PM
Do you mean Ashpaws as in "Ash -Paws" or the name in general? Just asking to help understand.
thebrokenvibe • 27 November 2017 at 3:32 PM
@animalliterature in both senses, the separating the words and adding a hyphen is unnecessary, and Ashpaws isn't a proper warrior name. That was why I pinged you as well.
animalliterature • 27 November 2017 at 3:41 PM
Okay I understand.
thebrokenvibe • 27 November 2017 at 9:02 PM
@animalliterature BorealClan doesn't discriminate based on a cats origins, it's both stated in the Code, and is mentioned as one of the first important notes. So it wouldn't make sense for Shade to have been rejected because of his origins.
animalliterature • 28 November 2017 at 7:25 AM
Right. I forgot. Thanks.
reality • 28 November 2017 at 8:29 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: ShyheartAge: 28Gender: She-catRank: DeputyLooks: A fluffy light brown tabby with warm brown eyes. She has several scars running all over her body. Kin*: SmokefootKits*: NoneMate/Crush*(Please specify): NonePast: Shyheart was born to two warriors, Mudclaw and Ambershade. Her father greatly disliked her, and as a result, he was always aggressive towards her. Most of her scars that she bore were from him. So she decided to become a medicine cat apprentice. But she found out that it wasn't her style so she switched and became a warrior. She was given her very first apprentice, Fawnpaw after a while. Fawnpaw died after becoming Fawnleap, which made her pretty miserable for a while. After she got over it, she was nominated to deputy.Personality: Gentle, kind, and compassionate, Shyheart often looks out for everyone. She is very welcoming, but shy. Even if she got over her shyness, she still isn't really loud.She is brave and selfless. Anything Special*: She has a natural motherly instinct when and when feels the need to protect a cat, Shyheart would often leap into the way of harm to protect others.Other*: None
thebrokenvibe • 30 November 2017 at 4:51 AM
@panda9983 Accepted.@animalliterature Creekflower and Shade are accepted, although there's a lot wrong with Shade's past, specifically his living on Clan territory and not being found, and him spying on the Clan.
animalliterature • 30 November 2017 at 7:06 AM
Okay, I'll change it later. (Today, hopefully, if I have time.)What am I saying I have way too much time on my hands.
thebrokenvibe • 2 December 2017 at 3:00 AM
@animalliterature Shade's now accepted.I'll probably make the RP thread once we get another person, and ideally a few more warriors.
theelevatorcat • 2 December 2017 at 9:25 PM
@thebrokenvibeCould I join?Name: BlacksongAge: 23 moonsGender: FemaleRank: WarriorLooks: Pure black with yellow eyes. She has multiple scars all over her body (see past).Kin*: Kits*:Mate/Crush*(Please specify):Past: The offspring of a white kitty-pet (named Snowfall) and a black stray (who didn’t have a name, but he called himself Black.). The owners didn’t want a black cat, so they abandoned her. She has been envolved with a rogue clan, and has secrets about herself. (I know BorealClan doesn’t live near twolegs, but she traveled ALOT awhile she was “lost”)Personality: Snappish. She is quick to anger and very competitive. She doesn’t trust anyone fully, after her time with the rogues, and is quick to blame. She only joined BorealClan because she was sick of being alone and helpless. To this day, she still doesn’t fully trust all of BorealClan’s members. She does have a soft spot for kits, though.Anything Special*: She, oddly, has an instinct to automatically accept any challenge, even if it is unreasonable.Other*: Blacksong is not very strong or muscly, but she is extremely quick and agile.
thebrokenvibe • 3 December 2017 at 12:36 AM
@theelevatorcat Your character is missing something, and 8 years is 96 moons, which is around the age of some of the oldest elders in a Clan, not a warrior.
theelevatorcat • 3 December 2017 at 9:36 AM
@thebrokenvibeOops, sorry ^^ fixed!
thebrokenvibe • 6 December 2017 at 7:31 PM
@theelevatorcat So sorry for such a late reply, but accepted.All we need is at least two more warriors so we can actually get patrols and such done, and we can begin.
