Poetry...? Tell me how good it is >_<

angel_star • 22 September 2011 at 11:33 AM

Right now, I've been obsessed with writing poetry, I can't help it, but then I'm getting relly bored of no one commenting on deviantart, so can you? Tell ze truth, I'm not the type to mind~

HOPE
I'm going to believe
Cling onto it.
That little speck of light shining
Through the black, inky night.

I'm going to keep living,
I might find something
Something called Hope.

FREEDOM
Flying in clear skies
A free creature's emotions
Dancing its heart out

ROSE
The thorns, the blood, slowly drip,
It's petals, a flurry of blood red, blooms,
The waves of these beautiful monsters
Surround you, as you find your way
Through that thorny maze.

whimsical • 22 September 2011 at 11:41 AM

You are a truly good poet. People just can't be bothered to tell you how good it is! 😋

angel_star • 22 September 2011 at 12:03 PM

@whimsical
thanks~ lolz

maineen • 22 September 2011 at 1:43 PM

it good😊

lily- • 22 September 2011 at 1:45 PM

@angel_star
Nice poems😊

maineen • 22 September 2011 at 1:46 PM

I like the rose one the most😊

angel_star • 23 September 2011 at 2:56 AM

@maineen
thanks~
ya, the rose one is porbably the best out of those~

@lily-
thanks!

whitefall • 23 September 2011 at 3:36 PM

@metaphor

;D

whispers • 23 September 2011 at 3:38 PM

@angel_star
I LOVE HOPE!

pizza5pizza5 • 23 September 2011 at 3:41 PM

@angel_star

You entered in this, right?

http://www.eggcave.com/forums/topic/6626

If not, you TOTALLY SHOULD! Your an amazing poet!

angel_star • 23 September 2011 at 10:16 PM

@whispers
thanks!~

@pizza5pizza5
ya, I think I did, is hope part of life's situation?

thanks!

pizza5pizza5 • 24 September 2011 at 9:59 AM

@angel_star

Yes, sure!

Just PM me it~

angel_star • 24 September 2011 at 9:12 PM

@pizza5pizza5

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