Anyone want to be my Editor?

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 7:45 PM

So I am writing a fan fiction, for Spirited Away. No, not one of those lame one where it talks about having babies and lame stuff. Or matching the main character up with someone gross, or even taking the characters and putting them in space or whatever. I mean a legit one, one that might actually fit into the story line had there been a Spirited Away 2.

So if you are interested post on here or Pm me and I will fill you in on the story line. I need another person to help my story be more appealing to others. Or even brainstorm and help create new elements.

It is basically the catching up with Chihiro like 5 years later, yes she will be going back into the spirit world, and yes, you will get some credit! But please keep in mind this is for fun, I am not paying you or giving you Egg cave stuff for it!

lizardfeather • 4 October 2011 at 7:50 PM

Oooh I could read it add make comments (can't say I'd know the story line though xD) but you're doing this through PM here right? 😸

Deleted • 4 October 2011 at 7:51 PM

I will be your editor😸 I saw Spirited Away, and I LOVED it❤️ Also, I have some knowledge on editing(at least I'm pretty sure I'm editing Reincarnation like a proper editor...) Anyways, I'll be glad to be an editor for free^^

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 7:52 PM

@lizardfeather It is on youtube you should watch it, it would help fill you in and it is a good movie anyways. But yeah, sorta. This thread works too, for most of it!

bumblebee13_7 • 4 October 2011 at 7:55 PM

@balletninja I could help 😊 Will Chihiro meet Haku again?

Deleted • 4 October 2011 at 7:55 PM

@balletninja Bump!~😸
Will Ubabba be back?

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 7:56 PM

@icicle_9510 I might get a few editors for a few stories, one for my Inuyasha fan fiction, and one for my pokemon one also!

@bumblebee13_7 It wouldn't be a very good story if they didn't xD

bumblebee13_7 • 4 October 2011 at 7:57 PM

@balletninja So true 😊 I nearly cried when they split up in the movie 😊

Deleted • 4 October 2011 at 8:00 PM

@balletninja oooh, yay!^^ And If you need, I can definitely help with the Pokemon one xD I know almost all of the Pokemon, just a little shaky with the Unova, and a little, very little bit iffy with the Hoen region, but say the name of the Pokemon, and I will know exactly who they are^^ Oh and do you have any new characters? also, start it off with an interesting prologue if you can, it'll get the reader's attention right away, and attract them to keep reading on;)

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 8:04 PM

@icicle_9510 I will Pm what I have so far, kinda starts out slow, but it is hard to start out fast after so many questions to be answered.

Deleted • 4 October 2011 at 8:10 PM

@balletninja ok, and yeah, I mean don't be like fast and just put the answers to every single question, but include some details, and maybe leave one or two questions unanswered in the prologue that you answer near the end of the book, or a piece from the book you will continue at the end. Like so:
(Excerpt from a prologue)
Hehuhehuhehuh....
Lori continued to run as fast as she could, panting. Her lungs screamed for air that they could not take in, her legs screamed for mercy. But she couldn't stop running...or else....IT would get her.
Lori ducked behind a large gnarly oak tree.
'I think I finally escaped from them....' she thought, sighing with relief.
"Lori dearie, you can never escape from US...."
A cold hand gripped Lori's throat, and she twisted in agony.
'I'm dying' She thought, choking back salty tears.
'I'm dying.....'
(End of book)
well....I think I won't write it, because now I've got my own little story line to write xD

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 8:14 PM

@icicle_9510 I have one big question I want to remain unanswered. So I am kinda trying to answer everything so I can leave that open 😊

Deleted • 4 October 2011 at 8:23 PM

@balletninja very well, I'm sure that will also leave the readers biting their lip, wondering where it will lead them😊 Like when you're reading a book, and you just absolutely know something is missing, and when the climax hits, it finally crashes into your senses^^ Btw- pmed you;)

lizardfeather • 4 October 2011 at 9:49 PM

@balletninja Ooh cool ok I'll check it out 😸

2elle2 • 4 October 2011 at 9:52 PM

I loved Spirted Away.....

ladybugheart • 4 October 2011 at 10:12 PM

Ooh, could you PM it to me? 😸

angel_star • 4 October 2011 at 10:34 PM

@balletninja

woah.... Please. Show. <Me. >>>>_<<<<

SPIRITED.

AWAY.

balletninja • 4 October 2011 at 11:08 PM

Will doooo! When I am done with the first chapter I will let people help me edit it, as many people as we can get! But I will only tell 1-2 people the complete plot as to keep you guys excited when reading it!

linpug • 4 October 2011 at 11:16 PM

Woah, i didn't know this many people watched it. o_e

icymuffin • 4 October 2011 at 11:30 PM

It was like, one of the best movies EVER. 😃
How could people possibly resist watching it? Got really really good reviews you know x]


@balletninja
You're gonna get really high expectations for the fanfic, if you know what I mean... ^^

balletninja • 8 October 2011 at 10:09 AM

@icymuffin Yeah, I have read my share of good fanfictions. And in general I am a swell writer. I should live, I just have to keep it filled with random acts of imagination. Like the movie was, we all understand that movie because we are all like Chihiro. I feel like I WAS Chihiro when I was little, just because that is exactly how I acted and still act. So you know, gotta relate to the story.