theelevatorcat • 6 December 2017 at 9:01 PM
@ThebrokenvibeHow about another character then? 😃Name: BerryfaceAge: 29 moonsGender: Male Rank: WarriorLooks: tan with a beige stripe running down his back. His face has a design similar to a cheetah’s (those black tear marks)Kin*: Rainlight (father) Poppyeye (mother)Kits*:Mate/Crush*(Please specify): he has a bit of a crush on Blacksong, but very subtle.Past: Berryface has lived his whole life in BorealClan, it is all he has ever known. He mourns everyday over his parents after they died in a fox attack.Personality: he is very joyful and easygoing, but that might have something to do with how he still mourns over his parents (died in a fox attack while on patrol) and uses his bubbly personality to mask his pain. He, however, can also be stone cold and arrogant, but only during battle or under pressure. Berryface can also be ignorant and stubborn, but is always looking to cheer you up when you are down.Anything Special*:Other*:
animalliterature • 7 December 2017 at 3:23 PM
I'm gonna make another tom for no reason. Well... maybe for a reason. I don't know xDName: NightfangAge: 17 moonsGender: TomRank: WarriorLooks: He's a solid black turkish angora with deep amber eyes, much like those of an owl's, and has a large gash on his right shoulder. He has a large scar coating his left eye, which causes many allergic effects during the Mixed Suns, including swelling and temporary blindness.Kin: Coal (father, deceased), Lark (mother, deceased), Silkheart (half-sister, living)Kits: ???Mate/Crush: ???Past: Crow was born to two rogues named Coal and Lark. One day, when he was around the age of an apprentice, he wandered past the den while Coal was hunting and Lark was asleep. A while after he escaped, he saw an old body, most likely around two moons older than him. He had never forgotten that moment, and once he got back from the event, his father had beat him. He had had cuts for a quarter moon from that beating, and from then on Lark never trusted Coal with Crow. Coal was harsh with his kin from then on, but nonetheless, he hunted for them and stayed in the den with them, though Crow couldn't see why. He never saw his parents again after a long, enduring fight, and assumed solemnly that they had abandoned him. For a moon he wandered around, catching prey whenever he had the chance. One day he was caught by a BorealClan patrol and taken into the Clan. A few moons after his warrior ceremony, he took another warrior around older than him out on a border patrol. He hadn't meant to do what he did that day, and he half regretted it. But he soon got over it, and one day, while out on a border patrol, was whipped into shape by an older rogue. He had killed the rogue in the end, and now he avoids cats outside the Clan, though he used to be one himself.Personality: Nightfang is a very rough cat when it comes to battle, and he is merciless whenever it comes to a fight to the death. Though he used to be a rogue himself, he avoids other rogues and loners, and is quite harsh to them whenever alone. He usually tends to stick to the Code other than that, and some think he's mute with how little he talks in the Clan. Since he barely speaks anymore, it is hard to unmask his personality.Anything Special: Nope.Other: None
thebrokenvibe • 7 December 2017 at 6:47 PM
@animalliterature You would need to state who his half sibling is regardless of if he knows them or not, similar to how I listed Bonepaw and Blazepaw's relation to Flarestar despite them not knowing their related. And, Nightfang is 30 moons, and the cat he's supposed to be related to is 20, so if he was 6 when he saw Jay's body, that would mean Silkheart needs to be at least 40 moons. Plus, according to Silkheart's past, her parents abandoned her, so they wouldn't know she made it to BorealClan, especially if Coal killed Jay to take on a new mate.@theelevatorcat Accepted. I'll go add him to the listing.
animalliterature • 7 December 2017 at 6:49 PM
Wow somehow I'm always the one making mistakes here I need to brush up and think straight for once.By the way a cat's period of expecting is around two moons and the new mother would have to, um... be expecting for him to be born.What I do my research on cattos.
thebrokenvibe • 7 December 2017 at 9:03 PM
@animalliterature Silkheart's form would need to be edited as well to adapt to Nightfang. As well, double check the first portion of Nightfang's forms, a few things don't add up. Also, there's a four moon difference between Silkheart and Nightfang, meaning that Coal wasn't in Silkheart's life when she was a kit if he was busy being with Nightfang.
animalliterature • 8 December 2017 at 5:26 PM
Okay changed a few things and I hope I got it right this time. By the way he gets his turkish angora species from Lark.
reality • 9 December 2017 at 4:48 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: SmokefootAge: 28 moonsGender: TomRank: RogueLooks: A gray tabby with cold brown eyes. He has several scars running over him. Kin*: ShyheartKits*: NoneMate/Crush*(Please specify): NonePast: He was born to two warriors, Mudclaw and Ambershade. His father Mudclaw always looked after him, but never his sister. As a result, Ambershade passed on her gentle nature to his sister while Mudclaw rubbed off him, making him rather hostile. He worked hard as an apprentice to make his father proud, and had his ceremony earlier than others. After a few moons, he got his first apprentice. A few moons passed and Shyheart also got an apprentice. He was aiming for the deputy position, but his sister got it instead. As a result he disappeared from the clan, vowing to get the position that was rightfully his.Personality: Gruff, harsh, and proud, he will do whatever it takes to become leader. Deceptive and clever, he is patient in doing anything that'll get him into the position as a leader. Anything Special*: He trained himself hard, so he is a good fighter.Other*: He kept his name, but he calls himself Ash around those who knows him.
thebrokenvibe • 11 December 2017 at 4:42 PM
@panda9983 @animalliterature Both are accepted. I'm going to have to add them up once I am no longer in mobile. The RP thread will be up at a later point as well, so be on the watch for that.
reality • 12 December 2017 at 8:12 PM
@thebrokenvibeName: SmallpawAge: 6Gender: She-catRank: ApprenticeLooks: A small white cat with leaf green eyes.Kin*: Littlepaw (brother)Kits*:Mate/Crush*(Please specify):Past: Smallpaw was a loner's kit, accepted into the clan when she was abandoned on the doorsteps of BorealClan. Personality: Extremely positive and happy, she is very hyper. Quite a chatterbox, she often gets into trouble for not paying attention. Anything Special*: She's faster than most cats due to her size.Other*: Parents are Cloud and Rain.Name: LittlepawAge: 6 moonsGender: TomRank: ApprenticeLooks: A small light gray cat with bright green eyes.Kin*: Smallpaw (sister)Kits*:Mate/Crush*(Please specify):Past: Born as a loner's kit, he was accepted into BorealClan when his parents left him on the doorsteps of the clan.Personality: Quiet, serious, and mature. He is a quick learner and is socially awkward. Anything Special*: He is fast due to his small size.Other*: Parents are Cloud and Rain
thebrokenvibe • 12 December 2017 at 8:51 PM
@panda9983 Your forms are missing something.
reality • 12 December 2017 at 9:00 PM
@thebrokenvibeEdited.
thebrokenvibe • 12 December 2017 at 10:10 PM
@panda9983 All good, I'll be editing them into the ranks very soon.