Rate my Song: Numba 2!

whispers • 29 September 2011 at 7:24 AM

1= Yuck! *THROWS UP*
2= EH..
3= GOOD
4= GREAT
5= PURE EPICNESS

Only 1st verse and 1st Chorus 😉


Fame

Thought the famous life
Was a good life
Thought it was easy
Easy peasy, lemon squeezy
Turns out, it is hard
Harder than my life before
Seems like a war, Seems like a war

Chorus:
Not gonna let the fame take my down
Not gonna let it pull me down
Not gonna let it tear me
Not gonna let it break me
Not gonna let hide me from the truth
(Hide me from you!)
I'm not letting the fame,
Take over me!

Deleted • 29 September 2011 at 7:26 AM

@whispers I rate it 4 and a half 😉 I like it so what are you going to do with it?

whispers • 29 September 2011 at 7:34 AM

@banana
Store it in teh shoebox of songs I have O.o
I have nothing to do with these songs except write them right now xD

whitefall • 29 September 2011 at 3:57 PM

3. ;D

I like everythin gbut the easy peasy lemon squeezy part. xD
You set a particular tone, but then that ruined it. 😸

whispers • 30 September 2011 at 5:23 PM

Bump!
@whitefall
I was bored, thanks for the suggestion 😉

Deleted • 30 September 2011 at 5:30 PM

3. I agree with @whitefall about the lemon part. Really? Aside for that it's pretty okay. 😊

whispers • 30 September 2011 at 6:02 PM

XD
I was really bored, and my sister wouldn't stop saying that AFTER everything she did >.<

Deleted • 10 October 2011 at 8:21 PM

Irate it 4!😸

hayz • 10 October 2011 at 8:26 PM

4 1/2 ^o^
*bump*

katrinafugs • 11 October 2011 at 7:05 PM

chourus is 4

other is 2 but i liked it ^__^ honesty is the best policy

Deleted • 11 October 2011 at 7:09 PM

hmm 2.75

I dont like how in the chorus the last words every two lines were the same. I like something like:


How could you leave me here?
Just to figure out?
What my life should be?
What its all about?
How could you just leave?
Me in the rain?
Still gotta life,
thats worth livin.

carnatate • 11 October 2011 at 7:10 PM

4.5/5 😊