Poem: Lonely

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 10:51 AM

I'm a light,
With thousands of others around me,
But suddenly,
They dive away,
Fly away,
Deep in the sea or high in the sky,
But i,
I still shine,
With only a bit of hope left...

Rate pleas? =^)

Deleted • 24 September 2011 at 10:51 AM

Out of 10? 10~!

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 10:54 AM

@Bluegirl80
Yay =^D

Deleted • 24 September 2011 at 10:54 AM

@miomar 8D

balletninja • 24 September 2011 at 10:56 AM

7/10 Pretty good for our age.

Just missing the sincerity.

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 10:56 AM

@Bluegirl80
Things like this randomly pop up in my head when i have certain feelings =^)

Deleted • 24 September 2011 at 10:58 AM

@miomar XDDD Cool.

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 10:59 AM

@avelaingia
Thanks =^D

@Balletninja
Hm...

pizza5pizza5 • 24 September 2011 at 11:00 AM

@miomar

8.5/10

Awesome 😃

balletninja • 24 September 2011 at 11:01 AM

@miomar Missing the warmth.

Or being able to relate to it, don't be mad, there is always room for improvement. But don't worry about it, keep practicing and it will get better.

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 11:02 AM

@Pizza5pizza5
Okay =^)

morgana • 24 September 2011 at 11:24 AM

@miomar I really like it. 9.5/10
(always room to improve). 😊

miomar • 24 September 2011 at 11:25 AM

@Morgana
Yeah =^)