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Deleted • 7 October 2011 at 5:43 PM

The cold air seeped in between the cracks of the hut. Mylo was huddled deep in his nest of cover.
"Ai, a year the say. ONE year, one blasted year on this island,"he grumbled to himself," complete morons sendin' me ter this cold hearted land"
He then slowly got up and shuffled across the floor, his bare feet retracting against the cold stone.
"SCRAH SCRAH," a lare bird cried as it barrled through the open door.
"Bloody...," Mylo started, but never finished his sentence as the terrible bird fell upon him, it's sharp yellow beak slicing his throat. Bloody indead, the life flowed out and the bird merely preened its feathers.

lola622f • 7 October 2011 at 5:45 PM

o.o

Deleted • 7 October 2011 at 5:47 PM

@lola622f is this interesting or is the suspense killing you on what's going to happen next.

lola622f • 7 October 2011 at 5:48 PM

It's interesting but a bit too violent for me(I'm not that violent). I love your writing.

Deleted • 7 October 2011 at 5:55 PM

@lola622f don't worry, there's going to be nice ending